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When we were sixteen

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In the vibrant corridors of St. Mary’s High School, five unlikely friends forge a bond that becomes their anchor in the stormy sea of teenage life. Rohit, the class representative and son of a widowed school teacher, carries a quiet maturity far beyond his years. His best friend, Yogesh, is the charming heartthrob whose confidence masks hidden insecurities. Together, they are the dynamic duo everyone knows. Though divided by classes, they are united by something deeper—trust. Simran, with her innocent charm; Shubhangi, the graceful dancer; and Manmeet, the joke-cracking mood-maker, complete the circle. Their friendship is unbreakable, filled with laughter, secrets, and silent crushes—like Rohit’s soft spot for Simran, and the unspoken rumors linking Yogesh and Shubhangi, though both insist they’re just friends. Everything changes when a mysterious new girl named Soorya transfers to the school. Graceful, intelligent, and carrying a quiet depth, Soorya captures everyone’s attention, especially Rohit’s. As she slowly becomes part of their lives, hidden feelings emerge, old bonds are tested, and the once-simple days start to shift. Behind the laughter and class drama, a web of personal struggles and family secrets begins to unravel. As friendships are challenged and love blossoms in unexpected corners, the group must navigate through misunderstandings, emotional revelations, and a mystery that quietly haunts one of them. Will their friendship survive the changes? Will Rohit find more than just a crush in Soorya? And what is Soorya hiding behind her calm smile?
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Chapter 1 - The Boy With the Bat

The school stadium was alive with thunderous cheers that seemed to shake the very air. Flags waved wildly, fluttering in the warm afternoon breeze as the crowd roared. It was no ordinary day at St. Mary's High School—it was the day of the final inter-school cricket match, and the entire school was united in a single purpose: victory.

The blue-and-white banners of St. Mary's snapped sharply in the wind, students spilling out from every corner of the campus and filling the stands to the brim. Teachers and parents squeezed into the sidelines, exchanging nervous glances and hopeful smiles.

In the middle of the field, under the harsh glare of the sun, stood the two boys everyone was here to watch.

Rohit Mehra, calm, composed, and focused, adjusted his gloves as he stared down the pitch. His shirt clung to his back, damp with sweat from the long day, but his eyes were steady, like a general preparing for the final charge.

He wasn't the showiest player on the team, but every coach and teammate knew Rohit was the backbone of the St. Mary's cricket squad.

More than that, he was the son of their beloved biology teacher—Mrs. Mehra, a single mother who had raised him with quiet strength after his father passed away a few years ago.

On the opposite side of the pitch was the bowler, but just beyond the boundary, in the other part of the field stood another figure who drew cheers and whistles every time he moved.

Yogesh Arora.

With his signature tousled hair and a confident smirk, Yogesh was the undeniable heartthrob of the school. He was the boy who made every girl's heart flutter and every teacher sigh in exasperation. His charm was effortless—sometimes frustratingly so. Unlike Rohit's steady, responsible demeanor, Yogesh was all flash and thrill—a natural-born playboy, the type who laughed loudly, joked openly, and lived every moment like it was a scene from a movie.

Today, however, they wore the same jersey—the St. Mary's blue and white—playing side by side in this crucial final match.

The scoreboard blinked, showing the tension clearly: St. Mary's needed 43 runs in the last 5 overs.

The crowd's cheers rose to a fever pitch as Rohit took his stance.

Whispers rippled through the crowd.

"Rohit's up."

"Their hope."

"The calm in the storm."

A group of girls in the stands gasped and screamed when Yogesh casually leaned against the fence, brushing his hair back and flashing a crooked smile at them. They waved their hands, shouted his name, and tossed him kisses, completely enraptured by his effortless charisma.

"Yogesh's got the fans," a boy muttered beside me, "but Rohit's got the skill."

Rohit's eyes scanned the field, then fixed on the bowler's fingers as the ball was set to fly.

Click.

The ball sped toward him.

Rohit swung.

Crack!

The ball soared toward the boundary line, bouncing twice before the ropes. The stadium erupted in cheers. The score was climbing. The tension was breaking—just a little.

Yogesh whooped loudly, clapping as he jogged toward Rohit. "That's how you do it, man! Keep it up!"

