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The Boatmaker's Apprentice

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Set in late medieval stages of England in the year 1457, it follows Roald, a thirteen year old boy with a passion for crafting steam powered water vessels as he finds his whole world, beliefs, and views forever changed when one day a man in a strange, mechanical cart who prides himself as a "boatmaker" arrives in his little village and takes him along a thrilling journey back to his kingdom Dillaclor as his newfound apprentice, but when they arrive, not only will they find the kingdom have been strangely altered, but there is also a figure puppeteering the strings underneath. Now, with strange alliances and even stranger friendships, they must craft themselves a way to stop the figure from completely dismantling the great image of Dillaclor, saving it's citizens from a potential tyranny and uncovering dark secrets that lay within the palace walls.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1, The Boatmaker's Arrival

In a village where the river bent like a bowed head in prayer, there lived a boy named Roald who preferred the company of gears to that of geese.

It was not that he disliked the geese—only that they did not understand pressure valves.

Roald was the youngest son of a cooper, and while his brothers split staves and hammered iron hoops with the rhythm of inherited certainty, he spent his hours scavenging for things no one else wanted: snapped clock springs, bent kettle lids, bits of chain too short for any sensible purpose. He kept them in a wooden chest beneath his bed, wrapped in cloth like relics.

He was building boats.

Not the sort that fishermen used—broad-bellied and honest—but small, intricate vessels no longer than his forearm, stitched together from tin and oak scraps, their decks latticed with copper wire and their hulls fitted with tiny chambers meant to hold heated water. He believed, with a faith both delicate and immovable, that steam could push a craft forward even against the will of the current.

"You are making toys," said his eldest brother, who believed that any object smaller than a barrel hoop was unworthy of sweat.

"You are wasting nails," said his father, who counted them each night by lamplight.

"You are inviting mockery," said his mother, though more quietly than the others.

But Roald had seen what steam could do. Once, the lord's steward had brought a traveling baker through the village with a curious oven whose iron belly hissed like an angered cat. A sealed pot within it had rattled its lid so fiercely that the baker warned all to stand back lest it leap from the fire entirely. Roald had watched the lid dance and thought: if it can leap, it can move. And if it can move, it can carry.

He began in secret.

At night, after the house had fallen into the slow breathing of sleep, he would light a tallow stub and set his newest hull upon the floorboards. He worked with a knife so small it had once been used for trimming quills. He bored pinprick holes for rivets and pressed softened lead into the seams. He shaped paddle-wheels from discarded spindle ends and threaded them with copper teeth. Sometimes he burned himself testing the chambers meant to hold boiling water, and sometimes they burst with a wet pop that left his fingers ringing and his courage momentarily hollowed.

Each failure was hidden by morning.

But secrecy, like steam, builds pressure.

His father discovered the chest while searching for a missing awl. He lifted one of the boats between two calloused fingers as though it were a dead insect. The others were summoned. Roald watched his fleet laid out upon the cooper's table, their little chimneys and paddle-wheels catching the light meant for staves and casks.

"They will never float," said his brother.

"They are not meant to," said Roald. "They are meant to move."

His father did not shout. He simply swept them back into the chest and said, "Enough."

The chest was moved to the loft.

Roald lasted three days before he climbed for it.

Winter loosened its grip slowly that year, and when the thaw finally came, the river grew restless with meltwater from the hills. It rushed past the village in a brown, muttering hurry, carrying twigs and foam and the occasional broken branch toward a destination none of them would ever see.

It was on such a morning that Roald took his latest boat—his finest—and went to the bend where the current curled in on itself like a cupped hand.

He had given this one two chambers, a tighter seal, and a paddle-wheel braced with slivers of horn. Its chimney was no wider than a straw. He filled it with water from the river, set a coal from his pocket beneath the chamber, and waited with his breath held as though the world might shatter if he let it out too quickly.

For a moment, nothing happened.

Then the chimney began to whisper.

A tremble passed through the hull. The paddle-wheel quivered, stilled, then turned once—twice—with a stubborn hesitation that was almost embarrassment. Roald leaned closer, afraid even to hope.

The wheel spun.

Not quickly, not proudly, but undeniably.

