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DOCTOR DOOM

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Before he was a monarch who defied gods, he was a slave who defied men. Born in the ashes of Latveria — a kingdom strangled by tyranny and superstition — Victor, the son of a condemned witch, grows up in chains. His brilliance is a curse, his defiance a death sentence. When his face is scarred by molten iron as punishment, he does not die — he is reborn. From the blood-soaked mines of Latveria, the man called Doom rises. But Doom’s story is not one of vengeance alone. It is the chronicle of a man who seeks absolute control over chaos — the world, the gods, and even fate itself. From slave to rebel, from rebel to conqueror, from conqueror to ruler, Doom builds not just a kingdom, but an empire of logic and order in a world addicted to madness. Each victory feeds his legend… and his isolation. His empire is forged through science and sorcery alike — automata powered by arcane cores, citadels that float upon magnetic fields, armies that march without rest. Yet even as the world kneels before the Iron Emperor, Doom’s greatest battle remains within: the war between Victor, the man who once dreamed of peace, and Doom, the god who will tolerate no imperfection. *I aim for 7 chapters per week but updates may be a little inconsistent as I'm a mere Uni student and have other works. BONUS CHAPTERS: 10 POWER STONES 30 POWER STONES
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Chapter 1 - 1) Ashes Of Latveria

PART 1: CHAINS OF IRON

The mist was a living thing, a breath held over the Carpathian foothills. It clung to the thatched roofs of our Romani caravan village, softening the edges of the world with promises of quiet. Dawn was a bruise of purple and grey on the horizon, slowly bleeding into gold. I liked these mornings, the air sharp and clean, carrying the scent of pine and the faint, sweet perfume of my mother's drying herbs.

I sat cross-legged outside our vardo, a small, intricate automaton clutched in my hands. It was a child's toy, a tin bird that was supposed to chirp and flap its wings. But its spring was broken, its gears jammed with grit, its painted eyes dull. To me, it was a challenge, a riddle of metal and motion. My fingers, nimble and stained with grease, worked with intense concentration. I'd scavenged a discarded clock spring from the market in the valley, tiny gears from a broken music box, and a handful of nails sharpened to pins. The click-clack of my efforts was the only sound besides the distant tinkling of goat bells and the low murmur of my mother's voice from within our home.

"Still at it, meu drag?" Cynthia emerged, a wisp of smoke from her herbal concoctions trailing behind her. Her eyes, the color of wet earth, were sharp and knowing, always seeing more than the surface. She carried a basket of wild onions, their roots still clinging to Latverian soil. Her hands, gnarled from years of healing and harvesting, were gentle as they touched my hair. "Little bird, will it sing again?"

I nodded, not looking up, my tongue caught between my teeth in concentration. The last pin slid into place. With a breath held tight, I wound the spring. A faint whirr, then a metallic click, and the little tin bird's wings fluttered. It didn't chirp, but it moved, a testament to salvaged purpose. A small, satisfied smile touched my lips.

Cynthia knelt beside me, her expression a mix of pride and a familiar, deep worry. "You make something from nothing, Victor. You see the hidden structure, the way things fit." She took the bird from me, examined it with a light touch. "This is a rare gift, child. But in this land…" Her voice dropped, a hush that pulled the mist in closer. "In this land, genius is dangerous."

I frowned, the satisfaction fading. "Why, Mama? Why is seeing how things work a danger?"

She sighed, her gaze sweeping over the sleeping village, then toward the dark, imposing line of the distant hills. "Because General Karath fears what he cannot control. He fears the old ways of the spirit, and he fears the new ways of thought. He fears anything that might make his people question. And those who question, those who understand more than he wishes… they disappear. Like the mist."

A chill, not from the dawn air, prickled my skin. We had heard whispers in the past weeks, hushed tales carried by fearful travelers. Soldiers, Karath's feared Iron Legion, sighted closer to the foothills than ever before. Accusations of 'heresy' and 'disloyalty' followed them like shadows. Our peaceful village, nestled away, felt suddenly exposed.

