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An intertwined thread

MiyahM
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Writing practice; I publish random chapters for books that I’m interested in creating. The tags used are just some of the themes that wanted to write. Feedback and critique is greatly appreciated!!! Also, fair warning, I write a lot when I’m tired so if you read some absolute gibberish that’s my bad.
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Chapter 1 - Tomorrow’s Savior: First draft

The world used to make noise. Not the kind of noise we take for granted—the hum of electricity, the soft murmur of conversations, the dull roar of cars in the distance—but the comforting chaos of life itself. Now, there's only silence.

I stood on the rooftop of a skyscraper that hadn't yet crumbled under the weight of time. Below me, the city stretched out like the carcass of some massive beast—broken, hollow, lifeless. The streets were filled with rusted cars, their doors hanging open like silent screams. A layer of ash coated everything, thick and suffocating.

I tightened my grip on the crowbar in my hand, feeling the cold metal bite into my palm. The faint hum in the air reminded me I wasn't alone. Not entirely. They were out there. Watching. Waiting.

The Watchers. That's what we called them, though the name didn't do them justice. They weren't just observers. They were hunters. And we were their prey.

***

I arrived back to the Cantina which was also referred to as our safe haven. It was one of the few places left that still made this world feel like the home I once knew...

The ladder groaned under my weight as I climbed down to the ground floor, slipping back into the shadows of what used to be a department store. The shelves were empty, picked clean years ago by scavengers like us. But it was the best we had.

The Cantina was just below, tucked away in the tunnels of the old subway system. To anyone else, it might look like nothing more than a pile of rubble blocking an entrance, but to us, it was home.

I pulled open the concealed door and stepped inside, feeling the familiar warmth of stale air. The soft glow of solar-powered lanterns illuminated the space, casting long shadows on the walls. It wasn't much, but we'd made it ours—patched together with scavenged supplies, stubborn hope, and sheer willpower.

***

"Elijah!" I called out as I descended the last set of stairs. My voice echoed faintly, bouncing off the concrete walls.

Eli looked up from the table where he was hunched over, his hand tracing lines on a makeshift map. His dark hair was messy, as usual, and his eyes held the kind of exhaustion that came from years of fighting to survive.

"You're late," he said, offering me a cup of coffee. Well, what passed for coffee these days—some bitter brew made from roasted roots we'd dug up.

I took it gratefully. "Needed some fresh air," I said, taking a sip.

He raised an eyebrow. "Fresh air? In this city? You've really gone soft, Ava."

I smirked but didn't respond. Eli was one of the few people who could joke like that and get away with it. He'd been with me from the beginning, back when the world had first gone to hell and survival had felt more like a distant dream than a daily reality.

***

The others were scattered around the main room of the station, each lost in their own tasks.

Natalie "Nat" Grey was in the corner, sharpening her knives with slow, deliberate movements. The sound of metal scraping against stone filled the air, rhythmic and steady. Nat was quiet, always watching, always calculating. She had a way of making you feel like she could see straight through you, like she knew your secrets before you even had a chance to tell them.

Dominic "Dom" Price burst in through the entrance, carrying a crate of supplies on his shoulder like it weighed nothing. His grin was wide and confident, his voice booming as he announced his arrival. "Look what I found, folks! Enough canned beans to last us a week. You're welcome."

"Great," Maria Delgado muttered as she emerged from her small clinic. "Because what we really needed was more beans." Her tone was dry, but the corner of her mouth twitched in a barely-there smile.

Maria was the heart of the group. She didn't just patch us up when we got hurt—she kept us human. Her presence was a reminder that there was still kindness in the world, even if it was buried under layers of ash and despair.

Jasper "Jazz" Kent was hunched over a map near Eli, marking out areas we needed to avoid. He was the joker of the group, always ready with a sarcastic comment or a ridiculous plan. "You know," he said, not looking up, "if Dom keeps bringing back beans, we might as well start a bean-themed restaurant. Call it 'End of the World Eats.'"

Dom rolled his eyes. "I'd like to see you carry this crate through five blocks of alien patrols."

I tuned out their banter as I leaned against the wall, letting my thoughts drift to the Watchers.

No one knew much about them, not really. What we did know was that they came from somewhere far beyond our galaxy. We'd brought them here—our arrogance, our curiosity, our insatiable need to explore the unknown. Decades ago, scientists had sent probes into deep space, broadcasting our existence to anyone—or anything—that might be listening.

Something had listened.

The Watchers arrived in massive ships that blocked out the sun, their arrival marked by an eerie, otherworldly silence. Their technology was unlike anything we'd ever seen—sleek, efficient, and devastatingly effective. They didn't communicate the way we did. They didn't hear, at least not in the way humans understood hearing. But they could see.

Their eyes were like glowing red orbs, piercing through the darkness, scanning every corner of the world they'd invaded. They were fast, strong, and nearly indestructible. And they had no mercy.

Humanity didn't stand a chance, we were backed in a corner and they knew it...

"Alright, everyone," I said, snapping back to the present. "Let's get moving. We've got a long day ahead."

Eli pushed his chair back and stood, stretching. "What's the plan?"

"We need more medical supplies," Maria said, her voice steady. "We're running low on antibiotics, and the last batch I had expired two years ago."

"Great," Nat muttered, sliding her knives into their sheathes. "Another raid on the pharmacy. Because that's gone so well in the past."

"Better than one of us bleeding to death." Dom said, cracking his knuckles.

I nodded, pulling out the map Jazz had been working on. "We'll split into two teams. Dom and Nat, you'll head to the pharmacy on Sixth Street. Eli, Jazz, and I will check out the warehouse near the river. Maria, you stay here and keep an eye on the station."

Maria frowned. "I don't like being left behind."

"I know," I said gently. "But we need you here. If something goes wrong…" I didn't need to finish the sentence.

She nodded reluctantly, her expression softening. "Just be careful."

***

As we prepared to leave, I felt a faint vibration under my feet. It was so subtle I almost thought I'd imagined it, but my grip on the crowbar tightened anyway.

"Something wrong?" Eli asked, his voice low.

I shook my head. "Probably nothing." But I couldn't shake the unease that had settled in my chest.

We climbed out of the subway station and into the open air. The city stretched out before us, silent and empty. But I knew better.

The Watchers were always there. Watching. Waiting.

And today, I couldn't shake the feeling that they were closer than usual.