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Few scenes from the story
" Emma ,trust me." The man's voice was filled with lust and love.
"mm... n..o.." her voice was filled with pain and grief, the sorrow which filled her voice was trying to pour from her eyes in a form of tears.
" Sweetheart, I will never touch you without your permission . I need your love in return of mine not your fear. It hurts me "his hands gently rubbed her shoulders.
" seriously, these men never know the pain or fear of women . They all need is the pleasure from the pain of women . I don't know how these men never care about women and exploit her for their own uses . I don't know how he is comfortable to sleep with strangers . yesterday her the Temperance , and now me . These men never know the pain of feeling a dick inside " a lot of wording were running in her mind like a marathon but she couldn't utter a word in front of him .
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" I love you , sir " Emma's eyes was sizzling with the words and feelings which she don't know ; how to express.
" I love you too, Emma " before finishing his words she clasped his mouth with her hands.
" Not Emma to you; your sweetheart " the words of her made his eyes to dazzle in the fire of love and to feel the silky cotton on her body.
" sweetheart you witched me " He didn't continued his sentence has her lips imprisoned his . The room had no space to words but with the sounds of moans which became the musical .
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" Leave me , arghhh " the man's voice was rising to the peak of mountain.
" sir, please listen to me. if mam comes there will be a problem " the man who said the statement was nowhere but now on the ground filled with blood on the face .
"Go to the hell out of here ! " All the soldiers stilled on the room were panicked by his anger .
" What's going on hear " the woman's stiffed voice as made the place silent as the grave .
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" Emma ; what a pleasant name but now it is embroidered with anger, envy , supremacy , moreover with death " The voice didn't show any emotion .
" You too Emma, became just like Louise " The voice mad her to look into the mirror he pinpointed , where she can only see her villainous face not the old sweetheart .