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✧⋄⋆⋅⋆⋄✧⋄⋆⋅⋆⋄✧⋄⋆⋅⋆⋄✧ ❖ “A detective who can feel the truth." ❖ ❖ “A city that kills it." ❖ ❖ “Every case he solves brings the hunters closer to his door.” ❖ ✧⋄⋆⋅⋆⋄✧⋄⋆⋅⋆⋄✧⋄⋆⋅⋆⋄✧ "Some killers hide in the dark. The worst ones hide in the code." Aethelburg is a city that eats the weak and buries the brave. Junior Detective Alex Stone isn’t like other cops. His mysterious CrimeSync ability isn’t just a hunch; it’s a data stream of truth in a city built on lies. It allows him to feel the sensory echoes of violent crimes, to see patterns of motive where others see only chaos. But every time he taps into it, the darkness pushes back—neurological feedback, agonizing visions, and the creeping certainty that the system in his head is a cage as much as it is a gift. His first cases are nightmares dressed as puzzles. A city councilman is found hanging like a macabre puppet in a locked penthouse. A reclusive genius is killed by a silent, invisible weapon that leaves no trace but stops every clock in the building. A list of victims, murdered or “erased” from existence itself, stretches back for years. The deeper Alex digs, the more the cases bleed together—all threaded by the shadow of a single, ruthless corporation, OmniTech, and a secret project that has created a weapon that can rewrite reality itself. Somewhere in the darkness, a mind just as cold and disciplined as his is cleaning house. And Alex, and the secrets of his own past, are the final loose end. Two powerful women step into the crossfire. Evelyn "Nyx" Cross, a legendary ghost of the deep web, a brilliant and dangerous hacker who becomes his partner in a war fought with firewalls and firearms. Mellina Hargrave, a corporate ice queen with the resources to fund an army and the secrets to start a war. Both could be his salvation—or his ruin. ---------- ◈ ---------- "You think you’re chasing them, Detective. But all along… they’ve been chasing you." From brutal assassinations to high-tech heists, every step forward drags Alex closer to the heart of the conspiracy and to the buried truth of the "accident" that stole his memory and murdered his parents twenty-five years ago. To solve the case, he must solve himself. Some secrets can't stay buried. Some debts must be paid in blood. And in Aethelburg… the shadows are always watching. ━━━━━━━━━━ ★ ━━━━━━━━━━ -=[ WHAT TO EXPECT ]=- » A Unique Sci-Fi/Crime Blend: A gritty, detailed crime procedural fused with high-concept science fiction and a mysterious, "System"-like ability that is both a gift and a curse. » Two Formidable Female Leads: No damsels in distress. Expect a brilliant hacker with a razor-sharp tongue and a powerful CEO who plays the game of corporate warfare at the highest level. » Slow-Burn, Mature Romance: Romantic, cute, hot, and peaceful moments develop naturally amidst the chaos. The relationships are a core part of the story, not an afterthought. » Relentless Suspense: A constant barrage of murder, mystery, and high-stakes thriller action, with each chapter designed to leave you wanting more. » Detailed Investigations: Follow every clue, from hacking a corporate server to analyzing a crime scene with a psychic twist. » Complex, Inspired Cases: A series of intricate and bone-chilling cases, some inspired by real-world events, that all connect to a single, terrifying conspiracy. ✧⋄⋆⋅⋆⋄✧⋄⋆⋅⋆⋄✧⋄⋆⋅⋆⋄✧ ✦ A Note From the Author ✦ This story is a passion project, and every reader who joins the journey means the world to me. If you're enjoying the descent into Aethelburg's shadows, consider joining our community on Discord to discuss theories, share fan art, and connect with other readers. If you'd like to support the story directly, any contribution helps me dedicate more time to writing and continue to bring this world and these characters to life. Thank you for reading. ​» Join the Community Discord: https://discord.gg/fPphdrUUzG ​» Support the Story on PayPal: paypal.me/VOIDSAINTINK ☠️
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Chapter 1 - The Gilded Puppet

Chapter 1: The Gilded Puppet

**[Sterling Penthouse, Aethelburg - 11:15 PM]**

The rain over Aethelburg was a declaration of war against the city.

It fell in thick, angry sheets, hammering against the windows of the penthouse on the eighty-second floor.

A place so high above the streets it felt disconnected from the world below.

Down there, the city was a sprawling grid of bleeding neon and glistening asphalt.

Up here in the silent, climate-controlled air, it was a soundless light show.

A backdrop for a scene of profound and grotesque stillness.

Red and blue strobes from the emergency lights below cast frantic, silent pulses across the room.

They caught on the chrome legs of minimalist furniture and the polished surface of a grand piano that would never be played again.

The apartment was a monument to wealth and taste.

All clean lines, expensive art, and cold, impersonal surfaces.

And in the center of it all, the masterpiece of the evening's horror hung suspended.

