Hello Little Savories, Sweet Dumpling here was advised and decided to redo my work- so the first chapter has been rewritten. I have read so many books that it is so easy to get overwhelmed when you start writing.
This is my first book and I wanted it to be perfect, loved and winning. I don't have any editors or previous knowledge or skill so everything you see will be the raw authentic me.
The last chapter updated was a structured version of my work, following the apparent design of most webnovels and catering to taste and popular writing style but that wasn't me.
But I was challenged to learn, grow and develop my own style. And I have decided to do just that; follow me on this journey, experience my growth and the wonderful and unique storylines.
I have three novel ideas, this the first one, stay tuned, support me in any and all ways you can.
And remember once you decided to tune in you become one of my savories and i would be counting on you for RANKING, WINS, POPULARITY and even ENCOURAGEMENT to continue
Please criticism is accepted as long as constructive, what I know constructive criticism to be and MUST contain:
You notice a problem, give example where seen.
Inform me of it(I prefer warm tones but any is accepted).
State how it could be better.
Option(State advice, it's okay to see the problem but no solution).
Anyway the goal is that: you my little savory see me doing something that could be better or avoided and you call it out and how it should be like instead. Remember we see the world differently and process things differently.
Finally thanks for your support, while commenting, no swear words at all - my little Savory are cutesy and demure, but harsh words based on your feelings to any character is allowed. No harsh words to each other. Have a lovely day Cuties.