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One Piece: Undying Flame

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Portgas D. Ace dies at Marineford—then opens his eyes fifty years too early, hurled into the era when monsters were still sharpening their teeth. Hiding his name as Ash, he’s swept onto a pirate deck wreathed in black fire under Captain Gray, a wily ex-Marine whose flame seems to recognize Ace’s. The seas hum with names that will become legend—Garp laughing through cannon-smoke, Zephyr all steel, Sengoku already a tactician, whispers of Rocks—and somewhere out there, a brash upstart the world will one day call Whitebeard. Ace hasn’t come alone. The Undying Flame System boots inside his skin with clean, simple windows: Status, Level, Skills, Quests, Titles, Party. Progress is classic and visible—XP from battles and training, points to raise core stats, mastery tracks for Flame and Haki (Observation, Armament, the sleeping spark of Conqueror’s), and unlockable techniques from both pirate and Marine schools. Geppo to run the sky, Soru to break distance, Tekkai to harden, Rankyaku, Shigan, Kami-e—Rokushiki becomes a path Ace can grind and graft onto fire, while his Mera-Mera no Mi evolves toward tighter compression, hotter cores, and brutal control. No shop. No cheats. Just sweat, quests, and the crew at his back. The weaknesses are real: seawater bites, seastone drags him under, and overextending his heat and stamina has teeth. Marines close in, rival flags test his will, and the System keeps asking the same question—What will you trade today for the power to change tomorrow? Every victory raises numbers; every decision writes character. To save the future he already died for, Ace must climb—level by level—through an age that eats the unprepared, until even legends have to make room for a man who burns and refuses to go out.
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Chapter 1 - Fifty-Two Years Ago — Ace from the Future

The ocean breathed in, as if the world itself had just drawn a blade and slid it back into its sheath.

The Blackflame Pirates had ended a sea battle minutes ago. Three pirate flags sheared off the map, three black scars left on the water. Smoke from their pitch-black flames draped the swells like mourning cloth; within it drifted ash and splinters that had once been hull, mast, and pride.

Grae—Grae Blackflame to his crew—lay back on the ship's emerald deck-turf and squinted at the sky, smiling with the ease of a man who had never learned to fear falling. In that posture he looked harmless, almost like a fed cat. Everyone in the New World knew better. Men who mistook him for harmless were the reason the sea kept gaining new scars.

"Grae, pull the fire back," said Pelly, the First Mate, voice bent around the cigarette glowing in the corner of his mouth. He spoke like he'd spent his ration of words a decade ago and rationed what remained.

"Aye." Grae rolled over a shoulder. A silent impulse—no gesture, no chant—and the black flame collapsed inward. Fire that clung like tar to shattered timbers unhooked itself and slithered across open water, retreating. It vanished into Grae like smoke being breathed in reverse. Ash lifted from the deck as the wind took it—memories nobody wished to keep.

They'd won, as usual. They'd lost something too, though none would admit it aloud: clean air. The ship smelled of burnt pitch and salt and the metallic sweetness that meant wounds yet to be tended.

"Movement!" called Demon, the shipwright, from the rail. His eyes, cloud-gray under low lids, measured more than they noted. "Port wreckage. Something hung in the crossbeams."

Grae did not rise. Pelly did. He flicked the cigarette into a tin cup and jerked his chin. Andrew, the cook—broad-shouldered, forearms braided with old pan burns—snagged a gaff pole and a rope. Demon took a hook and a carpenter's caution.

Up close, the ruin told its own story: cannon had boiled the planks; the mast had fallen like a felled pine; a hole where the captain's cabin should be; scorch arcs that were not Blackflame.

"Later," Pelly said when Demon drew breath to speculate. The second later was in his eyes, in case the first failed to persuade.

They found him cradled in a V of charred beams: a young man, ash-caked and soot-striped, skin rivered with heat-lines but not melted. He breathed. Barely. But he breathed.

"He alive?" Andrew nudged carefully with the gaff's blunt end.

Pelly knelt, fingers at throat, then wrist, then sternum, as if reading a map only he could see. "Alive," he said, puzzled, "and clinging like a spark in dry timber."

Grae's eyes were half-lidded. "Bring him," he said. "If the sea left him to us, it's rude to throw him back."

"Or wise," Demon murmured.

Pelly's mouth didn't move. "Bring him."

Collin—the ship's doctor—smelled of herbs and brine. His fingers were steady; his brow wasn't. He'd treated burns before. He knew signatures: the sear, the blister, the surrender of skin to heat. This boy's wounds told a different tale. Heat had pressed kisses into him and the skin had kissed back.

"Not ordinary burns," he murmured, more to the room than to Pelly and Demon. "The flesh hasn't melted—it wears the fire, like a borrowed coat it refuses to return. His life-flame is… irrationally bright."

