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Naruto: kunoichi's hear my inner voice

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I was just minding my own business until 'poof' I was a child of four again and not in the usual world but the damn scheming type ninja world. oh and the system is even lazier than myself but at least it gave me a bloodline that will make even otsutsuki tremble.
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Chapter 1 - ch 1: Just a watcher (NPC moment) 1.

Year 62 of the ninja calendar.

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First name Kuraiyarama I'll call him kuraiya for short.

Last name sajuu

Our protagonist is your standard civilian, who had joined the ninja school twelve years ago and failed the exam, it's been 4 years since then, now he is watching the final chunin exam of this year's participance on TV.

He was lying down on his side with his hand on his face, while the other was in a packet of chips munching on them, and a drink with a straw for when he's thirsty right next to his mouth with the tail holding it, the pure embodiment of laziness.

He was currently wearing an all black long sleeve-tight shirt and black shorts while his tail soon after started waving around.

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-flashback to four years ago-

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When he failed the exam and was sent home, he didn't get backlash because it was a common thing for a civilian to fail, but that didn't stop his resentment towards the result.

He arrived home and saw an empty house "just, what I like, no welcome home, would you like to eat, a bath or..." he spat out his resentment of being single at 12 years old while all the others are having their engagements.

When he started talking bad about this world and his own life, soon after a loud horn sound was heard in his mind [ahhh! So damn loud] he screamed internally while holding his head, after the sound stopped, a golden screen appeared in front of him, almost translucent like.

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-Ding congratulations host, I'm your system-

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-This system will give you a reward based on how much you you speak negatively about this world and it's people-

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-Host has been given a gift pack, do you wish to open it-

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"Open it".

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-Ding congratulations host, you have received, legendary Saiyan bloodline-

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Kuraiya's breathing quickened and just as he was getting excited, his body started burning from within and his appearance was going through a massive change.

After a while of wailing on the floor for several hours due to the pain, his clothes was soaked in sweat and black liquid like substance and a now long brown tail.

'sniff' 'sniff'

"Ugh, it stinks" he went to the bathroom washed himself up and looked into the mirror, his appearance has had an upgrade, no longer malnourished and skinny but well toned and vibrant.

Just as he was looking in the mirror his eyes which were pure black started glowing in a gold like hue, before completely turning gold.

He jumped back in surprise then veins started appearing on his face wiggling around like worms, he had accidentally just activated the incomplete wrathful state.

After a while he deactivated it due to his ki draining rapidly, he then decided to check what the real rewards of what he received were.

"System"

'vroom'

The golden screen appeared, this time it was no longer showing a giant pink gift box, but showed him his rewards and their purpose, and nothing else, not even his status.

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Legendary Saiyan 1%

Become the legendary Saiyan, of the saiyan race.

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Hosts chakra was abolished and converted into ki.

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Wrathful state 5%

Increases all abilities by a significant amount (warning will begin to lose sanity in this state)

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"Kinda useless ain't it" kuraiya muttered to himself.

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-end of flashback-

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Over the years all he had received from the cussing was some basic techniques such as flight, ki sense and ki conceal or the percentage rates to his already achieved rewards.

Right now, not even his legendary Saiyan is above 20% he can be seen as a monster yes, but he enjoys this silence it's actually very satisfying for him.

Legendary Saiyan 18%

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Ki control semi master.

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Wrathful state 31%

Kuraiya who was sat down watching his TV, was waiting for the matches to start when he heard the same horn sound whenever he would get a reward.

He muttered 'system' soon after.

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-Ding, system is updating please wait-

1%

13%

39%

81%

100%

-Ding, system updated, rewards will be better from now on and will add more to your other rewards, including your percentage's-

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"Not bad, but what rewards will it give, I hope it's the instant transmission or a way to get rid of this defective anger issue" after speaking to himself like a madman, the system spoke again.

While the chunin exam was also started playing on the TV.

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-Ding host, why don't you speak badly about this world or the match that is playing-

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Kuraiya just looked at the system panel with suspicion and thought to himself [what the hell is with this system, it's never asked me to do this before, not since it first appeared.] "geez fine".

['Sigh' hinata's life, so far is nothing but ups and downs, yet other's expect her to be something she can't be, even with training she won't reach past jonin level.]

[Not only that poor neji will die after his match with Naruto.]

What kuraiya didn't know was that every kunoichi in konoha could hear a voice in their heads and they looked around in confusion.

Some even muttered that they were under an illusion.

Meanwhile at the chunin exams.

A person who was waiting for the exam to start said in a low voice "Huh, who's speaking, what did that voice mean by brother neji will die after the fight".

Hinata who was preparing to watch the match and waiting for it start in front of her was looking around, but couldn't find the voice.

Just as she was about to ask a little louder the voice came again.

[Yuhi kurenai, that woman was nothing more than, asuma's last minute ditch too, even though I see the guy going to the red district every night, the guys worser than Jiraiya, at least that guy knows his bounds, I'm surprised she didn't get an STD after his death.]

Yuhi who was standing next to asuma, looked at him from the corner of her eye, with some confusion and she thought [he goes to the red district every night.]

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