The boat nudged forward, its nose turning against the lazy eddy near the bank. It moved an inch. Then another. It pushed past a floating twig as though offended by its presence. The coal slipped; the whisper became a sigh; the motion slowed—but it had happened.

Behind him, someone said his name.

His father had come to fetch him for the morning's work. He stood with his boots darkened by the damp earth, his face arranged in its usual lines of patience worn thin by worry. Roald expected the command to stop. To come home. To put away childishness and take up a hammer worthy of the name.

Instead, his father watched the small boat finish its brave, brief journey across the curve of quiet water.

"It moved," Roald said, because he could not bear the silence.

His father nodded once, as though acknowledging the set of a well-made hoop.

The river went on hurrying past, but for Roald, something had finally turned against the current—and kept turning.

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Spring settled fully over Honeyburrow, and with it came traders, tinkers, and tales carried in on cart wheels.

Honeyburrow was small enough that news did not travel—it bloomed. When a stranger arrived, every window leaned toward him.

He came at dusk, riding neither horse nor mule but seated atop a narrow, wheeled contraption of his own making—a cart bristling with brass rods, folded canvas, and curious iron tubes. It hissed faintly as though annoyed by the cool air. The children ran behind it. The dogs barked. The elders narrowed their eyes.

He wore a coat too fine for the road and boots too polished for mud. His beard was trimmed into a decisive point. When he removed his gloves, his fingers gleamed with rings set not with jewels but with tiny screws and cog-teeth.

"I am Sir. Wilkinson," he announced to the gathered villagers in a voice that seemed to expect applause. "Boatwright."

The title hung there—oddly punctuated, curiously formal. No one clapped.

Honeyburrow had boats already. Flat ferries. Fishing skiffs. Honest wood that floated because it knew no better. They were made by men who smelled of pitch and river water.

Sir. Wilkinson smelled faintly of oil.

Roald saw him from the cooper's yard and felt something tighten in his chest—not fear, but recognition. He wiped his hands on his apron and edged closer to the square.

Sir. Wilkinson's cart was not merely a cart. Upon its flat bed stood a model ship taller than Roald's torso. Its hull was lacquered black, its rivets bright as stars. Along its sides were mounted paddle-wheels framed in brass. From its deck rose two slender chimneys capped with copper flares. Even still, it seemed to hum with contained thought.

"It crosses water," Sir. Wilkinson said smoothly, "without sail, without oar, without prayer."

The elders frowned at that last part.

"With what, then?" asked the miller.

"With persuasion," said Sir. Wilkinson, tapping one of the chimneys.

Roald forgot to breathe.

Steam.

Not the wild rattling of a baker's oven. Not the angry burst of a sealed pot. This was shaped. Guided. Given purpose.

Sir. Wilkinson knelt beside his creation and opened a polished hatch. Within lay a compact chamber of coiled tubing and valves so delicate they resembled jewelry. He lit a small burner beneath it. The machine stirred.

A soft chuffing sound emerged. The paddle-wheels turned.

The model ship rolled forward along the planks of the cart, propelled by nothing but its own contained fury.

A murmur spread through Honeyburrow.

Roald stepped forward before he knew he had moved.

"It's the pressure," he blurted. "You've given it somewhere to go."

Sir. Wilkinson's head turned sharply.

Most adults looked at Roald as though he were a loose nail—minor, inconvenient. Sir. Wilkinson looked at him as though he were a key.

"And what," he asked mildly, "would you know of pressure?"

Roald swallowed. He felt his father's gaze somewhere behind him like a weight between his shoulders.

"It builds," Roald said. "If you trap it, it breaks things. But if you narrow it—if you give it a wheel to push—it chooses direction."

A long pause followed.

Sir. Wilkinson's lips curved—not kindly, not cruelly, but with interest.

"And what is your name, engineer?"

"Roald," he said.

"Roald," Sir. Wilkinson repeated, tasting it. "Show me your hands."

Roald hesitated, then held them out. They bore small burns, thin white scars, crescents from misjudged tools. They were not cooper's hands. Not yet.

Sir. Wilkinson turned them palm-up, studying them as one might study a map.

"You have been persuading things already."

Behind them, Roald's eldest brother snorted. "He's been wasting scrap."

Sir. Wilkinson rose slowly, dusting his gloves.

