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LOTR: Children of Refusal

At the Waters of Awakening, an elf is born with memories that don’t belong to this world. When the Valar arrive with their shining offer - salvation, eternal light, a paradise across the sea — he sees what others cannot. A price hidden beneath divine promises. Safety traded for freedom. So he does the unthinkable. He refuses. The Avari-the Unwilling, the Refusers, the ones history will forget — follow him into exile. What unfolds is not a tale of wandering wonder, but of building: walls raised against the coming darkness, weapons forged without divine guidance, a kingdom carved from nothing but will and determination. Because in Middle-earth, freedom is never free. And darkness always comes to collect. ━━━━━━━━ ⟡ AUTHOR’S NOTES ⟡ ━━━━━━━━ Lore-heavy beginning: The opening chapters introduce many Tolkien terms, names, and worldbuilding elements. If it feels dense at first, don’t worry - each chapter ends with a mini-glossary to help you navigate everything easily. Long-form chapters: The chapter count may look small early on, but every chapter is substantial (3,000+ words minimum, often much longer). AU & apologies to lore purists: This is an Alternate Universe kingdom-building story set in Tolkien’s Middle-earth. I apologize in advance to hardcore LOTR fans for any lore liberties or naming mistakes - I’m doing my best to honor the source material while exploring new possibilities. Constructive feedback is always welcome (kindly, please)! Give it a chance. The Avari are waiting!!!
Afkter · 210.3k Views

Hiruzen: Make Konoha Great Again!

The year is Konoha 41. The dust has barely settled on the Second Great Ninja War. Inside the village, dark undercurrents swirl. Political factions are restless, and morale is wavering. Outside the walls, the other Four Great Nations are sharpening their kunai, waiting for the perfect moment to tear the Hidden Leaf apart. In this era of internal strife and external threats, a seasoned, high-level politician from the modern world wakes up in the body of Sarutobi Hiruzen. But he didn’t come empty-handed. Floating in his mindscape is a single, spectral dossier—a System governing five key metrics: [Authority] — [Diplomacy] — [Military] — [Economy] — [Education] These five indicators are now bound to his lifespan and the future of the village. "Orochimaru, my boy, you have always been the student I am most proud of." Starting by securing the loyalty of his most dangerous disciple, Sarutobi Hiruzen embarks on the path to becoming the strongest Hokage in history. "Do you believe in the Will of Fire?" It is time for the Hidden Leaf to accelerate its evolution. What to expect: Hoarding Geniuses: No talent is wasted. Institutional Reform: Dismantling the rot of the elders. Economic Warfare: Selling to the Feudal Lords to drain their treasuries. The Beacon of the Ninja World: Establishing the "Konoha Green Card" system. Clan Unity: integrating the Hyūga and Uchiha clans properly. Tech Uplift: Introducing modern science to chakra. Universal Hashirama Cells: Developing a safe vaccine for the ultimate power-up.
hollowborn2 · 76.2k Views

GAME OF THRONES: AEGON THE AVENGER

Lightweight system) (Slow-heating) Aegon travels to the world of A Song of Ice and Fire and becomes Aegon Targaryen, who shares the same name. Good news: He possesses the bloodline of the Valyrian Dragon King and can ride dragons. Bad news: I didn't transmigrate into Aegon the Conqueror who conquered the Seven Kingdoms, nor into any of the Targaryen kings in history, but into "Little Aegon"—yes, the one who got smashed against a wall by the Mountain and had his head split open. To make matters worse, the Targaryen dynasty had already fallen, and a usurper had ascended the throne in King's Landing. He could only drag his broken body and rely on the system to stay alive as he fled to the Narrow Sea. Aegon thought he was getting a tragic and heartbreaking script, but what happened? Ding! Congratulations, host, you have successfully checked in at the Valyrian Ruins and received 1 chance to win a prize. Ding! Congratulations, host, you have drawn the Golden Legendary item and obtained King Ghidorah (juvenile form). Aegon stared in astonishment at the grotesque three-headed beast on the system screen: "Wait... is this art style right?!" When the shadow of a three-headed dragon, obscuring the sky, swept across King's Landing, when the chaotic Seven Kingdoms were reunited under the dragon's wings, and when usurpers and traitors were reduced to ashes in the flames, the maesters who wrote the Targaryen Chronicles bestowed upon him the title "Aegon the Avenger" after Aegon the Conqueror.
Gk1808 · 105.2k Views