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The Great Revenge: Sins of Sagittarius Book 1

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Chapter 1 - Prologue

His boot met the ground not with the crunch of life, but with a soft, final sigh, as if the dust itself were the ash of cremated centuries. He was a silhouette cut from shadow, his face lost to the deep cowl of a tainted hood. Yet the way he moved spoke of a body beneath the worn fabric, one of lean, coiled strength, an athlete's grace brought to the edge of the world. A thin, long sword, its purpose resting for now, lay diagonally across his back, a single dark line against the gray horizon. He was a question walking into a land that had forgotten all answers.

The kingdom ahead was nameless, for names are for the living, and this place was a gallery of perfect and eternal decay. Even from the outskirts, the air itself begged him to turn back. It was a physical pressure, a weight of stagnant sorrow that pushed against his chest and filled his lungs with the taste of rust and old bone. The wind, when it stirred, did not bring relief, but carried whispers that sounded like his own doubts given voice. The skeletal trees, their limbs petrified in silent screams, seemed to gesture with their twisted fingers, pointing away, away, from the heart of the rot.

He walked on, his every step a sacrilege against the profound, divine silence. And then he saw it.

In a small hollow, where the dead grass lay like brittle hair, rested a human skull, bleached to the color of bone china by a sun that no longer gave warmth. It was a relic of a forgotten life, but it was not at peace. From its left eye socket, a snake of obsidian scales writhed, its body thick and pulsing as it emerged from the hollow darkness of the bone. Its other socket was not empty. It held a festering, jellied eye, a gray pearl of putrefaction that stared sightlessly at the oppressive sky. Around the skull's base, the ground seethed. A hundred smaller serpents, children of the first, crawled over one another in a rustling, hissing carpet of flesh, their tiny forked tongues tasting the corrupted air. They were a living tide of warning, a chorus of sibilant voices telling him to leave this place to its ghosts.

He stopped, a lone statue of living flesh before a monument of unnatural life. For a moment, nothing moved but the slow, hypnotic dance of the snakes. The world held its breath. Then, a shadow fell over him, vast and sudden, and the air grew cold.

He did not look up. He did not need to. The predator that cast the shadow was a native of this desolation, and its presence was announced by the sudden, absolute silence of the hundred hissing mouths at his feet. He remained perfectly still as it descended, a great carrion bird whose size was a perversion of nature. It landed upon the skull with a sound not of feathers, but of falling rock, its talons gripping the bone like a king claiming a throne. Its plumage was the color of dried blood and night, its neck a raw, leprous pink, and its eyes were not the flat beads of a beast, but the intelligent, hateful embers of something far older.

The vulture paid the man no mind at first. Its attention was fixed on the prize. With a movement too quick to follow, its beak, a shard of sharpened granite, darted down and severed the head of the obsidian snake. There was a wet snap, a final, violent writhe from the serpent's body, and then the vulture swallowed its meal in a single, convulsing gulp. The smaller snakes recoiled, a wave of scaled flesh pulling back from the display of casual dominance, their warning turning to a fearful hush.

Having devoured the living, the bird turned its attention to the dead. It cocked its head, its ember-gaze falling upon the single rotting eye. It was a surgeon's motion, precise and unnerving. The beak dipped into the socket and plucked the gray orb free with a sound like a foot pulling from thick mud. For a moment, it held the grotesque sphere delicately, a jeweler inspecting a flawed gem. Then, its gaze lifted and found the man.

It met his hooded emptiness with its own ancient malice. There was an understanding in that gaze, a communication that transcended words. You are not welcome here, little warmth. This place is not for you. And then, with a contemptuous flick of its head, it tossed the eye. The putrid sphere flew through the air in a lazy arc and landed in the dust just before his boots, splattering a single, foul drop upon the worn leather. The message was clear, a promise and a threat delivered in the same breath. But we have not feasted on new flesh for an age.

The man did not flinch. His posture remained unchanged, a column of resolve against the suffocating grayness of the world. For a long count of heartbeats, he stood with his gaze locked on the ancient bird, a silent conversation passing between them. In the vulture's burning eyes, he saw the kingdom's truth: a hunger so profound it had become holy, a decay so complete it had become divine. In the man's unseen face, the vulture must have seen a resolve that bordered on madness, a sorrow so deep it had no room left for fear. He had not come this far to be turned away by portents of a doom he had long ago accepted as his own.

The vulture broke the stare first. It seemed to give a verdict, a final, guttural croak that scraped the air like a tombstone being dragged over rock. Then, with a single, immense beat of its wings, it launched itself into the sky. A storm of acrid dust and bone-fragments erupted from the ground, momentarily blinding. The bird did not circle. It flew directly over him, a deliberate path, and for a second, its shadow engulfed him completely. It was a cold, fleeting baptism, a sacrament of ill-omen that anointed him as part of this land, whether as its conqueror or its next meal.

He was left alone once more. The silence that returned was absolute. The hundred small snakes, their warning unheeded and their monstrous guardian now gone, retreated into the cracks of the dying earth, a rustling whisper that faded into nothing. All that remained was the violated skull and the splattered, ruined eye in the dust at his feet.

The hooded man finally moved. He gave the grotesque offering one last look, not of disgust, but of acknowledgment. The land had spoken to him in its own tongue, and he had understood. He turned his back on the omen and continued his walk.

Before him, the great outer walls of the kingdom rose like the edge of a wound, a jagged black line separating the dying lands from the truly damned. The gates were not barred with iron or sealed with stone. They stood slightly ajar, a dark mouth breathing a chill that carried the scent of petrified memories and unshed tears. This was no invitation. It was a dare. A passage into a place where life was a curse, and every ticking second was a fresh agony.

He did not hesitate. Without breaking stride, he passed through the shadow of the gates and stepped from the twilight of the world into the perfect, unending night of the kingdom within.