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INVISIBLE FIGURE

Shanum Asmara, a beautiful 20-year-old college student and orphan, lives independently after her parents passed away. She lives in Jakarta to pursue her education at a public university thanks to a scholarship she earned through hard work and intelligence, while her elderly grandmother lives alone in Yogyakarta, working on a rice farm. Since childhood, Shanum has been accustomed to facing life's difficulties, so she learned various types of martial arts from her grandmother, such as pencak silat, karate, and taekwondo, to be able to protect herself. While living in Jakarta, strange things often happened around Shanum. She felt that she was always accompanied by an invisible figure when she returned to her boarding house alone. When she was bullied by a college friend, the perpetrator suffered a mysterious accident. When she was almost kidnapped by thugs sent by the Rice Lord who wanted to make her his wife, those people also received an unexpected retribution that she couldn't explain. During her college break, Shanum returned to Yogyakarta and told her grandmother about all her experiences. From there, she learned a secret she couldn’t fathom with modern thinking: since childhood, Shanum had been protected by a ghost named Den Mas Alif Bhirawa. Who exactly is Den Mas Alif Bhirawa? Is he merely a guardian, or is there a deeper connection linking him to Shanum? And what is the true purpose behind his constant surveillance and protection of Shanum from the past until now?
Deameriawan · 1.7k Views

The Extra's Law

My current situation is truly, truly dire. How could it not be? I have been sentenced to death, but not by the police or any institution for committing a crime. No, it’s not like that! I have been sentenced to death by myself, by my own hand. You must be wondering why, right? Fine, let me explain from the beginning, briefly, because my hands are already shaking. Somehow, while I was asleep, I was suddenly pulled into the world of my own novel, right at the location where mass destruction is about to occur, and there is absolutely no way out… I don’t know why, but it feels as if someone did this on purpose. To make matters worse, I don’t even know who will destroy it or what event will trigger it, because this place is a plot hole I left behind. Could it be the Villain I wrote? Or is there someone, an organization, or a new monster created by this world to fulfill what has been written? I truly don’t know! Funny, right? But the point is, this place will be completely obliterated, leaving no life behind, because that is what I wrote. And I have seen how this world fills every ‘Blank Space’ perfectly, with history and logic for a place’s existence that I never even wrote. I used to write this destruction casually, even sipping coffee at my desk without feeling the slightest bit of guilt. But now, after living with the people in this Safe Zone, everything is different. So different. They aren't just novel characters; they are whole human beings with families, goals, and dreams… But I… I KILLED THEM ALL WITH MY FINGERS JUST TO MOTIVATE THE PROTAGONIST. Who is more cruel than me? I am so sorry Alice, Aunt Maya, Erickson… I may not deserve to be part of your family. Indeed, fundamentally, I am not your family, I am just a killer nesting in his body, pretending to be him. Even so, I truly love you all more than anything, even my own life. Thank you for letting me feel a sincere love. Thank you for giving me the meaning of life that I have been searching for all this time. Thank you for giving me everything I couldn't get in my previous life... Once again, I love you all... I truly can't wrap my head around it… Why? Why is it that when I finally get a decent life, sincere friends, and a new family who loves me unconditionally, it ends up like this? Am I really this unworthy of happiness? Fine, enough complaining here. This changes nothing… Oh right… This might be the last time I write in my life after writing since I was a child. Yes, this is my final entry in my diary before I take action. I will miss the feeling of writing again… Alright, I’m moving out. I must take responsibility for my negligence by trying to change the fate I have written. Whether I can or not? That’s a matter for later. I will do everything in my power to achieve it, even if I have to use any means necessary. Goodbye, whoever you are reading this. After this, maybe I won't be the same person anymore.
Saintnites · 5.4k Views

Ryu: Genesis Anomaly

​"I am not a weapon. I am the reason weapons were invented." ​Thirteen-year-old Ryu Alverion was never meant to survive the night his world burned. A high-precision sniper bullet claimed his parents, but it couldn't claim him. Instead, the trauma shattered his mind into three lethal fragments, birthing the Tri-Node System.... a cognitive architecture so dangerous, the Dominion of Astryx buried his existence under the code: Subject D-3. ​Inside Ryu’s head, three entities fight for the steering wheel of his soul: ​NV (Neural Voice): The cold, analytical stabilizer that views the world as mere data. ​Eon (The Corruptor): The bloodthirsty manifestation of Ryu’s suppressed rage, whispering for total annihilation. ​The Silent One: A terrifying, ancient resonance that speaks only when the world is about to end. ​Now, trapped within Vasena.... a secret facility that turns gifted children into state-owned predators.... Ryu must play a deadly game of compliance. But as the mysterious "Weeping Eye" organization arrives to "harvest" his brain, Ryu realizes that Vasena was never a school. It was a cage. ​The cage is now broken. The harvest has begun. ​But Ryu isn't the crop.... he is the reaper. ​In a world of bio-electric warfare, shadow conspiracies, and fragmented memories, Ryu must decide: Will he be the Dominion’s ultimate tool, or the anomaly that burns their world to ash? ​[THEY THINK THEY LOCKED YOU IN, RYU. BUT THEY FORGOT ONE THING....] { The door is open.... step into the void.... }
Full_Moons · 17.6k Views

