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Blood and Starlight

In the smoke-choked slums of Ironhaven, seventeen-year-old Eli survives as a thief—stealing just enough to keep himself and his sickly younger friend Finn alive. In the Kingdom of Toren, magic is a death sentence, hunted by the brutal Inquisition. Eli has hidden his own magical gifts his whole life, afraid of being burned like so many others. When a desperate heist in a noble’s estate goes wrong, Eli is forced to use his magic to escape, exposing his powers and marking him as the Inquisition’s most wanted. With Finn’s life hanging in the balance, Eli is rescued by the Underground—a secret network that smuggles magic-users out of Toren and into the legendary Luminari Kingdom, where magic is celebrated, not feared. In exchange for passage, Eli agrees to carry a mysterious sealed cylinder across the war-torn Ashen Marches. But the cylinder is more than simple cargo—it’s the core component of a magical superweapon, designed by a radical faction within Luminari to annihilate Ironhaven and end the twenty-five-year war in a single, catastrophic strike. Guided by the hardened veteran Marcus and the sharp-witted border runner Nora, Eli navigates checkpoint patrols, burned villages, scavenger bands, and the haunted silence of the Marches. With each step east, he feels the cylinder’s ancient magic pulsing against his own—changing him, attuning him to powers older than the kingdoms at war. Upon reaching Luminara, the City of Light, Eli delivers the cylinder to Aldric Voss, a craftsman and ally within the resistance. There, he meets Vera Silver, an Academy instructor and political moderate working to stop the weapon’s completion. As Eli enters the Luminari Mage Academy to train his long-suppressed magic, he learns that his connection to the cylinder’s ancient core is unique—and may be the key to disrupting the weapon’s calibration before it can be fired. But the faction is watching. Councilor Renn, a political player with ambiguous loyalties, has taken notice of Eli’s unusual abilities. With the weapon’s activation scheduled in days, Eli must master his emerging powers, navigate Academy politics, and decide how far he’s willing to go to save the city he fled—and the people he left behind.
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The Traitless Playmaker

Football is more than a sport — it’s a culture. Every player awakens a unique ability at a certain age (usually adolescence), from useless quirks to very powerful traits. Everyone has one. Everyone… except Sonny. A lifelong football fan and a freshman with no special traits, Sonny dreams of making a name for himself in a world obsessed with talent. When his school announces open trials for the annual college championship, he see's his chance — but the trials are brutal. The field is packed with monsters blessed with absurd abilities, alongside hopelessly untalented players clinging to impossible dreams. Compared to them, Sonny has nothing, no trait, no recognition and no advantage... Or so it seems. The national college championship kicks off, a competition involving the best schoolsin the country. the top 200 players are also ranked at the start. Sonny is Ranked near the bottom before the tournament even begins, can he survives on effort alone — the answer to that is NO. But Joe, a former country wide best, and an old friend of his father, see's potential in the kid, and forces him to understand the game. which improves Sonny’s mentality and builds him into a better player. In a world where traits defines destiny, Sonny is tasked to keep up and become number 1 NOTE: this is my first book, so be nice :) and give me some advice on what to add, remove, or improve for future chapters cause I like engaging with people on this sort of stuff
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The Runic Alchemist

Ben, a postgraduate chemistry student, envisions a future where science unlocks the secrets of the universe. But fate has other plans. In a sudden twist, Ben dies and awakens in a strange new world, reborn as a five-year-old boy named Damian Sunblade. Damian's joy at being part of a noble family is short-lived. His family, valuing gold over blood, sells him off to another noble house to be groomed as a homemaker husband, a mere pawn in their political games. Struggling with his new reality and the remnants of his past life’s knowledge, Damian refuses to succumb to his fate. In his new household, Damian discovers that this world is governed by magic circles, Runic symbols wielding immense power. Driven by his scientific curiosity, Damian begins to experiment. Applying the laws of physics to the Rune symbols, he deciphers their secrets and invents his own unique form of magic. However, The family that bought him has their own plans for him, seeing Damian as a valuable tool to enhance their power. But Damian, ever the independent spirit, has dreams beyond servitude. He longs for freedom, a place to call his own—a life where he can use his talents without restraint. And so Damian devises a daring plan to escape. His journey is fraught with danger and intrigue, as he navigates a world filled with mystical creatures, powerful adversaries, and ancient secrets. Along the way, he forges alliances and battles enemies, all while refining his magical and scientific skills. In "The Runic Alchemist," follow Damian Sunblade’s epic quest for independence and self-discovery. Witness his transformation from a forsaken child to a formidable Alchemist, determined to carve out an extraordinary future for himself in a world teeming with infinite possibilities. ***** Author Note : Hello! GlaringError here! As I have already mentioned in my author review I am restating it here since I am getting tons of comments about it, that I am more of a reader myself than a writer, I made this novel in an attempt to capture my fantasy world residing in my mind into words.. Writing is new for me.. The premise of my novel is inspired by many great works that I have loved over the years. And some elements I have in my novel that are slightly similar to them but it's just the skeleton of it, the real meat of the plot is entirely my own cooking. Some of the influence that is more noticeable is from The Runesmith (By Kuropon), The King's Avatar (By Butterfly Blue) and Shadow Slave (By Guiltythree). I have immense respect for these legends and I can only hope to follow in their footsteps. To all those who comment just by judging the name, at least give it a chance before letting your opinions be known. Thank you.
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