"Can we fix him?" Pelly's voice remained even, but his eyes shifted. He looked past the boy—through him—at the shape of a future problem.

"We fix most things," Collin said with a shrug that apologized for the universe. "Healing Fruit: wounds mend—sickness less so. But this… this is will and heat. You don't stitch those. You persuade them."

Grae's shadow filled the door, uninvited as weather. "Persuade them, then."

"Aye, Captain," Collin said, and set to work.

Darkness and light arrived together when the stranger woke. Darkness: vision tunneling between beams, a man's silhouette in the doorway. Light: a low glow he felt but could not see, nested under his ribs—familiar as hunger, old as the first time he'd laughed without meaning to.

Salt. Smoke. Timber.

He tried to sit. His body argued; his ribs voted for later. A square-palmed hand pressed him gently back.

"You're on our ship," said the blade-flat voice. Pelly. He did not introduce himself.

The young man drew breath—and found fire. Not outside. Inside. The blaze slipped over him like a second skin. I know you, he thought, recognition warm and painful. I know you, even if everything else is foreign.

A spear of pain lanced his chest. He winced, searching for a hole he did not find. His stomach answered instead with a growl so theatrical that Andrew laughed from the foot of the cot.

"You slept for days," the cook said. "Days eat a man from the inside. Come. We'll stuff you back."

The stranger obeyed gravity and stood. His balance trembled once, then remembered who it was. Backs uncovered. Three men—none turn their heads, he noticed. Was it strength that let them be that casual, or naïveté that made them trust? Experience whispered a third answer: family. Rarer than either strength or naïveté on these waters.

They moved into a long corridor. Wooden walls wore newspaper clippings, bounties, and photos—pairs, trios, whole crews. The pictures caught teeth, arms, friendship, frozen in light. The ship smelled of blood and looked like home.

"Name?" Demon asked without turning. He had the habit of speaking to the air and making the air answer.

Silence held while the boy reached backward and forward in his mind, mining for a thing that would ring true when struck.

"Ace," he said at last. The syllable ran across his tongue like a spark over dry bark. Portgas D. Ace. The full name arrived a heartbeat later, heavy with memory.

Pelly glanced once, filed it like a coin. Demon's eyebrows agreed they'd heard it. Andrew approved of the name of a hungry man by bringing him straight to the mess.

The galley smelled of broth, yeast, and pepper heat that stung the nose like good news. Andrew set a bowl, a loaf, and a chipped mug before Ace with the solemnity of a priest laying out sacraments.

"Eat," he instructed. "Talk later. If you talk now, you'll only lie to yourself."

Ace ate. Broth first: salty, muscular, carrying the ghost of bones that had given themselves up for it. Bread second: rough-crumbed, too hot in the center, butter melting like a confession. The mug held something vaguely sweet and unhelpfully nutritious.

The first bowl helped him feel the edges of his body; the second helped those edges stop arguing. By the third, questions had grown legs.

"You pulled me from that wreck?" Ace asked.

"Cradled," Demon said. "Like the ship didn't want to lose you."

"What ship?"

"Name was a rumor," Pelly replied. "Flag was a copy of someone else's. Whoever lit that blaze knew what they were doing." His eyes flicked at Grae without seeming to.

"Not ours," Grae said mildly from the doorway, empty hands altering the room's temperature. "I don't brand the innocent."

"Only the guilty," Andrew said around a grin.

"Only the guilty," Grae agreed, returning the grin without warmth.

Ace tasted the word guilty and did not ask of what. Answers, he suspected, came like storms: when they liked, not when called.

He slept again (food is a lullaby) and dreamed of fire. Not the tame warmth under his ribs; a white roar that erased edges, turned ships to sketches in ash, split shadows into men and then turned men back into shadows. He stood in a field that wasn't a field, under a sky that wasn't a sky, and a voice he loved called him little brother like it always had, like it always would, even if the always had slipped its leash and run.

He woke with his hand clenched. It loosened around nothing.

"Your fire runs too fast," Collin said from a chair he hadn't occupied a moment before. The doctor had a habit of arriving between blinks. "Your body will keep up, if you ask kindly and don't make it sprint."

"How do I make fire walk?" Ace asked, voice rough from borrowed sleep.

"Feed it," Collin said. "Air, food, and a promise." His eyes cut to Pelly. "I told you—will and heat. They answer to covenant better than stitches."

Pelly tipped his chin. "He can stay." It wasn't a question, so there was no answer. That was how permission worked here.

Days arranged themselves into something like belonging. Not belonging—Ace knew the difference—but close enough to confuse the senses. He learned the weight of the deck under morning wind. Where the ship flexed when waves slapped from the wrong angle. That Andrew cooked better when he was mad, so sometimes Andrew's friends made him mad on purpose.

