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The Chaos Ruler

In the small forge town of Blue Star, Zion has spent his life as an unremarkable blacksmith's apprentice — quick with a hammer, quicker with his appetite, and utterly ordinary in a world where turning sixteen means something far more dangerous: an *Awakening*, the moment the void itself reaches into your life and demands you prove what you're worth. But Zion was never ordinary. He was *hidden*. Raised by the enigmatic Granny Iya — a woman who is far more than the stooped old smith she pretends to be — Zion has spent years unknowingly wearing a veil: a shard of black metal that dulls his presence and keeps him invisible to forces that would otherwise have found him long ago. When Granny Iya finally reveals the truth on the eve of her mysterious departure, she offers no comfort, only rules: never lose the veil, never speak of what happens after the Awakening, and above all — stay humble, because power makes fools loud, and loud fools die. Then she vanishes, leaving Zion alone with a hammer, a set of keys, and a secret he doesn't yet understand. When his sixteenth birthday arrives, the void's voice finds him mid-breath at the forge and drags him into an independent trial space — a realm of absolute dark where survival is the only currency. What should have been a manageable test against ordinary beasts spirals into something far more lethal: an *awakened* monster, a creature no sixteen-year-old should ever be forced to face. Bleeding, broken, and out of options, Zion draws on every brutal lesson Granny Iya ever beat into him — and somehow, impossibly, wins. The void rewards him accordingly. Zion emerges branded with abilities that shouldn't exist: a Supreme-grade sight that lets him perceive the hidden "seams" in reality itself, and a rare, evolvable bloodline capable of consuming the world's extremes and turning them into strength. Gifts that are the stuff of rumor and myth — gifts that mark him as something the world was never supposed to produce. He crawls back to the smithy floor bloodied and changed, staring at a town that slept through it all, innocent and unaware. Granny Iya's rules echo in his skull — *don't lose the veil, tell no one, be humble* — but Zion understands now that the life he knew is already ash behind him. What waits ahead isn't a quiet apprenticeship in a dusty town. It's a furnace: a road that will carry him far past Blue Star's borders, into a wider world of power, danger, and the very forces his guardian spent a lifetime hiding him from. Something noticed him. And now, awake, he has no choice but to go meet it.
Corrupted_Saint · 507 Views

My Ultimate Gacha System

David Drinkwater lived his entire career as football's biggest joke. Thirty seven years old, rejected by every major club, and called a "club whore" by fans across Europe, but at Wembley Stadium, in the rain, he finally proved them wrong. Championship playoff final between Millwall and Norwich, and in the 90th minute, he scored the winning goal, then he died. **[Ding. Ding.]** **「Host found: David Drinkwater.」** **「Synchronisation complete.」** He opens his eyes in an eighteen year old body. Demien Walter, a failed Fiorentina academy prospect and suicide attempt survivor with an overall rating of 48, no team, and no future, but David brought something impossible with him. **[Ding.]** **「Ultimate Gacha System activated.」** **「Mission: Rise from nothing. Become the greatest footballer in history.」** Training earns points while matches earn rewards, and achievements unlock legendary packs. Every pack opening could change everything, whether through common stat boosts, rare techniques, or epic abilities, yet there's always the ultimate prize. **[Ding.]** **「Diamond Pack opened.」** **「Congratulations. Andrea Pirlo — Regista Vision obtained. Passing +15. Vision +10. Legendary Trait unlocked: Deep-Lying Playmaker.」** From trialist to conquering the football world, every pack, every point, and every impossible moment building toward football immortality. They called him a failure once, and they called him wasted potential, but now, with forty years of wisdom in an eighteen year old body and a system that rewards every drop of sweat with power, David will rewrite football history. One pack at a time. **Some dreams get a second chance, and some legends get a second life, so this is his.**
Mr_Raiden · 1.4m Views