Just then, the wind shifted, and a sound cut through the quiet. Not the familiar clanging of the smithy down in the valley, nor the distant lowing of cattle. It was the mournful toll of a church bell, echoing from a town miles away. One, two, three strokes, each one heavy with foreboding. Then, a rumble.

It wasn't the kind of rumble a summer storm makes. It was deeper, more metallic, like the earth itself was groaning. It grew, a monstrous growl, until the ground began to tremble beneath us.

"Thunder?" I asked, my voice small.

Cynthia's face was pale. She didn't answer. Her eyes, wide and filled with a terror I had never seen before, were fixed on the hills.

Then, a flash. Not lightning, but a bloom of orange fire painting the underside of the mist. And another, a beat later, followed by a deafening CRACK-BOOM! The sound tore through the quiet, rattling the vardo, making the tin bird vibrate in Cynthia's hand.

It wasn't thunder. It was artillery.

The world erupted. The rumble became an engine's roar, the distant booms sharpened into the terrible concussive blasts of cannons fired too close. From the pass in the hills, they came. Not a few, not a dozen, but a relentless wave of horseback riders, their faces grim, their long rifles glinting in the newly arrived sun. Behind them, heavy, squat armored trucks, churning the earth. The symbol on their banners, a stylized sunburst, Karath's mark, burned against the morning sky like a brand. The Iron Legion.

Panic, cold and suffocating, gripped the village. Dogs barked, children cried, women shrieked. Men scrambled, some foolishly reaching for farming tools, others simply freezing in terror.

"Victor! Inside! Quickly!" Cynthia's voice was sharp, urgent, cutting through the rising tide of fear. She shoved me into our vardo, her hands already tearing at loose floorboards. "Help me, child! We must hide it!"

I didn't need to ask what 'it' was. I knew. Our small, cramped home was filled with her remedies, her bundles of dried herbs hanging from the rafters, but the most precious item was hidden beneath a loose panel near the hearth: her grimoire. It wasn't a book of dark spells, as Karath's propaganda claimed. It was a chronicle of our people's wisdom: ancient herbal remedies, star charts for navigation, a history of our Romani folk, and yes, notes on the subtle energies of the world, what some called magic. To Karath, it was treason. To us, it was our lineage. Bound in worn leather and reinforced with thin strips of beaten copper, it was our past, our present, and our future.

My small hands fumbled with the panel. Cynthia pulled it free, her movements frantic. She pressed the grimoire into the hidden space, then replaced the board, kicking a rug over it.

Outside, the shouts grew louder, harsher. The reek of burning thatch filled the air, acrid and sickening. They weren't just searching; they were destroying. Flames licked at the roof of the vardo next door, orange tongues devouring the dry straw.

"Out! Everyone out!" a voice boomed, amplified by an unknown device. I heard the crunch of heavy boots approaching our vardo. My mother's hand clamped onto my arm, pulling me toward the single narrow door. "Stay close, Victor. No matter what, stay quiet."

We were pulled into the growing crowd in the village square. Villagers, wide-eyed and terrified, were being shoved and kicked into a huddled mass. Soldiers, clad in grey and black, their helmets like iron shadows, moved with brutal efficiency. They smashed open chests, overturned carts, and tore apart our homes. The air filled with the splintering of wood, the smashing of pottery, the terrified bleating of our goats.

A soldier, his face grim under his helmet, emerged from our vardo. In his hand, held aloft like a trophy, was the metal-bound grimoire. My heart plummeted, a cold stone in my chest.

"Witchcraft!" he bellowed, his voice raw. He stomped towards us, pointing a thick finger at Cynthia. "We found it! The proof! General Karath was right! This village harbors dark sorcery!"

Cynthia, despite the terror in her eyes, met his gaze with defiance. Her hand tightened on mine so hard it hurt. But I made no sound. Her warning echoed in my ears: In this land, genius is dangerous. And now, so was truth.

The village square was a spectacle of horror. Huts burned on every side, their smoke mingling with the morning mist to create a toxic, suffocating fog. The screams of the dying and the terrified were a counterpoint to the crackle of flames and the harsh orders of the soldiers.

