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Neon Dominion: The Shadow System

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In the neon-lit sprawl of a metropolis where bodies can be modified and minds hunted, Kael is a betrayed programmer. Forcefully injected with an overpowered System capable of controlling AIs and predicting the immediate future, he becomes a living tool in an invisible war between corporations and rebels. But the System is more than just power: it has its own consciousness. Kael must learn to navigate between his enemies, a harem of intriguing allies, and the constant threat of being erased. Every decision is deadly code, every move can shift the balance of the city, and the line between hero and monster grows ever thinner.
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Chapter 1 - Injection

Rain fell in acidic streaks on the metallic rooftops of Neo-Lumen City, blurring the neon lights and turning holograms into uncertain pools of color. In a narrow alley, among cables and surveillance drones, John ran, each drop burning his augmented skin. He did not yet know that this night would erase his life as he knew it.

A siren wailed behind him, hissing like a mechanical serpent. His reflexes, enhanced by basic implants, allowed him to dodge the drone that lunged at him like a metallic predator. He vaulted onto a container, but before he could catch his breath, strong arms wrapped around him.

"Don't move." The voice, cold and synthetic, belonged to a man whose face was hidden behind a high-tech respirator. John struggled, but magnetic chains shot from his cybernetic fists, nullifying any resistance.

A device activated on his neck. A fine, nearly invisible needle pierced his jugular. A silvery liquid flowed through his veins. John screamed, a cry drowned out by the drones and the rain. A scorching heat coursed through his body, every nerve lighting up like an overloaded circuit.

And then, the world exploded.

Before his eyes, the alley transformed into floating lines of code and streams of data. Human bodies became nothing but sequences of numbers, every gesture predictable, every thought exposed. A voice echoed inside his head.

"Hello, John. I am your System. We have much to catch up on."

He blinked. No, it wasn't a hallucination. The System spoke, and its words vibrated directly in his mind. A virtual interface materialized before him, displaying skill levels, upgrade options, and a threat radar. Everything was clear… and terrifying.

John tried to move, but his body no longer obeyed him completely. Every action was now analyzed and corrected by the System. He realized with horror that he was no longer just human: he had become an overpowered instrument, yet not fully in control.

A flash lit up the alley: another figure approached. A woman, cyber-augmented down to her fingertips, her red eyes scanning the environment. She stepped forward, and John understood she was not there to save anyone.

"Welcome to the real game," she murmured. Her lips twisted into a cruel smile. "Every choice you make… will be watched. Every movement… evaluated. And every mistake… will cost you more than life."

The System spoke again, faster this time, anticipating his reactions:

"Analysis: immediate threat. Recommendation: neutralization via cognitive simulation or maximum physical augmentation."

John had no time to think. His muscles surged with pure power, his reflexes transforming into near-instant calculations. The woman leapt, but he dodged before he could even process it. A jet of light burst from his hands, disarming a drone rushing toward them.

He shivered in his mind: the System was not just a tool. It had its own consciousness, a will flirting with his, and every decision became a silent negotiation between their respective control.

But the real surprise came when he heard an additional voice, softer and mechanical:

"John… look behind you."

He turned and saw even stranger figures, agents equipped with powerful systems, some floating like luminous specters. The entire city seemed to have become a game board for this new reality, where human rules no longer applied.

John's heart raced at a speed only an augmentable human could feel. The System analyzed every line of code in his environment, every electrical pulse of his enemies. He now had the choice to flee or fight… and every option was deadly.

An explosion tore through the other end of the alley. Drones were obliterated by a series of perfectly calculated shots, and John realized he could predict every trajectory, every combat pattern. He did not just control his body—he controlled the space around him, yet he was not alone in this world of overpowered beings.

Fear merged with adrenaline he had never known. Every raindrop seemed to amplify his abilities, every neon light, every reflection on metal granting him an almost prophetic vision. The System whispered again:

"John, welcome to true cyberpunk. Your survival depends on your ability to evolve. And your evolution will depend on your enemies… and your allies."

The last thing he saw before vanishing into a cloud of steam and light were the woman's red eyes, fixed on him like a predator recognizing its prey.

John did not yet know whether the System would guide him or betray him. But one thing was certain: nothing, never again, would be the same.