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The Demonic Mad Immortal

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After the Red Moon Sect is annihilated by the “righteous,” a menial disciple is hunted as a scapegoat. In the ruins, he bonds with a forbidden legacy—an echo of the Mad Immortal—whose path is called demonic only because it tears off the masks people live behind. Each realm he crosses forces him to face his heart-devil and the hidden games of immortals, until he must decide whether to shatter heaven’s rules or become their sharpest blade.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: Ashes Under a Red Moon

The night the moon bled, the mountain became a bowl of fire.

Yan Ming crouched behind a fallen archway while ash drifted like slow, dirty snow. The Red Moon Sect's spires had cracked and bent; glazed tiles slid and shattered in the courtyards below. In the distance, a bell kept clanging against nothing, the rope that had pulled it burned away—just the bronze's heat-sick song tolling itself into silence.

He tasted iron. He realized it was not blood, but the air itself—the mountain breathing out the last of its beams and altars.

"Ming!" a voice hissed.

He turned. Su Qian—outer-sect senior by two years, hair burned to uneven lengths, sleeves torn—stumbled from the smoke, a broken sword in one hand. Her eyes brimmed with something that might have been a laugh if both of them hadn't been slick with soot.

"You're alive," he said, and hated how the relief cost him breath. She was the only person in this sect of a thousand who had ever called him anything but "boy."

"Not for long if you keep standing," she said, grabbing his wrist. "The alliance is on the west ridge. They're sweeping inward. We have to cut down through the granaries and—"

A beam exploded, showering sparks. Footsteps clattered over tile—steel-capped, confident. Righteous footsteps.

Su Qian dragged him into the shadow of the arch. Yan Ming's heart beat so loudly he worried it would rattle debris loose. He counted breaths, as Master Yun had taught the outer-disciples when they were allowed a morsel of the inner training: stabilize the qi, count to seven between the in and out, tether fear to the breath. It worked until someone screamed, a sound thinned by distance but raw enough to slice the air. Two more screams followed. Then none.

"They're slaughtering everyone," Ming whispered, and hated how small he sounded.

"Not everyone." Su Qian's jaw tightened. "The ones with names will be taken. Paraded. The ones like us…"

He knew how that sentence ended.

Righteousness needed its demons.

A spearhead flashed, a slice of moonlight through smoke. Two men in pale blue armor stepped into the courtyard, their emblems catching the red glow—Azure Sky Pavilion. One of them pointed with his spear. "There. Fresh prints."

Su Qian pressed something rough into his palm. A bone fragment, polished smooth on one side; on the other, etched with a whorl that drank light. "Take it," she whispered. "The old kiln chamber—beneath the third granary. There's a black door. It opens for this."

He stared. "What is it?"

"I don't know." Her eyes lied. She did. "But the masters fought to keep the alliance away from that door. If there's a chance at life, it's there."

"And you?"

"I'm a decoy." She smiled crookedly, as if the word could be made into a joke. "I'll draw them left. You go right."

He grabbed her forearm. "Qian—"

"Live," she said, and ran.

The men shouted and followed. The one with the spear thrust too eagerly; his foot caught on shattered tile and he stumbled. Su Qian took the opening, flicking her broken sword up, scoring his cheek. Blood splashed bright in the smoky dark. He bellowed. She dodged away, swift and low, and vanished into the colonnade, the soldiers pounding after her.

Ming did as he was told. He went right.

He skirted the edge of collapse and death, moving through corridors he had scrubbed a thousand times. The familiar unreality hurt. Here was the cistern he had fallen into at twelve, the winter he had been small and hungry and trying to steal peaches. Here was the mural of the moon goddess riding a carp through stars, the paint flaking at the edges. Here was the granary, its door split down the middle like a mouth gaping in pain.

Inside, charred rice still steamed in the choked air. Ming covered his nose with his sleeve, slipped around toppled baskets, and found the trapdoor by memory more than sight. When he pulled it up, cool air breathed up from the darkness below. He held the bone fragment in his fist, looked once more at the door, and dropped.

It was colder in the depths than any winter he remembered. A passage sloped down at a patient angle. The walls were brick, damp, flecked with salt. His footsteps sounded too loud. Once, a drip struck the stone and he flinched.

