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One Piece: Starting Out as the Monkey King

Stranded on a deserted island as an eight-year-old boy in the brutal, monster-filled world of One Piece? Definitely not an ideal start for a transmigrator. However, fate had other plans when a careless birthday wish was granted. Armed with meta-knowledge of the future and a god-tier Devil Fruit—the Mythical Zoan: Monkey-Monkey Fruit, Model: Monkey King—the boy, now named Bardock, refuses to be a mere background character. With an indestructible body, Fiery Golden Eyes that can perceive the microscopic, and the Flying Nimbus, he tames the savage island and dives into hellish training to survive. His journey truly kicks off when he manages to hitch a ride on the Red Hair Pirates' galleon. There, he not only becomes Shanks's favorite barbecue chef but also unexpectedly awakens his own Conqueror's Haki (Haoshoku Haki) while witnessing a sky-splitting duel between Shanks and "Hawkeye" Dracule Mihawk. Now, Bardock has dropped anchor at the Sabaody Archipelago—a chaotic hub crawling with wanted pirates and corrupt World Nobles. Crewless, completely broke, and blocked by World Government bureaucracy from returning to the West Blue, Bardock has to get creative to make some quick cash. And so, an absurd legend is born. Hidden behind sunglasses and a familiar blue hat, Bardock starts cleaning the streets of low-bounty pirates in the dead of night with nothing but a metal baseball bat. Concealing his true monstrous strength, he cashes in his targets at the Marine Base under a pseudonym that will one day make a certain reindeer doctor cry in absolute frustration: "Tony Tony Chopper," the infamous bounty hunter dubbed "Blackjack Chopper." With no cheat system to hold his hand and no powerful patron to protect him, Bardock is determined to assemble his own crew and carve his name into the annals of the sea. This is the story of a boy wielding the power of the Monkey King, ready to turn the Grand Line upside down in his pursuit of absolute freedom!
lestusk · 325.4k Views

Two Piece: REWRITE

A graveyard for souls. A playground for monsters. Monkey D. Luffy sets out into the East Blue with a single, absolute ambition: to become the Pirate King of all the Blue. But on these unforgiving seas, raw determination isn't enough to survive. Every island holds deadly consequences, every clash leaves scars, and the sea shows no mercy to naive boys in straw hats. To conquer the Grand Line, Luffy must build a crew, survive the brutal environment of not just the seas, but also different kinds of demons sailing onto them. Will Luffy’s name ring across the world as the Pirate King? Or will the ruthlessness of the deep drown his ambition, turning his tale into just another ghost story lost beneath the waves? ————————————————————————————— Author's Note: Welcome to Two Piece: REWRITE! Like many long-time fans, I love One Piece, but I’m writing this story to create my own definitive take on the ocean world. Truth be told, as the canon narrative evolved, it didn't fully deliver what I personally wanted out of the series. This reimagining isn't just another 1:1 copy of the original plot. My goal is to make the world darker, grittier, and higher-stakes while still retaining Oda’s signature goofiness, heart, and core ingredients. You’ll also notice the scaling is tuned up to make the world feel more dangerous and powerful, but don't worry, Luffy won't be blowing up planets pre-timeskip, but you'll definitely see the shift in power as the story unfolds! Expect total creative freedom, sharper action, earned consequences, and a plot inspired by some of the fandom's best ideas. If you’re looking for a fresh, high-stakes take on the world of One Piece, hit that [Collect] button and join the adventure, nakama!
RageMagma · 5.3k Views