Dalutnon (grinning darkly):
"You really think you can beat me, boy?"
Ren (panting, eyes fierce):
"I don't think... I know. I'll kill you. Right here."
Dalutnon (smirking):
"...Funny."
(Dalutnon grabs Ren's arm mid-charge with terrifying speed, his grip crushing like steel.)
Dalutnon:
"Let's see how strong your resolve is without this."
(With a sudden twist — CRACK — he breaks Ren's arm. Ren screams.)
Ren (through gritted teeth, in agony):
"Aaahh— You bastard…!"
Dalutnon:
"Still standing? Impressive. But foolish."
(Dalutnon punches Ren hard in the chest, sending him collapsing into the dirt, blood dripping from his mouth.)
Ren (barely moving):
"...I won't die... not like this..."
(Summoning all his strength, Ren tries to raise his sword with his remaining arm — but—)
Dalutnon (coldly):
"Wrong move."
(CRACK — he snaps Ren's other arm brutally.)
Ren (screaming):
"GAAAHHH—!!"
(Dalutnon raises his fist to end it, his eyes blank with murder.)
Dalutnon (low, savage):
"Die."
---
(Suddenly, a bright flash of light — a portal opens. A voice echoes.)
Hazo (commanding):
"Dalutnon. Come here. Now."
Dalutnon (pauses, annoyed):
"Tch. What timing..."
(He glances down at the broken, bloody Ren.)
Dalutnon (to himself, with a smile):
"I was going to kill him..."
(He vanishes into the portal, leaving Ren lying half-dead, twitching in silence.)
(Inside a shadowy chamber filled with glowing runes — Dalutnon steps out of the portal, fists still dripping blood.)
Dalutnon (angrily):
"Why the hell did you teleport me, Hazo? I had him! I was going to kill that brat!"
Hazo (calm, sharp):
"You disobeyed orders. That wasn't your kill to take."
Dalutnon (gritting his teeth):
"Tch… the work's done anyway. I found that old man's hideout—Zaiba. But I'm saving that for Lord Kon."
Hazo (nods):
"Good. But if you had killed Ren just now, you would've triggered something dangerous."
Dalutnon (mocking):
"Oh? What? Some dramatic 'future hero awakening'? Spare me."
Hazo (tone cold, serious):
"No. I mean punishment. From someone far above your league."
Dalutnon (curious but dismissive):
"...Who?"
Hazo (steps forward, eyes glowing slightly):
"Hiroshi
(Dalutnon goes quiet, the name clearly unsettling him.)
Hazo:
"If he found out you broke that rule, he would erase you from existence. Instantly. You're strong, Dalutnon — but you're nothing to him."
Dalutnon (smirking, but tense):
"Tch… So he's still watching us. That monster..."
Hazo:
"Always has been. Be grateful I pulled you out."
Dalutnon (turns away, fists clenched):
"...Next time, I won't stop. Even if it's suicide
Here's your scene rewritten into powerful dialogue format, preserving the emotion, pacing, and tone of your story:
(At the edge of the Kisdain Society medical wing — Tai slams his fist on the ground, bruised and bleeding.)
Tai (frustrated, teeth clenched):
"Damn it... I couldn't beat him. I—I should've been stronger..."
Mitsui (placing a hand on Tai's shoulder):
"No, Tai. Don't blame yourself. You gave it your all. Let's see if Ren can handle him now… I just hope he's okay."
*(A silence falls — but it's broken as a shadow appears at the corridor's entrance.)
Hiroshi walks in, carrying someone in his arms. Blood trails down. Everyone gasps.)
Yuna (rushing forward):
"Ren?!"
Hiroshi (solemnly):
"...Yeah. We lost him."
(But then, a faint groan — Ren opens his eyes, barely alive.)
Ren (weakly):
"Not yet... I'm still breathing…"
Hiroshi (to his team, immediately):
"Teleport him. Now. His energy is fading — he won't last long here!"
(A glowing sigil appears under Ren's body as Kisdain medics activate emergency transport. The scene ends with the light fading and Tai clenching his fists once more.)
Tai (whispering):
"Ren… hang in there. I won't let that monster win."
Let me know if you want this to transition into a Ren vs Dalutnon flashback, or maybe a scene with Kon reacting in silence, watching everything unfold from afar.
[Scene: Outside the battlefield – nightfall, rain begins to fall lightly. Ren lies in Tai's arms, wounded and fading.]
Tai (panicked, shaking Ren):
"Ren?! Hey! What happened?!"
Ren (weakly, coughing):
"...Tai… I'm sorry…"
Tai (tears in his eyes):
"Don't say that! Don't leave me like this, bro!"
Ren (gritting his teeth, fading):
"That guy… Dalut… something… I couldn't stop him…"
(Ren collapses unconscious in Tai's arms. Footsteps echo behind — a calm, deep voice speaks.)
Cardo (stepping forward):
"You want to take revenge, don't you?"
Tai (looking up, surprised):
"Cardo-sensei?! What do you mean…?"
Cardo (serious):
"I can teach you. But only if you're truly ready."
Tai (determined, but confused):
"Teach me what? What do I have to do?"
Cardo (turns, walking away calmly):
"Follow me."
---
[Scene: Cardo's quiet dojo — a teapot steaming. He sips tea calmly as Tai watches, impatient.]
Tai:
"...This is your training?"
Cardo (smirking):
"This is part of my work. Focus and calm. Now sit."
Tai (sits, uneasy):
"So... what do I have to do?"
Cardo (placing a glowing stone before Tai):
"You must learn to control the beast inside you. This stone will help you focus."
(Tai places his hand on the stone — instantly collapses.)
---
[Scene Shift: Tai wakes up in a strange dimension — a mirror-world of storms and shadows. Cardo appears beside him.]
Tai (shocked):
"Where... where am I?!"
Cardo:
"A dimension that connects to your soul — where time flows differently. One day here is ten out there. You'll train your body, mind, and the beast within."
Tai:
"Only four days…?"
Cardo (stern):
"Four days in your world. Here, that's forty."
Tai (shaken):
"Forty…?"
Cardo (placing a hand on Tai's shoulder):
"This won't be easy. You'll face your limits and break them. But you know why I'm doing this… right?"
Tai (clenching his fists):
"...Yeah. I have to. For Ren. For everyone."
Cardo (stepping back):
"Then stand up, warrior. The real battle begins now