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Crimson Saviour: Harmonious Killer

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# Synopsis Seventeen-year-old Yog “Ketu” Sharma has always felt the pulse of Shantavan in his veins. Broad-shouldered, intelligent, and armed with little more than a pen tucked behind his ear and a ceremonial talwar at his hip, he dreams of something far greater than college admissions. When the village school’s Innovation Council challenges him to propose a project, Ketu unveils “Shantavan Lanterns”—solar-powered lights built by villagers, for villagers, that promise to banish kerosene fumes and illuminate long-forgotten hopes. As Ketu and his friends—Jiya the dubiously fearless engineer, Rahul the meticulous tinker, and Meera the grant-hunting strategist—race to turn prototype into reality, they must navigate skeptical elders, bureaucratic red tape, and the ever-present burden of tradition. Each soldered circuit and crowdfunding milestone ignites fresh ambition, forging unexpected alliances and testing loyalties. Against a backdrop of terracotta rooftops and mango-scented evenings, Ketu discovers that true heroism isn’t born from flashy deeds but from the quiet conviction to serve one’s own. “Crimson Saviour” is a stirring tale of courage, community, and the singular spark that can awaken an entire village.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter One — Spark in the Rain

They said it would be a small thing. A lamp. A kindness. A village wouldn't reorganize because of a single bulb.

They were wrong.

Ketu ran with the crate bouncing on the back of his bicycle, rain carving clean lines down his face. Tin roofs spat rivers, and the lane smelled like wet earth and burnt matchsticks. The prototype thudded against the crate's wood each time he hit a pothole; inside, the panel was wrapped in plastic, the battery in foam. He could feel the lamp's nervous hum as if it were a live thing.

At the school courtyard, under the mango tree, a crowd had already gathered—students in damp uniforms, a few elders wrapped in shawls, the Mukhiya with his trademark white kurta and a face that had never learned to smile. Mrs. Chandrika Rao stood on the dais, her braid a white stripe in the gray morning. Her voice cut through the rain with the authority of a bell.

"Eleventh Innovation Council," she announced. "Proposals that will change Shantavan. Whoever fails will be recorded in our register." A pause, the promise of shame hanging heavy. "Who will speak first?"

Ketu's chest hammered like a drum. He could have waited—let someone else present the safe, respectable idea. But the crate at his back felt suddenly enormous, like a responsibility that would not be shifted.

He stepped forward.

"Madam," he said, voice steady though his knees shook. "Project Shantavan Lanterns. Solar-powered lamps for every home. We train villagers to assemble, we use recycled batteries—no kerosene. Light for study, for work, for dignity."

Murmurs. Mrs. Rao's eyes softened fractionally. Mukhiya Das's jaw tightened.

"You sound like a charity pamphlet," Mukhiya Das said. "Explain the cost."

Ketu swallowed. "Two hundred fifty rupees in parts, sixty rupees labor, three years warranty if we teach maintenance. We crowd-fund the seed. We keep it local."

An old man in the front—Mr. Patil, who still smelled faintly of chalk—pushed his glasses up. "And repairs? Who will teach them electronics?"

"We will," Ketu said. "I—" He reached for the crate, fingers slick, and felt the crate's lid slip. The edge struck the stairs with a dry crack. A collective intake of breath—then laughter, the cruel sort that bubbles from a crowd smelling entertainment. Someone near the back shouted, "Who's going to teach a bunch of goat-herders to solder?"

Ketu felt a hot color crawl up his neck. For one ridiculous second he saw himself small and ridiculous under the mango leaves. Then he remembered Meera's ledger, Jiya's thumbs stained with flux, the thirty thousand comments on his solar lamp tutorials. He tightened his jaw.

"Watch," he said. The words surprised him with their quiet force.

They moved to Room 209. The bell clanged, students fell into rows, and Ketu set the crate on the old wooden desk, palms damp on the grain. He flipped the lid.

Inside: neat stacks of panels, battery packs taped like precious stones, a half-assembled lamp with copper glinting in the dim light. He lifted it as if it might fly. The class fell silent in a way that made the hair on his forearms prickle.

"One lantern demonstration," he told them. "If it fails, I'll accept whatever the council decides."

Mukhiya Das's eyes narrowed. "Three days' work to prove it, or we stop you now."

"Three days," Ketu agreed.

They worked until the sun slid out of the sky somewhere behind rain-clouds that still threatened. Rahul soldered with hands that trembled once, then steadied. Jiya filmed a five-minute clip for donors with her phone balanced on a stack of notebooks. Meera calculated margins on a torn page. Sweat mixed with solder flux, the air tasted metallic and hopeful.

At last, Ketu clipped the last connection. He held the lamp like a promise and flicked the switch.