Fragments in the Wall

When humanity faces extinction, what breaks first? our bodies, or our humanity? How much of ourselves are we willing to lose to stay alive? In 2104, The world has already ended, but its consequences haven’t. In the OctaCore: the last of humanity's shelters, resources are limited and the radiation is rising fast. Within two years, the surface will become unlivable. Long before that, the food will run out. The monsters that destroyed the world are still out there, but they’re no longer the worst threat. With the shelters on the brink, the council faces an impossible choice: Cull 80% of the population to preserve the remaining 20%, or Launch a suicidal mission into the wasteland to retrieve a supply shipment that could sustain humanity long enough to rebuild. A small team is chosen for the Hail Mary attempt. Memory-scarred survivors, soldiers who’ve already lost too much, and civilians carrying secrets they’d kill to protect—bound together by the thin hope that something out there might still be worth saving. Outside, they will face the world that once was: a ruined city haunted by monsters, nazis and the aftermath of choices no one wants to admit they made. What to Expect: 1. Morally questionable characters 2. No clear good or evil—only survival 3. Character-driven beginning → escalating high-stakes plot 4. Brutal worldbuilding 5. Mature themes (genocide, moral collapse, societal failure) 6. Gore, violent imagery, disturbing psychological content DISCLAIMERS: This story is officially published on multiple platforms under the pen name Zachelodeon. If you encounter it elsewhere under a different name, it has been stolen or reposted without authorization No audio adaptations, translations, derivative works, or commercial uses are permitted without written permission from the author. For adaptation inquiries, please contact the author directly. For professional or rights-related communication, please email: [email protected] Copyright: 2025 Zachelodeon. All rights reserved. This work is an original creation by the author. No part of it may be reproduced, reposted, mirrored, translated, or adapted without explicit written permission.
zachelodeon · 23.6k Views

The Blind Claim

Samantha Hale once lived an ordinary life in the human world, ordinarily except for the constant sense that she never truly belonged. Found as an abandoned infant near a forest border and raised by a loving human couple, she grew up blind to her origins yet strangely attuned to the unseen. Her senses were sharper than most; her instincts too accurate to ignore. But the truth behind her unusual existence remained hidden… until Morris found her. Morris was a werewolf, charming on the surface, dangerously obsessive beneath. He was fascinated by Samantha, drawn to something he couldn’t immediately define. When she resisted his advances and tried to escape his tightening grip, his obsession turned violent. The night she fled him changed her life forever. Morris, enraged that she would choose freedom over him, clawed out her eyes in the forest, claiming that if she couldn’t look at him with love, she shouldn’t look at anyone at all. Blinded, bleeding, and running on pure terror, Samantha stumbled deep into the forbidden wildland…the territory of the Alpha King of werewolves: Zoro Darkfang. Zoro was everything Morris wasn’t … powerful, calculating, feared yet fair. He carried the burden of leadership, haunted by a slow-burning war with Morris, his former beta turned traitor. When Samantha literally crashed into his life and arm… something ancient stirred inside him. He couldn’t ignore the instinctual pull he felt toward her. Yet he saw her as human and helpless, a fragile soul ruined by one of his own. His first instinct was to protect … and hide her. But soon, Zoro begins to realize Samantha isn’t helpless at all. Even without eyes, she sees things others can’t … whispers of magic, traces of aura, echoes of souls. She senses a darkness coming… and she feels it inside herself. The wolves around her react to her presence… not with pity, but awe. Her scent is royal. Her wounded face carries beneath the skin a faint shimmering mark, one Zoro recognizes from stories told only in secret: The Eclipse Wolf. A supernatural lineage believed extinct. A wolf that exists between light and shadow, life and death. Samantha is the last of them… the heir to a power great enough to either unite or destroy every pack on the continent. And both Zoro and Morris want her. Zoro, to protect her. Morris… to claim her. Morris is convinced that Samantha is his destined mate… not because of love, but because of ambition. If he owns the Eclipse Wolf, he owns fate itself. He launches relentless attacks on neighboring packs, killing dozens and leaving one survivor each time… always with the same message: “Bring me Samantha. Alone.” His dominance becomes a blood-written ultimatum. Samantha, meanwhile, battles fear, guilt, and a terrifying transformation inside her. As the Eclipse mark awakens, she experiences visions of a giant wolf woven from moonlight and darkness. She feels her body changing, senses sharpening, something monstrous and magnificent waiting beneath her grief. She hates what Morris did to her. She fears what she’s becoming. And yet, she needs answers. Zoro tries to help her control this new power, guiding her through the rage and shadows looming inside. Along the way, their connection deepens… from protector and victim to something undeniable. But love only intensifies the danger. Prophecies begin resurfacing: “When the Eclipse Wolf awakens, a king must fall.” Morris believes Zoro is that king. Zoro wonders if he might instead be destined to die by Samantha’s awakening hand. The climax erupts when Morris stages his deadliest attack yet, abducting innocent pack members and forcing Zoro’s warriors into slaughter. He sends a mangled survivor to deliver the final demand: “Samantha walks into my territory, or their blood never stops flowing.” Samantha refuses to let more lives be lost because of her. Despite Zoro’s furious objections, she makes her choice. She goes. Alone. Blind but guided by something older than eyesight, de
Anna_0314 · 1.2k Views