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Chapter 1 - MORON

At the evening in a car washing shop, a young boy sitting in a torn out chair, the boy is lazying off his his job while looking at his phone...

A middle-aged man appears Infront of the young boy, the middle aged man tugs at him once but there's no response, the middle aged man tugs at him again, this time three times and more aggressive.

NO response.....

The middle aged man twitched, he said to the young boy that is still on his phone, "Hello??, you there, this isn't time for looking at your phone get back and clean up the place!!".

The young man jumped back, shocked from the loud voice of the middle aged man, the phone almost fell from his hands, the boy trembling from almost getting his phone screen cracked, immediately had a surge of relief, then he said to the middle aged man "Sorry i got to engrossed... Also this is my break right now? Where is loan at, he should be here already?".

The middle aged man replied "your break already ended an hour ago!!, and don't you try to change the subject, i will have to talk to you later at the office!!". 

The middle aged man then said "loan is not coming today because he told me, he's sick ,so you can take his night shift ,contact me 2 hours from now if you wanna do the shift".

The middle aged man sighed, then walked away to the building that looked like a box, but before he got away to far he said "focus on your job, if any customers come, remember to advertise our company to them but keep it simple", then he walked off to the building and got inside.

The young boy wanted to retort by saying anything but held himself back because he did not think its right to do so right now.

The young boy immediately got bored and started swirling his hair, then thought to himself "man it so boring when loan is not here, why did he even get sick, man this sucks and no way I'm gonna even take his shift, i got college tomorrow!!".

The young man stood up, he cleaned what ever trash was in the flat space of greyish-black concrete floor and then he started mumbling " this job sucks so much, why did i even get this job, why did i even think washing cars was fun and relaxing, it just made me hate water from how much i washed with it , i should have chosen cafes!!".

The young man then said to himself "i really hope no customers come".

Then a sound of a car engine started echoing.

The echoing was getting louder and louder, the young boy immediately got disappointed, then accepted his destiny...

The young man then noticed a white car coming even though he was not a fan of cars, but he still knew something about cars due to his job, the white car looked expensive, which is what the moron first thoughts were, he then looked closer at the badge of the car.

The young man thought "what kinda car is that? it must be some company that is exclusive for rich people".

The white unique car stopped in front of the washing machine, the young boy first noticed that the glass was tinted black, he couldn't see anyone inside, which was a bit unsettling. A rich person stopping to get his car cleaned at a cheap car washing shop was also another reason, but the young man ignored his feelings and thought that the driver had his own circumstances, though he still could not stop his nervousness.

The car got inside of the washing machine and the young boy got to the machine controller then started the machine. The car was washed with huge amount of water, The machine took about 20 minutes of washing, the young boy started the next process of drying off the car. The machine took about 15 minutes this time, the car looked very clean, all it needed is polishing.

The white car drove forward, the young man got his cleaning tools and started wiping the white car with the rag, he started from the back of the car to the front, after that he started wiping the rear windows and now the windshield.

the young man started getting a lot more nervous due to the awkwardness and his unsettling feeling. His heart betrayed him and started beating faster, he started overthinking about it while wiping the windshield.

The young man thought to himself " did this guy commit a crime, then drove here to get rid of the evidence???!, I should not be overthinking now, man this is why this job sucks".

After being done with the last process, the young man mind started fighting against each other to find ways to counter what ever the driver inside might do or to just flee the place.

The young man waited for the white car owner to pay up nervously, each second passing was making his heart bumping more faster.

The white car window started rolling down. However, that was not the window the young man was looking at, but he heard it, so it must means that the owner was rolling down the other windows, the young man thought.

The young man started going around the car to get the money, but then the car backed off. The young man was shocked, he thought that the driver would run off, then he said "aint you being to greedy???!??!? it not even that expensive, why do you even have that car for!!!"

The young man not knowing what to do, started yelling at the driver, the driver still was backing off.