He learned Demon didn't lean on doorways so much as measure them, deciding how wide fate needed to be for the ship to pass. He learned Pelly played cards badly and never lost because losing is a different game from cards. He learned Grae's shadow felt warmer than the sun and colder than old debts, depending how close you stood to it.

Ace trained quietly. Not with weights and war cries, but with breath and the kindness the doctor had prescribed. He fed his fire air and food and promises:

I will not burn what I mean to keep.

I will not break what I need to cross.

I will not go out.

He practiced heat control the way a sailor learns to trim a sail: by feel; by the hum of the wood; by the ship's small corrections. Ignition became less explosion than language—something he could whisper. He coaxed a Heat Shroud no thicker than paper to cling to his forearms without eating the bandages beneath. He sweated through all three shirts Andrew owned and returned them worse.

"You'll owe me laundry for a month," Andrew grunted, though he grinned when he said it.

At night, when the others slept and the sea rehearsed its endless argument with the moon, Ace sat on the foredeck and listened for something with his eyes closed. Sometimes he heard it. Collin called it a heartbeat. Demon called it current under current. Pelly didn't name it; he didn't name things unless he planned to break or save them.

He didn't tell anyone what he called it. He called it home, and he hated that.

"What do you remember?" Demon asked one afternoon that pretended to be ordinary until it wasn't.

"Fire," Ace said. "A lot of it."

"What else?"

"A word," he admitted. "Brother. It keeps finding me."

"Where?"

Ace touched two places: his chest, and just above his right ear where headaches happen when truth knocks too hard. "Here. And here." He lowered his hand and flexed fingers that had once held something that mattered.

Demon nodded like a lighthouse nods: slow, unhelpful, dependable. "Then we start there," he said.

"Where?"

"With the part of the world that tries to take brothers away," Demon said mildly. "And with the part of you that won't let it."

Pelly, passing, did not slow. "We start," he said, "with work."

"What work?" Ace was startled into curiosity.

Pelly tossed him a coil of rope. "Knots," he said. "Everything you need to know about the world is in knots. Tying them. Untying them. Knowing when to cut them."

Ace caught the rope. It was heavier than it looked. Most things worth doing were.

Night came gray and shy. The sea wore silk. Stars threw their slow knives and missed on purpose. The crew slept without guilt. Ace did not. Sleep tried to bargain; Ace declined the price.

He stood at the bow and breathed: in, out, measured. The fire within answered in kind. Not a lion tonight. A fox. A candle cupped out of the wind. He pushed a palm forward. Heat answered—a flicker like a thought. He drew it back. The flicker dimmed without dying.

"Not bad," Grae said from the darkness.

"I didn't hear you," Ace said, unsurprised.

"You weren't supposed to," Grae said. "What you were supposed to do, you did. You asked, and your fire answered. Most men command and then wonder why flame becomes their enemy."

"I've had enough enemies."

Grae's teeth flashed. "You're young. You'll have more." He stepped closer; the air bent around him the way heat bends air. "Do you know what you are?"

"A problem?" Ace offered.

"A promise," Grae corrected. "To yourself. Maybe to more." He lifted a hand and did nothing with it; even doing nothing, the hand changed the temperature of the conversation. "We're sailing toward waters where promises get tested. I'll need men who can keep one."

"I can keep a promise," Ace said, and did not add I think.

"Good," Grae said, and vanished into the hatch like an idea someone decided to remember later.

Ace practiced keeping small promises: five breaths in a row without letting the heat run; a Heat Shroud no thicker than breath that didn't curl the plank beneath his palm; a flare at his fingertip that he snuffed without regret. He failed at the last one and smiled anyway. Failure is a step if you keep walking.

Morning came pewter and patient. Demon re-caulked a seam and handed Ace the tool without explanation. "Warm it," he said. "Not the wood. The tar."

Ace laid a hand's heat near the bead. The tar sighed, softened, slid where it belonged. Flax pressed, breath cooled. The join held like a mouth deciding to stop bleeding.

"Neat," Pelly said from nowhere in particular. The man collected corners the way other people collected coins.

Ace flexed his fingers. The ache in his chest answered with a small, approving pulse. He wasn't sure he liked that the ache had opinions.

They worked until the sea forgot there had been a battle and began composing a new day. Andrew banged pans into music and swore kindly at anyone who tried to help. Collin made him drink something medicinal and optimistic and called it tea.

By sundown, Ace had a place to sleep, a coil of rope to practice, and a deck beneath his feet that no longer felt like a question.

He stood at the rails while the horizon pulled on its dark coat. The word brother came again, uninvited. He didn't push it away this time.

Fifty-two years earlier—and yet from the future. A fire burning in two directions.