"Scrap," he said, "is merely possibility before it has been argued with."

The villagers did not understand this, but Roald did.

Sir. Wilkinson asked to see the river. A small procession followed him to the bend where Roald's tiny vessel had once defied the eddy. The stranger examined the current with a craftsman's eye, measuring its temper.

"Bring me one of yours," he said quietly to Roald.

Roald's heart thudded. "One of mine?"

"Yes. The ones they call toys."

His father shifted uncomfortably. But he did not forbid it.

Roald ran.

He returned breathless, clutching his latest boat—the twin-chambered one that had nudged itself bravely through still water. It seemed smaller now beside Sir. Wilkinson's towering model.

Sir. Wilkinson crouched and examined it without laughter. He traced the seams. Tested the paddle-wheel with a fingertip.

"The seal will fail here," he said, gently pressing a thin join. "And your chamber is too wide. Pressure prefers impatience."

Roald flushed—not in shame, but in awakening.

Sir. Wilkinson looked up at him.

"But it moved, did it not?"

"Yes," Roald whispered.

"Then you have already done what most men here believe impossible."

The river roared past, swollen with melt.

Sir. Wilkinson straightened.

"I will remain in Honeyburrow three days," he announced to no one and everyone. "I require timber, copper, and a pair of hands that understand persuasion."

His gaze did not leave Roald.

The village buzzed with suspicion. With calculation. With fear of change.

Roald's father stood silent for a long moment. Then he spoke, voice low.

"You will finish your morning's work," he said to his son. "And then… you may see what this man has to teach."

It was not blessing.

But it was not refusal.

As the sun dipped behind the thatched roofs of Honeyburrow, steam whispered once more over the river bend—no longer the secret sigh of a hidden boy, but the beginning of something that might yet learn to cross against the current.

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Sir Wilkinson did not accept lodging within the cooper's house.

He thanked Seren with a bow of restrained courtesy but chose instead to remain beside his cart, as though long years had trained him to trust canvas and wheel more than plaster and beam. Beneath a hooded lantern he labored late, the soft cadence of metal striking metal threading through the yard long after the village had gone still.

Roald did not sleep.

Near midnight, he slipped from his pallet and crept outside. Moonlight silvered the yard. Sir Wilkinson stood with one glove removed, his right hand exposed in the lantern glow.

Roald stopped.

Where flesh ought to have been, iron lay instead.

From wrist to fingertip, the hand was wrought of articulated plates and jointed rods, each finger moving with deliberate precision. Cables of fine braided wire vanished beneath the cuff of his sleeve. When he flexed it, the iron digits obeyed.

Sir Wilkinson noticed the boy's stare.

"Curiosity again," he said evenly. "A fine servant. A poor master."

Roald swallowed. "Did you fashion it?"

"In part." He rotated the wrist. The mechanism turned with a faint, controlled click. "The original was taken at the foundries of Dillaclor. A furnace door failed. Iron does not forgive carelessness."

"And yet you work still," Roald said softly.

"I work because I must."

He replaced the wheel housing of his cart, revealing for a moment the strange inner architecture: interlocked gears, a coiled spring of formidable tension, shafts that could extend outward and lock into paddle-like blades. It was no common merchant's wagon. It was something nearer to a thinking machine.

"You bound steam into tin," Sir Wilkinson said at length. "Poorly sealed."

"It burst," Roald admitted.

"Twice?"

Roald blinked. "Aye."

"Then you learned."

Silence settled between them.

"At dawn," Sir Wilkinson continued, "I ride east for Dillaclor."

The words struck like a bell.

"I would come," Roald said before fear intervened.

Sir Wilkinson regarded him, iron fingers flexing faintly.

"Why?"

"Because the river is larger than this village," Roald answered. "And I would know how to master it."

Sir Wilkinson's gaze sharpened.

"Mastery is a dangerous word."

He reached into the cart and withdrew a small roll of parchment and a stub of charcoal.

"Very well," he said. "Draw."

Roald hesitated.

"Draw me a vessel driven by steam," Sir Wilkinson said, "but one that does not belch black smoke like a sinner's chimney. The rulers of Dillaclor have grown weary of craft that fouls their skies. They demand refinement."

Roald's heart pounded. "I have never drawn such a thing entire."