Then, a hush fell, forced by the arrival of a figure on horseback. General Karath rode in, flanked by his elite guard. He was a man carved from ice and steel, his uniform immaculately pressed, his gaze sweeping over the devastation with an air of cold ownership. He dismounted slowly, his boots crunching on the scorched earth, and walked to the center of the square, where we were all huddled.

"Silence!" he commanded. His voice wasn't loud, but it cut through the chaos like a honed blade. "People of the Romani tribes, listen to my decree." He paused, letting his gaze, devoid of warmth or mercy, settle on each of us. "You have engaged in forbidden practices. You have harbored dark magic, defying the laws of Latveria, defying my laws."

He gestured to the grimoire, which the soldier brought forward. "This vile object, proof of your treachery, has been found. But I am a merciful ruler." A chilling smile, utterly without humor, touched his lips. "Renounce your witch. Denounce her as the source of your affliction, and perhaps… perhaps some of you may yet be spared."

His eyes landed on Cynthia, standing tall amidst the crumpled villagers, her hand still gripping mine.

Cynthia stepped forward, her head held high, her voice clear despite the tremor I felt in her hand. "You speak of mercy, Karath? You, who burn our homes and steal our lives? You are no ruler, but a tyrant, a butcher of the innocent! My practices are of healing, of knowledge, of the earth and the spirits. No fire burns truth!"

A gasp went through the crowd. Some villagers tried to pull her back, whispering pleas, but she stood firm.

My own voice, small and desperate, tore free. "No! She doesn't practice dark magic! She only heals the sick! She made salves for your own soldiers, Karath, when they fell ill on the border! She saved lives!" Logic, precise and undeniable, was the only weapon I had. I tried to make him see reason. "She used herbs, not spells! She read the stars, not curses! It is knowledge, not witchcraft!"

Karath turned his glacial gaze on me, dismissive and cruel. He tilted his head slightly, a small, patronizing smirk playing on his thin lips. "Oh? A boy, speaking of my laws? Your mother has clearly poisoned your mind with her superstitions. Her 'healing' is merely a cover for her defiance. And defiance, young one, cannot be tolerated."

He snapped his fingers. "Burn her."

My world fractured. No. Not her. Not my mother.

Two soldiers seized Cynthia. She didn't struggle. Her eyes, filled with a profound sorrow, found mine. "Victor," she said, her voice a fierce whisper, as they dragged her toward a hastily constructed pyre of wood and rags. "Never kneel to lesser men."

They tied her to the stake. The wood, still green in places, soon caught fire, fed by dried kindling and the very rags of our destroyed homes. The flames licked upward, hungry, merciless.

I screamed then, a sound ripped from the deepest part of my soul, a raw, primal cry of agony and rage. I lunged forward, but a soldier's strong arm held me back, pinning me against his armored chest. I thrashed, kicked, bit, but he was like iron.

The heat was intense. The smell of burning flesh, sweet and cloying, filled the air, mingling with the scent of pine and smoke. My mother, my beautiful, fierce, kind mother, was consumed by fire.

Her face, serene at first, dissolved into a mask of pain, then into nothing but shadow and ash. Her words, her last will, echoed in my mind, burning themselves into my very being: Never kneel to lesser men.

I didn't just watch her die. I felt it. The fire that consumed her burned away my childhood, my innocence, my joy. In its place, it forged something new, something hard and cold and utterly unyielding. A hatred, pure and incandescent, not just for Karath, the man who had ordered this monstrous act, but for the weak who stood by, for the soldiers who obeyed, for the very idea that one man could so easily extinguish the light of another. The world was weak. And weakness, I saw now, was the greatest crime of all.

The massacre ended as abruptly as it began. The sounds of destruction faded, replaced by the crackle of embers and the whimpers of the survivors. Soldiers moved among us, rounding us up like cattle. The fires had died down, leaving behind skeletal remains of our homes and the lingering stench of charcoal and death.

They tried to take her ashes. They swept them into a rough canvas bag, indifferent to the sanctity of what remained of my mother. That was the final insult. I broke free of the soldier who held me, scrambling on my hands and knees toward the smoldering mound where she had been.

"Leave her!" I croaked, my throat raw from screaming, my eyes stinging with unshed tears and smoke. I lunged at the soldier with the bag, a small, furious animal. I grabbed at his leg, trying to trip him, to retrieve what little remained of her.