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**[11:22 PM]**

The air was a complex, layered assault on the senses.

First came the sterile, lemony scent of the building's high-end cleaning service.

A ghost of recent normalcy.

Beneath that was the thick, cloying smell of a fresh kill.

The unmistakable copper tang of blood, so heavy you could almost taste it, mixed with the sour, chemical odor of a body betraying its final secrets.

But there was a third layer.

Something sharp and electric, clean and unnatural.

Like the smell of air after a lightning strike tears the sky apart.

It was a scent of immense energy, and it did not belong here.

Detective Dave Miller, a man whose soul seemed as rumpled and coffee-stained as his trench coat, stood with his hands on his hips.

He surveyed the scene with a practiced air of weary resignation.

"Twenty years on the job," he grunted, his voice a gravelly rumble that had been worn smooth by too many crime scenes and too much cheap whiskey.

"I've seen jumpers, slashers, pill-takers, and a guy who tried to off himself with a goddamn toaster in the bathtub."

"But I haven't seen anything like this."

He gestured with a thick thumb toward the center of the room.

"Look at this mess."

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**[11:25 PM]**

Councilman Richard Sterling hung from the vaulted ceiling by a spiderweb of gleaming silver wires.

His tailored suit was perfect, not a crease out of place.

But his body was a grotesque parody of a ballet dancer.

One leg bent artfully, an arm outstretched as if reaching for an invisible partner.

His head, held in place by more of the thin wires, was lolled at an angle that spoke of a snapped and broken neck.

The wires, thin and sharp as razor wire, transformed him from a man into a thing—a life-sized, impeccably dressed marionette.

A single, brutally deep gash across his throat had ended the performance.

It painted the pristine white rug below in a Jackson Pollock-esque spray of arterial crimson.

It was the only messy thing in the entire immaculate room.

On a polished mahogany table, placed with theatrical precision, was a single sheet of expensive, cream-colored paper.

The suicide note was concise, typed, and signed with Sterling's familiar, arrogant flourish.

It spoke of embezzlement, of crushing shame, and of a final, desperate act.

"Rich boy finally found a problem his money couldn't solve," Miller muttered, shaking his head.

"Case closed before it even opened. Some guys have all the luck."

"Let's let the M.E. do his thing and get out of this five-star morgue."

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**[11:31 PM]**

He turned, expecting his young partner to be right behind him, but the space was empty.

Miller's eyes scanned the room and found him.

Standing just inside the doorway, a quiet island in the low hum of the forensic team, was Junior Detective Alex Stone.

At twenty-three, Alex was an anomaly in the Homicide division.

He had the lean frame and sharp, intelligent features of an academic, not a seasoned cop.

He looked like he should be poring over ancient texts in a dusty library, not standing at the bloody epicenter of a rich man's violent end.

But his eyes—deep, analytical gray that seemed to miss nothing—were decades older than his face.

They moved with a slow, deliberate intensity, scanning not just the room, but the spaces in between.

The shadows where secrets lived.

He wasn't just looking at the evidence.

He was reading the story it told.

And he could already tell the final chapter was a lie.

"Something wrong, kid?" Miller asked, his tone heavy with the impatience of a man who just wanted to go home to his couch and his bourbon.

"Cat got your tongue? Or did the view finally knock you speechless?"

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**[11:33 PM]**

Alex didn't answer right away.

He took a slow, deliberate breath, his brow furrowed in concentration, filtering the corrupted air through senses that weren't entirely human anymore.

To Miller, it was the stench of death and expensive cologne.

To Alex, it was a cloud of unprocessed data waiting to be decoded.

And something—a single bit of information—was corrupting the entire file.

A familiar cold sensation, like ice water trickling down his spine, signaled the activation of the part of him he could never explain to anyone.

The part that made him the best detective in the department.

And the most isolated.

*[CrimeSync Initializing... Protocol Activated.]*

*[Scanning Ambient Environment... Cross-referencing atmospheric data with baseline homicide profiles.]*

"The note," Alex finally said, his voice quiet yet carrying an edge of absolute certainty that cut through the room's low hum.

"It's too clean."

Miller let out a short, humorless laugh.

"He was a politician, Alex. His entire life was clean on the surface."

"Probably had his assistant type it up for him weeks ago. The guy was meticulous."

"His schedule, his clothes, his suicide notes. It fits."

"Not the note itself," Alex clarified, taking a deliberate step into the room.

His shoes avoided the edges of the bloodstain with practiced precision.

His gaze was locked on the hanging body like a moth drawn to a deadly flame.

"The scene."

"The story it tells."

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**[11:37 PM]**

"This isn't the chaotic energy of despair, Miller."

"This is the cold, steady hand of control."

"This is a performance."

"This is rage made manifest."

A flicker of genuine annoyance crossed Miller's weathered face.

