Ficool

Black Mana : The Silent Vendetta

Hassan_Adouda
7
chs / week
The average realized release rate over the past 30 days is 7 chs / week.
--
NOT RATINGS
1.1k
Views
Synopsis
Rio, the sole survivor of the Guardians of Memory bloodline, seeks revenge against the White Shadow organization that murdered his family and stole his memories in a world shrouded in eternal winter. With chilling composure and overwhelming charisma, Rio uses the deadly Mana of Black Ice to absorb the energy of his enemies and reclaim the fragments of his stolen past. A dark journey of identity recovery and destruction awaits him amidst the frozen ruins of Opal City.
VIEW MORE

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: The Architecture of Frost

The scent of "The Charred Stem" tavern was a thick, offensive slurry of stale sweat, cheap tobacco, and the ozone-heavy stench of burning mana from the flickering lamps. Ryu didn't flinch as he pushed the heavy oaken door. It didn't creak; instead, the frost coating its iron hinges shattered with a brittle, crystalline snap under the weight of his hand.

​Inside, the cacophony was enough to make a lesser man recoil, but Ryu moved with a measured, predatory grace. His long black coat trailed a wake of unnatural chill. The air around him shimmered—not from fear, but because the Black Mana in his veins was violently hemorrhaging heat from every cubic inch of his surroundings, acting like a thermal vacuum.

​"Water. No ice," Ryu said, his voice a low, sandpaper rasp as he claimed a seat at the far end of the bar.

​The barkeep, a man whose face was a roadmap of jagged scars, looked at him with a sneer. "Water's expensive here, boy. Heating is even more so. You got the coin to pay for the space you're freezing?"

​Ryu didn't answer with words. He placed his left hand flat on the scarred timber of the bar. Slowly, the Black Mana began to crawl from beneath his fingernails, etching the wood with patterns that looked like charred, frozen veins. The mana was heavy, viscous, like a liquid desperately trying to become a solid. The empty glass in front of the barkeep frosted over until it spider-webbed with cracks.

​"I don't pay for warmth," Ryu said, his steel-gray eyes boring into the man's pupils. "I'm here for information on Marquis Faruq. You have ten seconds before the mana in this room finds a more permanent home in your lungs. Start counting."

​A sudden, suffocating silence strangled the tavern. Mercenaries who had been laughing a moment ago instinctively reached for their hilt-wraps. But there was something in Ryu's stance—a terrifying, logical stillness—that made them hesitate. His charisma wasn't rooted in bravado or muscle; it was the absolute, icy certainty that he could liquidate everyone in the room before a single blade cleared its scabbard.

​"Faruq?" the barkeep stammered, his breath hitching as the temperature plummeted. "He's in the Eastern Keep... but he's guarded by a full cohort of the 'White Shadow.' Going there is suicide."

​"Suicide is an emotional act," Ryu replied, rising with a ghost-like fluidity, leaving behind a table blackened by frostbite. "I am here for a simple calculation: the retrieval of what was stolen, and the liquidation of the thief."

​Ryu stepped back out into the obsidian alleys of Opal. The wind howled through the skeletal ruins of the city, but he felt nothing. The hollow ache in his chest—the void left by the Night of Harvest—burned with a cold intensity that no blizzard could match. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a silver pocket watch. Its glass was shattered, its hands frozen forever at 3:00 AM.

​That was the exact moment his world had ended fifteen years ago.

​He looked toward the horizon, where the jagged spires of the Eastern Keep pierced the bruised, lightless sky. For a normal mage, the Keep was an impregnable fortress of anti-mana wards. For Ryu, it was a series of variables to be solved.

​Logic, he reminded himself, is the only thing that doesn't bleed.

​He began to channel his mana into his right arm. It didn't glow with the heroic blue of the past; it manifested as a swirling, light-eating smoke that condensed into jagged shards of dark crystal. This was his burden. To use this power was to feel his own body turn to stone, a slow, agonizing transformation into the very element he commanded.

​He didn't care. Pain was just data.

​As he approached the first perimeter of the Keep, the "White Shadow" sentinels came into view. They wore the pristine white robes of the cult, a sickening contrast to the ash-covered streets. They were "Harvesters"—the men who turned human souls into fuel.

​Ryu felt a flicker of something dark deep within his subconscious—a vague, distorted memory of his mother's face, flickering like a dying candle. He suppressed it. Emotion was a distraction. Focus on the mana. Focus on the kill.

​He raised his hand, and the frost began to sing.