Rohit gave a small nod but said nothing.

The spotlight wasn't for him. It belonged to the team.

Behind the scenes, a small group of friends gathered in the stands.

Simran, her soft eyes glued to the pitch, clutched her water bottle nervously. She didn't shout or cheer as loudly as the others, but her heart pounded every time Rohit hit the ball. She often found herself watching him from afar, unsure how to bridge the gap between them.

Beside her, Shubhangi, the dancer of the group, was busy recording every exciting moment on her phone, narrating with excitement to the crowd around her.

"That shot? Pure grace. That's our Rohit," she said with a proud smile, flipping her hair.

And Manmeet, the jokester, was somewhere nearby, cracking jokes about the opposing team, lightening the mood even when the game was on edge.

Together, they were a strange but perfect little family—each one different, each one holding a place in the others' lives.

The bowler wiped sweat from his forehead, preparing for the next ball.

Yogesh stepped up to the crease for his turn to bat.

The crowd's roar doubled.

Girls screamed, whistles blew, and boys teased, "Yogesh's up!"

He swaggered in like a movie star, swinging his bat lazily but with deadly accuracy.

He hit a soaring six that seemed to pause in the air, frozen by the collective gasp of the crowd, before crashing into the boundary with a resounding thud.

The cheers grew louder, and the school's energy surged.

Yogesh's grin stretched wider as he took a dramatic bow toward the cheering girls, who blushed and giggled.

But Rohit stayed grounded.

He watched Yogesh's playful antics with a quiet smile, shaking his head affectionately.

He was the "green flag" to Yogesh's "red flag"—steady where Yogesh was wild, calm where Yogesh was reckless.

And together, they balanced the team.

The last few overs were a blur of excitement, near misses, and loud encouragement.

Rohit hit a boundary off a tricky spinner. Yogesh smashed a quick two fours in a row. The scoreboard ticked closer to the target with every ball.

The tension mounted.

The crowd was on their feet.

And in the final over, with the score just 8 runs to win, Rohit was back on strike.

The bowler ran in.

Rohit took a deep breath.

He swung.

Crack!

The ball soared over the fielders, landing just inside the boundary.

The crowd exploded.

St. Mary's won.

The boys on the field were engulfed in cheers, high-fives, and pats on the back.

Yogesh caught Rohit in a bear hug, laughing loudly.

"You're the real MVP, dude."

Rohit smiled, finally allowing himself to enjoy the moment.

The dust was still settling on the field as the last echoes of cheering faded. The St. Mary's cricket team began streaming toward the dressing rooms, faces flushed with excitement and sweat, but glowing with triumph. Outside the entrance to the players' lounge, a familiar trio was waiting anxiously.

Simran, Shubhangi, and Manmeet exchanged glances, their smiles wide and full of pride.

There they were—Rohit and Yogesh, walking side by side, flushed from the game but still carrying that air of calm victory.

Simran was the first to speak, her voice soft but excited."Rohit! Yogesh! Congratulations! You guys were amazing out there."

Shubhangi bounced on her toes, pulling out her phone to capture a quick selfie with the boys."I'm telling you, this calls for a celebration! You've got to promise me a treat."

Manmeet grinned, ever the joker, clapping Yogesh on the back."Yeah, no winning and running away. We want a victory feast tonight—Dew Drop Cafe, okay? I heard their chocolate fudge is unbeatable."

Yogesh laughed, flashing his trademark smirk."Deal. You're on, Manmeet. We definitely earned it."

Rohit smiled quietly, nodding his agreement."Dew Drop Cafe sounds good. It's been a long day."

Simran's eyes sparkled."I'll come too. It'll be fun—just us friends."

Shubhangi was already pulling up the cafe's menu on her phone, scrolling animatedly."And I'm dragging the whole gang with me. This celebration isn't just for us players—it's for everyone who stuck by us."

Manmeet chuckled, nudging Rohit playfully."You better bring your appetite, Mr. Class Representative."

Rohit let out a soft laugh, feeling a warmth that had nothing to do with the afternoon sun. Despite their different personalities and backgrounds, these friends had become a family.

As they walked toward the school gate together, plans for the evening swirling between them, none of them could shake the feeling that this victory was just the start of something bigger.