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The Black Hermit

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In the World of Humanity, people praise their own selfish needs, desires, and wants. They worship only their own greed for power and control. They seek luxury and comfort in their lives, without doing any hardship. Their survival is dependent on those who provide them this all. Not completely, but enough make these people to chant their names. They understands the reality of this world. They know what needs to rule these insects. The world seems to be beautiful if it is looked from outside, but deeply, it is corrupted with the darkness to the very end. No one escaped it, everyone just silenced themself and accepted it as their fate. This is the reason why they suffer, and the evil is ruling without any problem. Yet, there is someone who doesn't like to live in this way. He can't ignore the fact that he's being ruled by some evil power. He stands out and raised his head against the world itself. Aren, not so old by age, but has a mind of a saint, and lives a life as a vagabond. The people call him a Hermit. He travels different nations, kingdoms, towns, and villages, searching for the meaning of his life. He also observes the world around him, and understands the things no one else could. The world has unique set of powers, wonders, and experiences that he wanna live fully. He don't wanna die without knowing the true meaning of his life. Later on his journey, he'll also find some people that he call his friends, teachers, and rivals. His Journey will not stop to this planet alone. He may travel to the different realms as well, which may put him danger. Aren got his philosophies of life, he follow his own path and defies the world views on it. He only believes what he feel is right, not what is front of him. Through his whole life, he experience variety of people and situations which may change his perspective of everything. The world may praise a false God, but he won't. He will fight the false figure if have to. Not to prove his power or ego over something, but to reveal the truth. A mere human, out of billions of people, challenges the one that no one ever imagined. No special clan, no super power, no assistance, it's just him. He don't know where and how he'll end, he knows that he won't die as a slave at all. He's born free, he lives freely, and he'll die with freedom. This is the life of a boy that defies the absolute power and control, raise his head among the world, and transforms into something unimaginable. The life of freedom, solitude, and honor. This is the life of "The Black Hermit".
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Chapter 1 - ACT-1 The Forgotten Cradle

Deep within the heart of an ancient forest shrouded in mist and time, stands a colossal temple carved from obsidian stone and wrapped in the embrace of gnarled roots and towering trees. The air is thick and incense, the scent of earth and smoke mingling like prayers drifting into the void. This temple untouched by the ages, is dedicated to a deity lost in myth and memory– Nera, the Prime Creator.

The people of this forested land– descendents of the forgotten civilizations –worship Nera as a God who breathed existence itself into reality. To them, this land is sacred– not merely fertile, but divine. Rich with gold veins, endless forests, sacred herbs, and waters said to hold the powers of healing, it is believed that the soil was the first heartbeat of this world. They call it Terra Neralis, The Cradle of Creation.

Legend tells that the Nera walked this land in physical form, shaping it with his hands, speaking life into animals, rivers, mountains, and men. For a hundred years, he ruled in silence, unseen but felt in every sunrise and rainfall. Before vanishing into his own divine essense, he left behind a single scripture– written in an unspoken tongue known only to him. This sacred text, carved into stone and locked within the temple's inner sanctum, is written in Ren, the First Language. It is said that whoever understands Ren will be the True Heir of Nera, destined to be worshiped by all as the God among mortals.

Yet no one has ever deciphered it.

What he left for mankind instead was a secondary scripture– The Five Commandments of Continuance–written in a lesser but still sacred tongue: Woll.

This language, through more known than Ren, can only be read by a rear caste, believe to be the Second Descendents of Nera– the Brawns. They alone hold the keys to Divine Law.

The Commandments were divided into Five Sacred Texts:

Zyll — The Law of Order

Zwell — The Law of Dominion

Zhill — The Law of Flesh and Spirit

Zxall — The Law of Death and Legacy

Zeull — The Law of Ascension

Each governs a realm of existence– law, war, life, death, and transcendence.

From these scriptures, a rigid caste system was born:

1. Brawns– The Enlightened Ones Keepers of the Woll Language and the Sacred Texts, they are revered as Divine Scholars. They speak in riddles and chant ancient hymns no one else can understand. To question a Brawn is to question the will of Nera himself.

2. Ayirsh– The Hands of Dominion Warriors, Rulers, and Commanders, who claim Divine Blood through Valor. With crowns on their heads and blood on their hands, they are chosen to rule, never to be ruled.

3. Medas– The Healers of Flesh Keepers of Medicinal and Spiritual Healing, they serve the people yet remain seperate. Often they only caste permitted to speak with both the Ayirsh and Tulas.

4. Tulas– The Cursed Kin Branded as Traitors of Divinity. Their ancestors were said to have waged war against Nera, driven by lust, power, and defiance. For this, they are shunned, beaten, silenced. Stripped of all rights, they are denied the ability to read, to learn, to speak in court, to love freely. Born in chains, they live and die as tools– nameless, faceless, forgotten.

Yet in th dead of night, whispers crawl through the forest like ash on the wind– rumors that Nera did not vanish willingly. That the texts were tempered with. That the truth, buried in stone and blood, is not what it seems.

And in the shadow of the great temple, where a statue of Nera weeps through stone eyes, a child watches from afar. His eyes do not reflect the light– they absorb it.

He listens.

He waits.

The world don't know this presence yet.

But destiny will one call him something else.