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I Became the Villain in My Own One-Star Review

I read 2,848 chapters of Rise of the Eternal Sovereign: I Became the Academy's Unrivaled King. Every. Single. One. The plot holes. The cringe dialogue. The hero who somehow gets every girl just by existing and brooding at the right angle. I suffered through all of it — and when I finally finished, I left a one-star review, closed my laptop, and died. Choked on my own frustration, probably. And then I woke up inside it. Not as the hero. Not as some powerful side character with a tragic backstory and hidden potential. No — I'm Rael Marre. A nobody. A background villain used as a punching bag in chapter two so Kael Aurentis could look cool in front of a crowd. I have the worst resonance frequency at the academy, a crumbling room in the cheapest dormitory block, and absolutely zero presence in the original plot after my one humiliating scene. What I do have? Every chapter memorized. Every secret. Every weakness. Every moment the story turns — I already know it's coming. I know which girl Kael ignores when he's chasing glory. I know which ones smile at him while slowly hollowing out inside. I know which ones were written beautifully and then wasted on a protagonist who collects people the same way he collects trophies — because having them proves something about him, not because he actually sees them. I see them. And that's the problem. For Kael, anyway. My name is Vincenzo. I'm supposed to disappear after chapter two. I'm supposed to be forgotten, irrelevant, a prop the story uses and discards. The system that woke up in my head the moment I transmigrated — smug, passive-aggressive, irritatingly accurate — has already informed me that I am, and I quote: the least narratively significant person currently enrolled at Vaelthorn Academy. I told it I didn't care. That was thirty-one percent story deviation ago. Here's what I've figured out since arriving: the hero only works if everyone plays their assigned role. The fiancée stays composed. The childhood sweetheart stays patient. The instructor stays professional. The story runs on people staying exactly where they were written. I'm not interested in the story running. Kael Aurentis is the protagonist of this novel. The chosen one. The flame-wielder destined for greatness, surrounded by incredible women he will systematically fail to deserve while the plot hands him victory after victory. He can keep the destiny. I'm taking everything else. This isn't a revenge story. I don't hate Kael — I just have contempt for bad writing. And the worst kind of bad writing is a good character wasted on the wrong person. I read the ending. I'm rewriting it.
VincenzoVV · 228 Views

S.C.P Foundation Chronicles

Please read till the end........... These are short stories of people who have fought with the anomalies. If you liked it and want to support me please Rate and comment. ---------------------------------------------------- We Secure. We Contain. We Protect..... Mankind in its present state has been around for a quarter of a million years, yet only a small fraction of that has been of any significance. So, what did we do for nearly 250,000 years? We huddled in caves and around small fires, fearful of the things that we didn't understand. It was more than explaining why the sun came up, it was the mystery of enormous birds with heads of men and rocks that came to life. So we called them "gods" and "demons", begged them to spare us, and prayed for salvation. In time, their numbers dwindled and ours rose. The world began to make more sense when there were fewer things to fear, yet the unexplained can never truly go away, as if the universe demands the absurd and impossible. Mankind must not go back to hiding in fear. No one else will protect us, and we must stand up for ourselves. While the rest of mankind dwells in the light, we must stand in the darkness to fight it, contain it, and shield it from the eyes of the public, so that others may live in a sane and normal world. ---------------------------------------------------- !!!ANY INFORMATION THAT IS DIRECTLY RELEVANT TO THE FOUNDATION IS NOT MY PROPERTY. IF YOU WANT TO FIND OUT MORE ABOUT IT THEN GO TO THIS WEBSITE: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/ THESE ARE FICTIONAL STORIES AND MAY BE NOT CONNECTED DIRECTLY TO FOUNDATIONS EXTRA FILES SO I DO HOPE THAT YOU WILL NOT GET CONFUSED. IF YOU ARE INTRESTRESTED ABOUT THE EXTRA FILES YOU CAN USE THE LINK ABOVE.
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