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The Planetary Judgment

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In a universe where planets compete for survival, Earth never stood a chance. Having never taken part in the mysterious War of Dimensions, it was condemned and ultimately destroyed. But just before its complete annihilation, one hundred thousand humans were saved and transported to another planet — a world already inhabited by multiple intelligent races and permeated by an unknown energy known as mana. Among the survivors is Khalum Cross, an ordinary young man suddenly thrown into a world whose rules he barely understands. Like every other human, he receives a strange system that allows him to grow stronger, complete missions, and track his progress. Because on this planet, every inhabitant must fight to contribute to the survival of their world. Every six years, a cycle ends with a confrontation between planets. Those that fall to the bottom of the rankings are erased from existence… taking with them everyone bound to them. In this new world filled with dangerous dungeons, hostile creatures, and ever-stronger individuals, Khalum must learn to survive, understand the rules of this invisible war, and find his place in a system that leaves no room for the weak. Because in the War of Dimensions, only one thing truly matters: Becoming strong enough to ensure that your planet is not the next one to disappear.
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Chapter 1 - The day the sky broke I

At first, no one understood what was happening.

The first explanations appeared on television within minutes, each more reassuring than the last. Scientists spoke about an unusual cosmic phenomenon, something related to abnormal stellar activity. Governments urged the population to remain calm while emergency agencies attempted to gather information. News channels repeated the same theories over and over again, speculating about solar storms, magnetic disturbances, or the possibility of an unknown astronomical event unfolding somewhere beyond Earth's atmosphere.

Despite all the explanations, despite the calm voices of experts and officials trying to control the growing unease, a strange feeling slowly began to spread across the planet.

Something was wrong.

People felt it without being able to explain why. It lingered in the air like a silent pressure, an invisible weight pressing down on the world. Conversations became uneasy, glances turned toward the sky more frequently than usual, and an uncomfortable tension crept into everyday life as if reality itself had begun to drift slightly out of place.

The first real sign appeared that evening.

Astronomers were the first to notice it.

A star had vanished.

At first, the disappearance was dismissed as an error in observation. Equipment malfunctioned all the time, after all, and telescopes were sensitive instruments. The night sky contained more stars than anyone could realistically track without mistakes.

But then another one disappeared.

And another.

Within hours, observatories around the world began reporting the same impossible phenomenon. Entire regions of the sky were slowly growing darker as stars simply… went out.

There was no explosion.

No flash of light.

No sign of cosmic destruction.

They simply ceased to exist.

One after another, distant stars vanished from the universe as if an unseen hand were slowly erasing them from reality.

News of the phenomenon spread across the world like wildfire. Social media erupted with theories, panic, and disbelief as amateur astronomers and professional scientists alike began sharing images of the darkening sky. At first, the changes were subtle enough that most people could not notice them with the naked eye.

But the darkness kept spreading.

Within days, the night sky had changed so drastically that even ordinary people could see it.

Constellations that had existed for thousands of years were incomplete.

Familiar stars were missing.

The universe itself seemed to be fading.

And then the sky broke.

It happened in the middle of the day.

Khalum Cross was standing on a crowded street when the impossible appeared above the planet. At first it looked like a distortion in the air, something so enormous and distant that the human eye struggled to focus on it properly.

High above the atmosphere, space itself seemed to tear open.

A colossal black fracture slowly stretched across the heavens, cutting through the blue sky like a wound carved into reality. It was vast enough to be visible across the entire planet, an enormous scar in the fabric of the universe that no human technology could possibly explain.

For a moment, the entire world seemed to stop.

People stared upward in stunned silence as the dark rupture continued to widen, revealing a depth of space that felt far too close to Earth. Satellites began failing almost instantly as the disturbance spread through orbit. Communication networks collapsed one after another, leaving billions of people cut off from the systems they relied on every day.

Phones lost signal.

Televisions went dark.

Air traffic control systems failed across multiple continents.

And then the voice arrived.

It did not come from the sky.

It did not echo through speakers or radios.

It simply appeared inside every human mind at the same time.

Cold.

Ancient.

Indifferent.

A translucent interface materialized before Khalum's eyes, hovering in the air like a projection only he could see. Judging by the shocked expressions spreading across the crowd around him, everyone else was seeing it too.

The message displayed only a few words.

[Planet: Earth]

[Status: Unregistered]

A wave of confusion rippled through the crowd.

People turned to one another, panic slowly beginning to replace disbelief as more lines of text appeared within the strange interface.

[Current Cycle: Completed]

[Planetary Evaluation in Progress]

Around the world, scientists rushed to their instruments, desperately trying to analyze the phenomenon. Governments attempted to organize evacuations, though no one seemed to know what they were evacuating from. Military forces mobilized in several countries, as if the catastrophe unfolding above them might somehow be an attack.

But it was already too late.

The voice spoke again.

Still calm.

Still utterly indifferent.

[Planet: Earth]

[System Participation: 0]

[Representatives: 0]

[Planetary Score: 0]

For a long moment, nothing happened.

It almost felt as if the universe itself were considering the result.

Then the final message appeared.

[Verdict]

[Elimination Confirmed]

The oceans began to tremble.

The ground beneath Khalum's feet shuddered violently as if the planet itself had begun to collapse from within. Buildings groaned under sudden pressure, glass windows shattering across entire city blocks as seismic waves rippled through the continents.

Above them, the sky tore apart.

This was not an explosion.

It was something far worse.

Reality itself seemed to reject the existence of Earth.