He hated it when the kid got like this—speaking in riddles, seeing things that weren't there.

Acting like some kind of human computer instead of a flesh-and-blood cop.

"What in God's name are you talking about? Performance?"

"He hung himself up like a damn Christmas ornament. The guy was a secret freak; maybe he got off on this stuff."

"Rich people are weird, kid. It's not a puzzle. End of story."

Alex slowly shook his head, his eyes half-closed as the data stream in his mind intensified.

The world seemed to slow, with the colors sharpening and the sounds deepening into a symphony of evidence.

He wasn't just in the room anymore.

He was feeling the echoes of its recent past.

*[CrimeSync: Analyzing Particulate Matter... Anomaly Detected. Unidentified Scent Profile.]*

*[Olfactory Data: Trace elements of Cyanide derivative (Bitter Almond). Ozone residue consistent with high-voltage discharge. Scent profiles contradict victim's personal effects.]*

The phantom smells, undetectable to a normal human nose, were now screaming at him.

*[Conclusion: Third party present within last three hours. Probability of External Contamination: 98.6%.]*

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**[11:40 PM]**

"The smell," Alex whispered, the sound barely audible over the hum of the crime scene photographers.

"Yeah, kid, it's called a corpse," Miller grumbled, his patience shredded like old newspaper.

He turned to leave. "You'll get used to it. Or you'll wash out. One or the other."

"No," Alex insisted, his voice hardening with conviction, forcing Miller to stop and turn back.

"Not the blood. Not the death."

"Underneath it all. Filter it out."

"Smell the air. It's like after a thunderstorm. That ozone smell."

He paused, letting his enhanced senses guide his words.

"And something else... something chemical."

"Like bitter almonds."

"Faint, but it's there."

"He didn't just hang himself, Miller."

"He was murdered."

Miller stared at him, his face a perfect mask of pity and profound irritation.

The look a parent gives a child who insists there are monsters under the bed.

"Almonds? For Christ's sake, Stone, have you been watching old detective movies again?"

"There's nothing here. Forensics swept the place; it's clean as a whistle."

"The M.E. will confirm ligature marks, we'll write our reports, and you'll go home to your books."

"Now stop seeing ghosts in every damn shadow."

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**[11:45 PM]**

The condescension in Miller's voice was a physical force, but Alex stood his ground.

He knew what he was sensing.

CrimeSync was an extension of his own mind, an analytical engine woven into his very neurons by technology he didn't fully understand.

It had never been wrong.

Not once in the two years since the procedure.

This councilman hadn't just been murdered.

He had been executed, his death turned into a piece of living theater.

The elaborate setup wasn't the desperate act of a suicidal man.

It was the chilling, arrogant signature of a killer who saw murder as an art form.

A killer who was organized, theatrical, and still out there in the city.

Planning his next masterpiece.

Miller just shook his head, muttering under his breath about know-it-all rookies and their crazy theories.

He walked toward the door, his footsteps echoing off the polished marble floor.

"Just bag the note and meet me downstairs, Stone."

"And don't. Touch. Anything. Else."

"I don't need I.A. crawling up my ass because you contaminated a scene."

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**[11:52 PM]**

Alex watched him go, the flashing emergency lights reflecting in his unblinking eyes like dying stars.

He was alone now, in the heart of the performance, with the dead man and the silent echoes of the crime.

Miller saw a tragedy wrapped up in a neat bow.

The forensics team saw a procedure to be completed before their shift ended.

Alex saw something else entirely.

A declaration of war against everything he stood for.

*[CrimeSync: Objective Identified: Uncover identity of the artist, the manipulator... The Puppeteer.]*

*[Warning: Official directives and preliminary evidence conflict with logical analysis. Proceed with extreme caution.]*

He gave a small, almost imperceptible nod to the empty room.

To the ghost of the man hanging from silver strings.

Caution was for other people.

People who didn't have machines in their heads whispering the truth.

He was going to find the killer.

And he didn't care whose orders he had to break to do it.

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**DETECTIVE'S LOG: ALEX STONE**

**CASE FILE: 001 - The Gilded Puppet (Unofficial)**

**STATUS:** Case officially ruled suicide by APD. Personal investigation initiated against direct orders.

**KEY EVIDENCE (CRIMESYNC DATA):**

* Olfactory Residue: Ozone & Cyanide derivative (Bitter Almonds) - Not detected by standard forensics

* Perpetrator Codename: "The Puppeteer"

* Emotional Residue Profile: Contempt, Artistic Pride, Cold Confidence

**CURRENT OBJECTIVE:** Identify tangible evidence to corroborate CrimeSync data and force case reopening.

**Personal Note:** Miller thinks I'm seeing ghosts. Maybe I am. But sometimes ghosts are the only witnesses willing to talk.

**End of Chapter 1**

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*"In a world of lies, the truth becomes the most dangerous weapon of all."*

**To be continued...**