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Fall:The story with an end

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Before time had a name, a single being fell from the sky—a Fallen Angel. With him came glowing, divine Tablets. As the world burned and crumbled, the Tablets restored it—embedding themselves deep within the earth and leaving behind mysterious Codes: living symbols of power that obey those who speak them aloud. But in a world built on strength and corrupted by greed, a child was born without any Code—marked only by two silent eyes on his chest. At the same time, far away, another child was born—blessed with power, destined to protect him
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Chapter 1 - The Fall!

Chapter 1:The Fall!

"Is that… a creature in the sky?"

"It's flying—no, falling!"

"Wings… huge, white wings—!"

"An angel?!"

"Look! Behind him—those are... massive stones!"

"No, Tablets! They're glowing! Symbols—everywhere!"

"They're crashing—get back!"

BOOM.

BOOM.

BOOM.

"The earth is… dying…"

"Everything's burning!"

"No… wait…"

"The world—it's rebuilding?!"

"Plants. Forests. Water. Everything's coming back!"

"What is this… power?"

"From the Tablets."

"They buried themselves beneath the earth…"

"Those symbols… they're not just writing. They're Codes."

"And if you say them aloud—"

"They obey. They're Commands."

Thousands of Years Later – Koha, the Heaven Between Three Mountains

(Royal Palace – Night)

The queen screams in labor.

Servant: "It's a boy!"

Priest: "Bring him here—wait…"

Queen: "What's wrong?"

Priest: "He has… no Code."

King Yashki: "What?!"

Priest: "No mark. Nothing. Not even a single line."

Queen: "That's not possible…"

Priest: "Wait… there is something."

King: "Show me."

Priest: "On his chest. Right side."

Queen: "That's… that's not a symbol."

King: "It looks like… eyes. Two of them."

Priest: "They stare back. This is no ordinary mark."

Queen: "He's still ours."

King: "He must be hidden. Seal it. Say nothing to the people."

(Somewhere Else – Same Night)

Woman: "He's beautiful…"

Man: "What should we call him?"

Woman: "He'll have a simple life. A strong life."

Man: "He's already got a Code. See? On his hand."

Woman: "He's special, I can feel it…"

Five Months Later – Koha

Queen: "Another son."

Priest: "This one is blessed. His Code shines like a rising sun."

King: "He will be Koha's future."

Priest: "And the first?"

King: "Kept away. He must remain a shadow."

Years Later – Training Grounds

Master: "Again!"

Hakari: "I fell…"

Master: "Then stand."

Hakari: "I'm trying."

Master: "You were born without Code. So you train harder than all."

Hakari: "I will. I have to see her again…"

Master: "Then bleed for it. And rise again."

Eight Years Later – Royal Castle

Akami: "Brother!"

Hakari: "Akami… you've changed."

Akami: "Watch this. 'Command: Sky Bow!'"

A bow made of light appears in Akami's hands.

Akami: "Command: Scatterburst!"

Arrows explode in midair like fireworks.

Hakari: "You're strong."

Akami: "You trained harder."

Hakari: "I read your letters."

Akami: "I sent hundreds."

Later – City Streets

Akami: "This place smells amazing…"

Hakari: "Wait. That man. He's… handing a child to someone."

Akami: "That kid's bruised."

Hakari: "Let's go."

Hakari: "I want to buy."

Seller: "Buy what? You're nobility, yes?"

Hakari: "I'm from Velvet."

Seller: "The nation of flowers..."

Hakari: "Royal court."

Seller: "My lord, forgive me. W-what are you searching for?"

Hakari: "What you're hiding."

Seller: "...Come in."

They walk through a shadowed gate.

Akami: "It's dark…"

Seller: "Further."

They step into a room filled with cages.

Akami: "These are… people."

Hakari: "Children. And adults."

Akami: "He's trafficking them."

Hakari: "Yeah."

Meanwhile – Royal Castle

Minister: "Your Majesty, our command wielders have doubled."

King Yashki: "Koha is strong. But not invincible. Speak."

Minister: "We are independent, but... still dependent in some ways."

King: "On what?"

Minister: "Them. The dictator."

King: "How many times have I told you not to speak that name?"

Minister: "I—I'm sorry, my lord—"

King: "Say it again and you die before nightfall."

Minister: "Understood… my king."