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Gilded Ashes

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"You will suffice." That's what something whispered inside Raizen's mind - right before the monster that murdered his village turned to golden ash at his feet. He doesn't know what spoke inside his head. He doesn't know why. But ever since that night, his life hasn't been entirely his own. Now he walks a beautiful world built on even prettier lies, where Eon turns desperation into miracles, Luminite weapons twist the laws of what's possible and what's not, and where humanity's war with Nyxes is nowhere in sight. Though sometimes, the cruelest of enemies aren't even made of darkness at all. The more ancient secrets come to light, Raizen is starting to realize: the monsters aren't the only things hunting him. Something primordial is watching. Waiting. Pulling strings he can't see. To protect everything he loves, he needs strength. To find the truth, he needs to become something even the nightmares fear. ...But to win? he may have to become exactly what the whisper wanted all along.
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Chapter 1 - World Torn Apart

The ashes that fell that night weren't black.

They were gilded.

Of course, Raizen didn't know what that meant.

In that moment, all he felt was warmth. The warmth of the bonfire crackling in the center of his small village, the warmth of his father's loud laugh, the warmth of his mother's hand squeezing his shoulder as she passed behind him with another skewered fish.

"Raizen, you're going to burn it!" someone shouted from across the fire, pointing at the stick in his hand, where dinner was starting to char.

He jerked it back, grinning. "Nahh, It's just called flavor."

"You're just incinerating it!" an older woman clicked her tongue, shaking her head whilst not being able to hide a smile.

Raizen tilted his head up.

The sky was there, technically. He knew it was there.

But he'd never actually seen it.

Only the strange clouds, always covering whatever was beyond. Thick and unmoving, like someone didn't want them to see what lay after.

His father sat near the fire's edge, fishing spear resting across his knees, as he made gestures in the air while telling some exaggerated story about a huge fish that got away.

He wasn't even trying to make it believable…That was the whole point. People groaned and laughed anyway.

Raizen's mother rolled her eyes as she returned to the circle, careful with the tray of fish. She brushed some cold ash from Raizen's hair.

"Take a bite, does it need more seasoning?" she asked softly.

Raizen smiled and tasted a small bit. It was too hot, but he nodded in approval.

That was his whole world.

Fishing. Firelight. Warm, familiar faces.

That very world got torn apart. 

The far wall exploded.

Stone and dust burst inward, and lantern light scattered like dying fireflies. The ground shook hard enough to knock bowls off laps.

Raizen xhe jumped up, heart hammering.

For a heartbeat, he couldn't understand what he was seeing. The wall wasn't just cracked.

It was... Gone. Obliterated.

A massive hole opened where stone had been, jagged edges bleeding dust into the air.

And through it, something seeped. Not smoke. Not shadow.

Something blacker than night itself, as if the darkness had a form and was slowly pouring in.

The laughter died so fast it felt like it had never existed.

Sound dulled. The bonfire still crackled, but it came from far away. Panicked voices sounded like underwater noises.

Raizen's throat tightened. His hands went numb around his stick.

And through the dust -

He saw them.

They weren't animals. They weren't people.

With a ruined human shape, their bodies looked like they were made of... Just pure darkness. Like someone had carved monsters out of a place where light couldn't survive.

Their eyes - if they were eyes - glowed faintly white. Cold. Flat. Emotionless. Watching them the way a predator watches prey.

 

Nyxes.

 

The word didn't feel real in his head. It belonged in whispered stories, in weird rumors, in forgotten prayers - not here in front of him.

His mouth opened, but nothing came out. The Nyxes stepped forward, as if they had all the time in the world.

Panic hit like a wave.

Men scrambled for anything that could be held like a weapon - rusted blades, hunting spears, even burning firewood ripped straight from the flames. Someone shoved a child behind them with shaking hands.

A spear flew, hitting one of the Nyxes. For a split second, it looked like it went in, piercing. Then the darkness rippled and shattered the sturdy shaft like it was simply a stick. A torch was thrust toward another Nyx's chest. The flame flickered, then went out, Nyx not even flinching. Nothing touched them. Nothing mattered.

But across the village, through the chaos and screams, two figures moved in the opposite direction.

Raizen's parents.

His father gripped his precious fishing spear, knuckles white. His mother stood beside him with a cleaver in her hand. The knife looked too small, her shoulders looked too thin.

But they stepped forward anyway.

Not because they thought they'd win, but because every second they could buy mattered.

His father lunged forward, spear driving straight into a Nyx.

For one bright, stupid second, hope sparked in Raizen's chest, the tip met resistance. It looked like it passed through.

Then the darkness coiled around the shaft like smoke given form, twisting tighter and tighter.

With a sickening crack, the wood splintered.

Hundreds of shards exploded outward, spinning through the air and falling uselessly to the ground.

His father's eyes widened - not in fear. In understanding.

The Nyx's hand lashed out and wrapped around his throat. It lifted him off the ground like he weighed nothing.

Feet dangling, his fingers clawed at the grip, frantic and desperate, Raizen's father tried to escape, but the Nyx's hand didn't move.

"Dad!" The cry tore out of Raizen before he could think. His legs finally moved, carrying him forward, blind and reckless.

Beside his father, Raizen's mother screamed and rushed in, blade flashing in the dim firelight.

She stabbed. She slashed. She struck again and again. Every cut tore through the dark mass. But every time, it knit itself back together immediately, as if her rage was simply a joke.

No matter how weak, no matter how small, Raizen had to do something. He had to reach them. He had to help. But his body betrayed him.

A crushing weight pressed down out of nowhere. He was too scared. His knees slammed into the ground. His hands sank into cold soil. He tried to crawl, tried to drag himself forward, but his arms shook and refused.

"Please" he choked out, not even sure who he was begging. "No -!"

The dark hand around his father's throat tightened. His father's eyes flicked toward Raizen, and there was still something there - warm and scolding, encouraging and stubborn.

The light that held his world.

That very light just went out.

His body hung limp, like a puppet with the strings cut.

Raizen's throat ripped open in a sound he didn't recognize as his own.

But his mother didn't stop.

Her hands shook, her breath came in broken gasps, yet she lifted the knife again.

She swung with everything she had left.

The Nyx answered with its other hand.

It moved faster than Raizen's eyes could see.

A sharp strike - a simple, cruel motion - and its claws pierced her chest.

There was a dreadful sound, and her scream cut off.

The knife slipped from her hand and clattered to the ground, stainless and clean, like it had never even touched a Nyx.

She turned her head slowly.

Her eyes found Raizen through the smoke.

They were wide, watery, terrified - yet still full of love.

Her lips moved. Torn by pain, her voice barely reached him.

"Raizen... Run."

In that same moment, something whispered inside his skull.

Too close.

Too cold to be human.

It made his whole spine shiver.

Raizen...

You will suffice.

The words weren't heard with his ears. They were placed inside his mind, gently and deliberately, like a decision that had already been made.

Suddenly, the Nyx turned toward him.

One slow step.

Another.

Its hand lifted - reaching.

Raizen couldn't move. He couldn't breathe. He couldn't even blink.

The Nyx's fingers stretched toward his face -

...And then it froze.