"Then begin now."

The lantern was lowered between them. Roald knelt upon the packed earth and began to sketch: a narrow hull; twin sealed chambers; a redirected venting pipe that condensed vapor before release; paddle-wheels mounted low to preserve balance; a secondary chamber to reheat escaping steam and reclaim its force.

His hands trembled at first. Then steadied.

Sir Wilkinson watched without interruption.

When Roald finished, the boatwright crouched beside him. The iron fingers traced the lines delicately, smudging charcoal where corrections were needed.

"You would redirect the vapor back through a cooling coil," Sir Wilkinson murmured.

"It would condense," Roald said. "Return to water. Less smoke."

"Less waste," Sir Wilkinson corrected.

He studied the drawing a long while.

At last he rolled the parchment.

"I was sent from Dillaclor by command of its ruler," he said quietly. "The city prepares for expansion—new docks, new foundries. I am to be raised to the post of Royal Craftsman when I return."

Roald scarcely breathed.

"But a craftsman elevated alone becomes stagnant," Sir Wilkinson continued. "I was charged to travel the provinces and find one mind not yet hardened by guild jealousy. One apprentice worthy to inherit what I shall build."

His iron hand closed, the joints whispering.

"If your drawing had been folly, I would depart alone."

"And now?" Roald whispered.

Sir Wilkinson rose.

"Now you may ride east—if your father consents.

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Dawn broke thin and colorless, as though the sky itself hesitated.

The village gathered again in the cooper's yard. Word had spread swiftly: the boatwright from Dillaclor would depart—and Roald with him.

Sir Wilkinson stood beside his cart, gloved once more, the iron hand concealed. Roald stood between his parents.

The cooper's face bore the rigid stillness of a man holding back a storm.

Sir Wilkinson spoke first.

"I will not speak in riddles," he said. "If the boy rides with me, he does not return."

A murmur passed through the gathered villagers.

Roald felt the air change.

"Not return?" his father repeated.

Sir Wilkinson did not soften the truth.

"Apprenticeship in Dillaclor binds a man to his craft. Guild law forbids divided loyalties. If Roald proves worthy, he will remain. He will live and labor there. His work will belong to the city—and to the ruler who has commissioned it."

The cooper's jaw tightened.

"You would take my son," he said slowly, "and root him from his soil like a weed?"

"I would place him where his growth is not stunted," Sir Wilkinson replied evenly.

The cooper stepped forward.

"My sons are not timber to be claimed by wandering lords."

The iron in Sir Wilkinson's posture did not yield.

"I was charged by the ruler of Dillaclor to seek a mind unspoiled by rivalry and guild pride. I was not sent to steal. I was sent to find."

"And you have found?" the father demanded.

"I have."

The word fell heavy.

For a heartbeat, silence.

Then the cooper's restraint shattered.

"No," he said, voice rising like a struck bell. "No. He is my blood. My son. I have fed him, taught him, watched him bleed for splinters and burns, and you would speak of guild law as though it outweighs that?"

His hand swept toward the cart.

"You arrive with iron for fingers and promises of smoke-less wonders, and you think to carry him away forever?"

Roald had never seen his father thus—face flushed, eyes bright not only with anger, but something far more fragile.

Fear.

Sir Wilkinson did not flinch.

"I lost my hand because I had no master wise enough to guide my ambition," he said quietly, removing his glove. The morning light struck the articulated metal. "The furnace door failed. No one had taught me patience. No one had shown me restraint."

He looked not at the father—but at Roald.

"I will not see the boy burn for lack of instruction."

The cooper's breath came hard.

"You speak as though you love him already."

"I respect what he may become."

The words might have sparked further fury—but Seren stepped forward.

She had been silent until now, hands folded tightly at her waist. Now she placed herself between husband and stranger.

"Enough," she said softly—but there was iron beneath it.

She turned to her husband.

"Would you have him remain?" she asked gently. "Hammering hoops and watching the river pass? You have seen how he looks at it."

The cooper's gaze faltered.

"He is a child."

"He is not," Seren said. "Not in spirit."

Tiev shifted uneasily. Lomor looked at the ground.

Seren placed a hand upon her husband's chest.

"You taught him patience," she said. "You taught him care. If he leaves, he carries you with him."