The corridor ended at a door, black as oil, without hinge or handle. He held up the bone fragment. The etched whorl answered, a silver thread knitting itself into a spiral that matched the door's grain. The door sighed. It opened.

The kiln chamber was not a kiln. It had been one, long ago—bricks bowed inwards, the ceiling soot-black—but the fire here now was of a different kind. A violet glow pulsed from a stone plinth at the center of the room. On the plinth lay a thing that was not stone, not jade, not anything he could name. It was a shard of someone's idea of bone—curved like a rib, notched like a flute, veins of faint light running in it like trapped lightning.

His skin prickled. He knew this should have been a sacred moment—kneel, bow, whisper prayers. But outside, the sect was dying. He walked to the plinth and picked up the bone.

Cold surged up his arm like a fish biting through the skin of a lake. He gasped. The chamber was gone.

He stood in a courtyard of the wrong night. The moon was not red here but a pale coin—too close, too large, with a rim of shadow like a bruise. A man sat on the edge of a dry well, lacing and unlacing his fingers. His hair was white not with age but with something like winter sunlight. His robe was black, but the black had a sheen, as if it had been dipped in oil. His face was ordinary. His eyes were not.

"Hello," the man said mildly. "You're late."

Ming swallowed. "Who are you?"

"The name they remember is messy. Mad Immortal. Demon. Traitor. Apothecary of Pains. Once, someone called me Teacher." He smiled. "Once."

Ming's mouth was dry. "Are you a soul?"

"A question asked with the assumption that there is a you and a me that can be placed in jars." The man looked up at the too-close moon. "A remnant. A record. A mirror in which you will either scratch your face trying to make yourself pretty, or recognize you have ash smeared everywhere and decide what you will do with that knowledge."

Outside the illusion, Ming heard a muffled boom—distant, but closer than before. The righteous alliance was thorough. He forced the words out. "If you can teach, teach me something that lets me live past tonight."

The man's eyes warmed, as if something precious had been said. "Good. Honesty. We can work with that."

He stood. The dry well breathed a low sound that might have been water remembering itself. "Our path was named demonic because it refuses comfort. It is not blood. It is not cruelty for the joy of it. It is the art of not lying to the heart. They call that madness because comfort is a god to them."

"Will this path save me?" Ming asked.

"It will make you difficult to kill," the man said, amused. "Listen."

He spoke, and words compressed into meanings too dense for syllables. The courtyard contracted. A vertical thread opened in Ming's chest, tugging at something he had never examined. Fear, small and trembling. Shame, raw as a flayed nerve. Rage, carefully packed away. The thread ran through these like beads, and when it moved, the beads clicked, and a sound rose—low, dark, beautiful.

"The Eclipse Heart Sutra," said the not-man, "takes what gnaws and makes it knead. Your fear is food. Your shame is spice. Your anger is fuel. If you pretend you do not have them, they will eat you. If you name them, you may eat first."

"How?"

"Breath. Spine. Word."

The man's palm touched the bone in Ming's hand; the pattern on it flared. "Breathe through the fear, but not past it. See it, and let it see you. Straighten until the spine is a river. Speak this word—not aloud, not with tongue. Speak it where your heart thinks thoughts it does not admit."

A word unfolded in Ming's mind. It was not any language he knew, but it dug into a place under the ribs and fit.

The room surged back—the real room, or the one he would call real until he learned better. He was on his knees, the bone pressed to his chest. Boots thundered in the corridor. Someone yelled, "The black door! He's inside!"

Ming's breath gusted out of him, white in the cold. Fear scraped his insides with little claws. He looked down at it, the way he would look at a rat in a granary, and did not pretend it wasn't there. He breathed through it. He straightened his spine until each vertebra felt like a bead in the thread the man had plucked. He spoke the word in the place he had never named.

The fear changed temperature. Not gone—never gone—but warmer, flowing, a thing that could move. Heat pooled low in his abdomen. Something in his chest tilted, and a faint line of violet drew itself up his back, star to star. He felt each point like a lamp being lit.

The black door groaned. It would not hold.

"A technique is a story," said the man-who-wasn't, his voice threading under the rising panic like a melody under a drum. "Tell it in your body. Tell it now."

When the door smashed open and three men in Azure Sky armor spilled into the chamber, Yan Ming moved.