He cursed, kicking me away. I hit the ground hard, my head cracking against a piece of charred wood. Dazed, I still tried to push myself up.

"Look at this one," a voice, cold and amused, cut through the haze. Karath's Lieutenant, a man with a scarred cheek and eyes like chipped ice, stood over me. "Still defiant, even after all this. He's got fire in his belly." He nudged me with his boot. "Let's see if he still looks proud with iron in his skin."

Two soldiers grabbed me, dragging me roughly toward a small, portable forge they had set up. The branding iron, its tip glowing an angry cherry red, hissed as they pulled it from the coals.

I knew what it was. The mark of the Karath regime, the stylized sunburst that signified ownership, subjugation. They branded thieves, rebels, and now, us. Slaves.

They forced me onto my knees, tearing open my rough tunic. I clenched my teeth, bracing for the inevitable. The hot iron pressed against my left shoulder, searing through skin, muscle, bone. A white-hot agony exploded through me, blinding, all-consuming. Every nerve ending screamed, demanding release, demanding a sound, any sound, to acknowledge the unbearable pain.

But I would not give them the satisfaction. I bit down on my tongue, tasting blood, tasting ash. My jaw ached, my eyes squeezed shut, tears flowing freely now, not from sorrow, but from the sheer, unholy fire that consumed my shoulder. But no sound escaped my lips.

When they pulled the iron away, leaving behind the smell of burnt hair and flesh, and the wet sizzle of my own skin, I crumpled. But I did not scream.

Karath, who had watched the whole process with a detached air, now stepped closer, his shadow falling over me. He looked down, his gaze lingering on the angry, red mark on my shoulder, the first of what would be many scars.

"He didn't scream," he observed, a hint of mild curiosity in his voice. He nudged my limp form with his boot. "Perhaps this one will survive the mines."

He turned away then, mounting his horse, leaving me in the dust, the smoke, and the unbearable agony. But in that moment, even as the world blurred, I made a silent vow, etched onto my soul as deeply as the brand on my skin: I will not merely survive. I will prevail. And you, Karath, will kneel. My mother's words, my mother's fire, became my own.

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The air bit at Victor's exposed skin, a sharp contrast to the lingering phantom warmth of his village. Days later, the memory was a raw wound, a dull ache beneath the gnawing cold. He sat on the rough-hewn bench of a chained wagon, the rhythmic clatter of the wheels a constant, grating reminder of his captivity. Behind them, a smudge of gray smoke, the last vestige of his home, was swallowed by the vast, indifferent expanse of the frozen wilderness.

Around him, the other slaves were a tableau of despair. Some stared blankly, their eyes hollow and vacant, minds already retreating to places the guards couldn't reach. Others wept silently, their shoulders shaking with a grief too profound for words. A thin, reedy voice from the next wagon whispered, a desperate attempt at solace or perhaps a surrender to oblivion: "You'll learn to forget."

Victor's answer was quiet, a mere breath against the wind. "No," he stated, the word a tiny ember of defiance. "I'll learn to remember better." The face of his mother, the laughter of his friends, the scent of woodsmoke and pine – these were not burdens to be shed, but anchors in the churning sea of his stolen life.

His gaze drifted, no longer lingering on the cruel faces of the guards, but on the dull sheen of their rusting spears, the frayed leather of their straps. It was a subtle shift, an analytical glance that bypassed the flesh and bone of his captors, fastening instead on the weaknesses etched into their very tools. Flaws, not people. An understanding began to bloom, cold and sharp.

Ahead, the Ironfields mines loomed, a monstrous scar carved into the mountainside. The earth bled molten iron, a hellish glow that pulsed against the twilight sky. The air grew thick with its acrid stench, a promise of the suffocating toil to come.

A guard, his face a mask of weathered indifference, shoved Victor forward. The cold metal of the shackles bit deeper into his wrists. He stumbled, catching himself against the rough wood of the wagon. One step, then another, towards the gaping maw of the mine.

In the heart of the earth, they sent a boy to die. But the earth spat him out anew.