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Thorns in bloom

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a girl who was mocked, got revenge and power.......
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Chapter 1 - CHAP. 1: Seeds in the Soil

Rita Red was born in the sleepy village of Willow's End, where the river curled like a lazy green snake and the forests whispered secrets to anyone patient enough to listen. Her parents were ordinary folk—her dad fixed roofs, her mom sold herbal teas from their little garden. They expected an ordinary daughter. What they got instead was a girl who took six long years longer than anyone else to show even a spark of power.

The other kids in the village awakened early. Little Tommy was hurling pebbles with his mind by age five. Sara could make her hair crackle with static electricity. Rita? Nothing. She was the quiet girl with messy auburn curls and dirt-stained knees, always trailing behind the others, clutching her basket of wildflowers like a shield. The mockery started small. "Rita the Late," they called her. "Rita the Dud."

At home it was quieter but heavier. Her parents' worried glances. The way her father would sigh and pat her head. "Maybe next year, sweetheart." Her mother's forced smiles during village gatherings when other parents bragged about their gifted children. Rita learned early how to smile back anyway. Bright. Sweet. Empty.

She was nine when it finally happened.

It was a miserable rainy afternoon. Rita had run into the woods after yet another group of kids left her out of their ability games. She huddled under an old oak, knees to her chest, tears mixing with rain. "Why not me?" she whispered, pressing her palms against the muddy ground. "I just want to be like them…"

Something answered.

A faint warmth bloomed under her fingers. The soil trembled. Tiny green shoots pushed through the earth, curling around her hands like gentle fingers. Rita froze. She stared as a small vine climbed her wrist, blooming with delicate white flowers that smelled like fresh rain and something wilder. For the first time, she felt seen. Not by people, but by something deeper. Alive. Listening.

She laughed—shaky, wet, delighted. She whispered to the vine and it moved, twisting into a little heart shape. She asked the grass to tickle her ankles and it did. That night she snuck home with pockets full of glowing night-blooming flowers and a secret burning in her chest.

But discovery wasn't gentle for long. When she showed her parents, their relief quickly soured into concern. "Plants? Nature attunement is… rare. And slow," her father said carefully. The village elders were even less kind. "Unfocused. Primitive. Not combat material." The same kids who once ignored her now openly sneered. "Flower girl. Weed witch."

By the time she turned fourteen, the warmth had twisted. Rita still smiled at everyone. She grew prize-winning vegetables for the village fair. She helped old ladies with their gardens. But at night, in the mirror, her reflection smiled back with something sharper behind the eyes. The plants listened when she raged. They drank her hurt and grew thorns in return.

She was ready when the academy letter came—late acceptance, pity slot. Rita packed her bag, hugged her worried parents, and left Willow's End with that same sweet smile.

Inside, something hungry stirred in the soil of her soul.