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Eyes of the Eternal

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this story may contain reference from others i dont want a plagiarism this is only a short story there might be a fictional character and based on historical character In a realm beyond creation, every living being mortal or divine is bound to a single candle. When its flame fades, so too does the soul it represents. One day, the Father, the god above all gods, makes a fatal mistake he accidentally snuffs out the candle of a young mortal. Realizing his error, the Father summons the lost soul before him a confused, ordinary man whose life ended before its time. Out of guilt and mercy, the Father offers him a choice to be reborn with limitless power and freedom, or to live a peaceful, forgotten life. But the man refuses both. Instead, he makes a single, impossible request to remain in the divine realm and watch over the mortal world. The Father denies it at first, for no human soul can endure the heavens. Yet, moved by pity, he commits the greatest taboo of all he takes a mortal as his disciple. Now bound to the eternal heavens, the man becomes The Silent Witness an immortal observer of life, death, and divinity. He watches as kingdoms rise and fall, as mortals love, sin, and perish unable to interfere, yet unable to look away. In his silence, he will learn the truths that even gods fear to see.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1. accident

In the vast order of the cosmos, every living being's existence is tied to a single candle. When its flame burns out, the soul's journey ends.

One day, the God of All Gods, known only as The Father, makes an unthinkable mistake he accidentally extinguishes the candle of a young mortal named Wis.

The death wasn't meant to happen; it was a cosmic error, a flicker too soon. Struck with guilt and compassion, The Father summons the mortal's soul to his divine realm to offer an apology.

They stand before each other a god who holds the universe in his hands, and a mortal who should not be there.

During their conversation, The Father offers Wis a choice:

"You may be reincarnated with any powers or destiny you desire,"

"Or live a peaceful, ordinary life in another world."

But Wis surprises him. Instead of choosing either path, he simply lowers his head and says softly:

"I have a request… I wish to remain here, to watch over the mortal world."

The Father refuses at first.

No mortal soul can exist in the Highest Realm for long the divine laws forbid it. Yet, moved by guilt and curiosity, The Father breaks the heavenly rule. He grants Wis a fragment of divinity, enough for his fragile soul to endure.

From that moment, Wis becomes something no god or man has ever been a mortal soul bound to eternity.

The Father tells him, "You may call me Father. There is no need for titles here."

Wis nods respectfully. "Then… what shall I do now, Father?"

Though the young man's tone is humble, his heart seeks not power, but understanding. The Father, seeing through his thoughts, smiles faintly.

"You seek knowledge, not strength. Then knowledge I shall give you."

And so, under the silent stars of eternity, the first forbidden bond between god and mortal begins.