The young man said while yelling "HEY WAIT YOU FORGOT TO PAY, STOP BACKING OFF".

Still there is no response...

The young man did not know if he should stop the driver, he started to think it was not worth it, because his life is much more important than money but he still felt kind of irritated, though it was not his money that was being stolen.

Then at that moment, he saw money at the machine controller surface.

The white car backed off and trailed off to the road. The young man was baffled and relieved, but mostly shocked. The young man said to himself "what the heck was that for?, some kind of celebrity?"

The young man looked at the money, the amount was more then what was expected but not that much, then the young man thought to himself "was it a criminal on the run? wait maybe not". The young man decided to just go home and forget this whole thing.

The young man then walked to the torn out chair, but then got interrupted by the middle aged man.

The middle aged man looked at him with a frown "did something happen, i heard you shout".

The young man with a baffled impression in his face replied " no it nothing, i thought that the customer was not paying, but it turns out i just misunderstood".

The middle aged man said "oh i see.. be careful some customers are very shady, if you do think that someone is shady, just call me alright?", the middle aged man sighed then said after "just go home already, your shift is nearing it end, no customers will be coming any time soon anyways. Also if you want to do the shift, you can go home and contact me later or just stay here and wait an hour, or if you don't want to do it, it okay i can contact someone else to take the shift".

The young man replied "sorry, i don't have the time to do it, so i have to go home and sleep early..."

The middle aged man said " do not worry, just go back home and take a rest". The middle aged man walked off to the building again and got inside.

The young man looked at the building for a bit then sighed, he was free to go home now, that weird event finally got off his mind and now, he started thinking about what to eat..

The young man took the cleaning tools from the concrete floor and placed them besides the machine controller. He took out his phone from his pocket, then tried to contact a taxi to pick him up and finally got someone to pick up.

The young man does not have the money to buy a car or even take care of one, so getting a taxi is more easier for him and also considering he doesn't have a car license to.

The young man was quit ashamed but not much, he started wandering around the place, then got stuck wondering about that white expensive weird car, he thought to himself "is it a celebrity? some celebrities do that, i think, but what if its some murderer fleeing or just some weirdo??", but then he stopped himself from overthinking and forced himself to forget it, but he still couldn't.

The young man was waiting for the taxi while his unsettling feeling started to grow old, and finally he found peace with his mind, the taxi driver also finally arrived after a few minutes.

Infront of him was the taxi car, it was a bit run down, but was not much of a bother to the young man, he got in and sat down, the atmosphere was a bit weird but he ignored it.

The taxi driver was an middle aged man with full hair, that of a brown color, combed to the back. The brown haired middle aged man said "where do you want to go", while sweats dropping from his forehead due to overwork, the young man was quit nervous, but still he replied by explaining, where his place was. 

After a minute and a half of explaining, the brown haired middle aged man said "alright!".

After a while, still in the car, the young man was at, some what peaceful, but past memories kept haunting him, he started forcing himself to think about what food to eat and if he should take a shower, he immediately held himself back and gave up on the shower, way to much work with water was making him insane.

The young man was looking at the different cars driving past the taxi, not thinking about anything. He was also thinking about his college tomorrow but mostly nothing.

Then after a bit, the taxi car finally got to the street of where his house was, the young man who was out of his thoughts a bit earlier, noticed it and then got to helping the brown haired middle aged man with directions to his house.

After a bit, they finally got to the house, the young man reached to his pockets while saying "how much?", The brown haired middle aged man looked at him a bit, he then looked at the taxi meter, he turned back to looking at the young man and with a smile, he said "about 20".

The young man was a bit baffled and felt cheated, but then he gave up his 20 to the brown haired middle aged man...

The brown haired middle aged man thanked him while wearing a smile and opened the locks.

The young man got off the car and walked to his house while the taxi driver took off to the road.

The young man felt a bit relieved Infront of his house.