For an instant the LED refused. The boys leaned forward, a hundred small deaths of hope inhaled. Then the lamp sighed into life—cool, pale light that cut the gloom and made the chalk dust sparkle like stars. A cheer burst from some throat, then another. Even Mukhiya Das' mouth softened a fraction.

A woman at the edge of the crowd started to cry. Mr. Patil dabbed at his eyes with the corner of his sari. The courtyard filled with small, fragile joy.

Ketu let himself exhale. Relief drained through him like rainwater through clay.

He hadn't seen Suresh move until he was close enough to spit. The kerosene trader stood at the edge of the crowd, oilcloth hood clinging to his shoulders. Where the light touched him, shadows seemed to crawl away and reveal the worry etched into his face: sweat, a stubborn grief that lived behind his eyes.

"Free lights," Suresh said, loud enough for everyone to hear. "So you'll throw away my livelihood? What about the men who sell oil? Who will feed their children?"

A hush. Mukhiya Das' gaze flicked between Ketu and Suresh as if measuring a balance.

Ketu ducked the chest-blow of guilt. "We teach, we pay for parts. No one loses their job. We'll train tradespeople in maintenance—more work, not less."

Suresh's laugh was a dry leaf. "Words. You don't know the markets. You don't know—" He stepped forward so close Ketu could smell kerosene on his sleeve. "If these lights fail in monsoon, it won't be your head on the guillotine. It will be ours."

That single sentence landed with the weight of a stone. Someone in the crowd hissed. Mrs. Rao cleared her throat, but didn't speak.

Ketu felt a cold fist of fear knot his gut. Monsoon came next week. If the lamp leaked, if water found the batteries, then every promise, every donor rupee, every proud video would turn into a pile of rotten faith. The village would mock him. His parents would lose face. The Mukhiya would be proven right.

He shouldn't have brought a prototype not fully sealed. He should have waited, tested in controlled conditions, not in front of a crowd hungry for proof.

But there was no turning back. He'd already promised.

That night the workshop smelled of resin and prayer. They sealed housings with a trembling concentration, measured gaskets to fractions of a millimeter, layered epoxy like an extra skin. Ketu's hands shook as he tightened screws. He thought of his mother's hands, callused from kneading dough; of the pen behind his ear; of the old talwar his father kept in a corner—useless in a world of circuits, but a reminder that sometimes defense wore a gentler face.

Midnight came and the rain began in earnest. Ketu and the team loaded twenty lamps into a rickety cart and pedaled toward Meera's compound for the first install. Wind licked at the lamps like curious tongues. Hope felt kinetic, so fragile it could be broken by a loose wire.

They mounted the first lamp on a bamboo pole outside Meera's house. Ketu climbed to tighten the last bolt, rain soaking through his kurta. He reached to lock the panel at a 20-degree tilt so it would shed rain and catch the sun tomorrow. Fingers numb, he secured the last clip.

"Ready," Rahul called from below. "Switch."

Ketu's hand hovered. He thought of Suresh's voice, of Mukhiya Das' measured doubt, of every donor name written on their crowdfunding page. He thought of whether a single light could change a life.

He flipped the switch.

For a second the lamp flared—the world bright with possibility—and then, with a sound like a throat closing, it died.

A breath of silence, the village holding its.

Ketu's throat went dry. He climbed down and checked the wiring. The connections were tight. The gasket sealed. The battery beeped as if alive. He flicked the switch again. The lamp pulsed, a hiccup of light—and went out.

"Maybe it's the connector," Jiya said, voice thin. She tugged on the cable. Nothing.

Ketu felt a hand on his shoulder—an old hand, gravelly with work. He turned. Mukhiya Das looked at him with an expression that could be pity or threat. "Three days, boy," he said quietly. "Prove it's not a toy."

Ketu opened his mouth to agree—and then Rahul's shout cut through the rain.

"Someone's cut the panel wire!"

They all spun. The rain pounded, but the sound was immediate and sharp: a clean, practiced cut. The copper ends glinted wetly.

Ketu stared at the severed wire as if it were a personal betrayal. His chest hammered. He had enemies he could see; he had never expected sabotage.

The courtyard, lit now only by sputtering kerosene lamps, felt suddenly small and dangerous. Suresh's shadow passed the perimeter like a shape in the fog.

Ketu's hands curled into fists. Around him, twenty villagers watched, eyes wide with confusion and fear. Somewhere in the crowd a child began to cry.

Rain slashed down. The lamp's shell gleamed as if it had been polished for a funeral.

Ketu swallowed. Every plan, every spreadsheet, every late night of soldering condensed into one single decision.

He would find who did this.

He would make the light stay on.

And if anyone stood between Shantavan and the sun, Ketu would make them regret it.

A figure moved at the edge of the lane—one silhouette against the black—and vanished down Old Mahua Road.

Ketu didn't think. He ran after the shadow, crate thumping behind him. The rain took his shoes, but not his resolve.

Behind him, a single lantern flickered—and then went out.