The cooper's anger wavered.

"And if he never returns?" he asked, voice lower now.

Seren's own eyes shone, but she did not look away.

"Then we will have given the world something it would not otherwise possess."

The words settled like falling ash.

The cooper closed his eyes briefly. When he opened them, the storm had not vanished—but it had changed.

He stepped before Roald.

"You would go?" he asked.

Roald swallowed. "Aye."

"And remain?"

Roald hesitated—but only for truth's sake.

"Aye."

The answer struck. The cooper's shoulders sagged, not in defeat—but in surrender to something larger than himself.

He removed the awl from his apron and pressed it into Roald's palm.

"Wood answers to patience," he said again, though his voice now trembled slightly. "And rivers answer to none. Remember which you are."

Roald embraced him then, and the cooper held him fiercely—so fiercely it almost hurt.

The cooper released Roald at last.

Lomor stepped forward first, as was his habit in all things. The eldest bore himself already like a man who believed the yard would one day be his entirely. His jaw was set, his hands stained dark from iron hoops.

"So," Lomor said. "You chase smoke now instead of honest wood."

There was no smile.

Roald met his gaze. "Aye."

Lomor studied him a long moment, then nodded once—short, decisive.

"Then do not fail," he said. "Else you'll prove Father right."

It was not blessing. It was not curse. It was expectation.

He clasped Roald's forearm in the manner of men sealing a bargain, firm and brief. When he stepped back, the space between them felt wider than it had the day before.

Then Tiev moved.

He did not step forward immediately. Instead, he removed the leather glove from his right hand and flexed his fingers once, as though gathering courage.

Tiev had always stood between brothers—between Lomor's certainty and Roald's restlessness. He bore neither the eldest's burden nor the youngest's defiance. But he saw both.

"You remember the summer the river flooded the lower field?" Tiev said quietly.

Roald nodded. They had been boys still. Roald had nearly been carried off by the current.

"You swore you'd build something that could outrun it," Tiev continued. "I thought you mad."

A faint smile touched his mouth.

"I do not think so now."

He reached into his apron and withdrew a small object wrapped in cloth. He pressed it into Roald's hand.

It was a thin strip of oak, carefully shaved and smoothed—no larger than a finger's breadth. Along its length were shallow notches, evenly spaced.

"You cut this poorly," Tiev said. "You left it in the scrap pile."

Roald frowned. Then he remembered. It had been part of an early paddle-wheel—discarded when the balance failed.

"I kept it," Tiev said. "To remind myself that you see shapes in wood the rest of us miss."

Roald swallowed.

"If Dillaclor teaches you to forget where you began," Tiev said softly, "look at this. It will tell you who first believed you might be right."

The words were nearly lost beneath the yard's hush.

Then, without warning, Tiev pulled Roald into a fierce embrace.

Not polite. Not restrained.

Fierce.

"You write," he muttered against his brother's shoulder. "Even if no one else can read it. I will find someone who can."

Roald's throat closed.

When Tiev released him, his eyes shone—but he did not look away.

"Go," he said. "Before I change my mind and tie you to the cooper's bench."

It was jest.

But not entirely.

At last Seren came.

She had prepared quietly while the men argued.

From within the house she brought a small bundle wrapped in linen.

"For the road," she said.

Inside were dried apples, hard cheese, and a small pouch of salt.

She then withdrew a folded woolen scarf, simple and well-mended. She pressed it to Roald's hands.

"I kept this by the lavender in the loft," she said. "The scent lingers."

Indeed it did—lavender strong and clean, like summer fields beyond the village.

"When the road grows cold," Seren whispered, "or when the night feels too wide, hold it close. Let it remind you that you were loved before you were clever."

Roald could not speak.

She kissed his brow and made the sign of the cross upon it.

Sir Wilkinson waited until farewells had run their course. Then he extended his iron hand.

Roald took it without hesitation.

The mechanism tightened—firm, certain.

Approval.

They mounted the cart.

As the wheels turned and the village began to recede, the cooper did not wave. He stood with arms folded, rigid as oak.

But when the cart crested the low rise and Roald dared one last glance back, he saw his father still there.

Still watching.

The river bent below the village like a bowed head in prayer.

And Roald did not know whether it was he who departed—or childhood itself.