He did not do anything grand. He stepped left when he would have stepped back. He let the spear that should have pierced him pass through where his shoulder had been and turned the exhalation of that step into a twist. The second man's sword slashed, and Ming felt, very distinctly, the fear that would have frozen him amuse itself by sharpening the turn of his hips. The blade cut air. Ming's palm struck the second man's wrist, not hard enough to break but exactly enough to loosen. The sword fell. It rang. The sound it made was silver; the silver went down his spine like rain on bronze.

The third man had hung back, eyes narrowed, sensing too late that this prey bit. He threw a talisman. The slip flared in the air, flaked to ash, and a chain of blue light yawned open, links clamping toward Ming's throat.

Ming spoke the word inside.

The chain kissed him and passed through. Not through his flesh—through something that had stepped half a breath to the side, the way a shadow steps when a cloud rearranges the moon. The chain closed on emptiness, snapped, and fell into a drift of cold sparks.

The men stared.

"Demon technique," breathed the spear-bearer, blood still drying on his cheek. He steadied his grip. "It is as the elders said. Kill him."

The word demon should have stung. It slid off Ming like water.

"Your path will look like a lie to them," murmured the not-man, as if they had all the time in the world. "Do not explain."

Ming didn't. He moved. He did not strike to kill. He struck to break proximities and lines—an elbow here, a shoulder there. He felt fear rise again when the spear bit his sleeve and nicked his skin; he let the fear pour down into the river of his spine and turn the next step into a leap higher than he knew he could take. He caught a ribbed ledge, swung, landed over them, and ran into the passage they had cleared with their bodies.

"After him!" the spear-bearer roared, voice cracking into something that sounded suspiciously like fright.

Ming ran with his breath like a drum at his back. The corridor angled and angled again; he crashed through a niche stacked with jars of something that had once been pickled and was now only black. He came up in a storage hall, the roof fallen and the stars watching, pale and wrong in the ash-smudged sky. The mountain's wind hit his face like a slap. He tasted blood now—his own. He kept moving.

Above, the bell had stopped.

He did not know if Su Qian was alive. He wanted to think she was. He could not afford to think at all.

He reached the old path that skirted the glazed cliff and led down to the stream where the outer-sect children had bathed in summer. It was choked with fallen pine, but the stone under the needles still remembered the soles of his feet. He slid, fell, caught himself. He spoke the word again, softly, as if apologizing to the night for the trouble.

The stream was there. It ran black under a skin of ash. He waded in. The cold bit so hard he almost cried out. He bent, scooped handfuls over his hair, scrubbed the soot from his face until the skin burned. When he stood, his reflection in the water looked like a person he had never met.

"Two choices," said the voice at his shoulder without breath or sound. "Run until dawn and become a ghost among the villages; live small; die old. Or turn toward those who did this and find the end of their excuse."

"The second choice sounds like death," Ming whispered.

"It is," said the not-man, without pity and without cruelty. "The first is also death. One of them is honest."

The water carried away what ash would allow. Ming stood, dripping, bone shard a pulse of violet against his skin.

"What if I do not want to be a demon?" he asked the stream.

The man who wasn't a man smiled, the way one smiles at a child who has asked their first real question. "Then do not lie when they call you one."

Something in him settled. It did not feel like madness. It felt like putting his feet where the ground agreed to be ground.

He turned from the stream. The forest shivered. The mountain exhaled, long and tired. Behind him, on a ridge, a light flared—green this time, a sect-signal, ugly as envy. They were still hunting.

"Where?" he asked.

"East," said the voice, amused. "Into the places they tell stories about to keep children from wandering. The Abyssal Frontier. The first of many edges. You will need a name that is not the one they think they know."

Yan Ming tasted the word on his tongue, the one he had spoken inside. It meant eclipse and it meant truth, but it did not mean his own name.

"Names come when earned," said the not-man gently. "Live for now."

He ran toward the east. The trees closed around him, blacker than the sky, the path slanting toward a darkness that felt like the inside of a new word. Behind him, the mountain where he had scrubbed floors and stolen peaches and learned to count his breaths lay broken under a red moon. Before him, a light he could not see yet waited with teeth and questions.

He did not lie to his fear. He took it with him. It kept pace, and for the first time since the night lit up, it did not chase. It ran beside.

End of Chapter 1