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Error in the Loom : I Am the Forbidden One

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In a world where The Loom of Fate dictates every human destiny through magical threads, Six is nothing more than a Grade F student—regarded by all as mere "trash." However, the world is unaware that Six is a "glitch" in the system, a being born without a thread of fate. Aided by a mysterious system, Six possesses the power to bypass the codes of reality, steal power, and sever the destiny of his enemies.
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Chapter 1 - The Unwoven Thread

Thick crimson blood dripped slowly from my fingertips, striking the slick black stone floor that gleamed like a dark mirror. Every drop left a permanent dark stain—one of the forbidden hues, a color that was never meant to exist in what they called the world's perfect weave.

All around me lay twenty-three Weavers' Guards, motionless. Their pristine white robes, symbols of purity and absolute devotion to the Great Loom, were now stained with the very color they had despised their entire lives. Their golden-glowing swords lay scattered across the ground, their hilts snapped, their light fading fast as the lives of their bearers slipped away.

My breath came in ragged, burning gasps that tasted of metal. A deep gash cut across my left ribs—the last blow to land before I had severed their life threads one by one. I never wanted to kill them. I never wanted to become the monster the whole realm feared. But when blades were pressed to my throat, when they looked at me not as a person, but as filth to be swept from this woven world… there was no other choice left.

"You are a flaw, Lucius."

The voice boomed across the vast chamber, echoing off stone walls carved with thousands of intricate patterns—every curve, every straight line, a life, a meeting, a fate fixed since the dawn of time. I turned slowly toward the great archway. There stood Valerius, High Lord of the Guard—the man who had taught me to read the threads of destiny, who had once rested a hand on my shoulder and called me one of the finest works the Loom had ever spun.

Now his usual calm face was twisted with cold fury and open revulsion. In his hand he gripped the Weaver's Blade, forged solely to erase anything that defied the Great Loom's will. Its edge blazed bright, as if hungry to devour all it deemed imperfect.

"This world follows a pattern set from the very beginning," he went on, his steps heavy and measured as he drew near, each stride leaving a trail of light on the dark floor. "Every birth, every death, every meeting and parting—all are woven with care to keep chaos at bay, to prevent ruin, to hold back unbridled destruction.

And you… you are a fatal mistake. A rogue thread tangled into a tapestry that should have been flawless. Your very existence unravels the balance. You can rewrite, sever, reshape anything that has been set. This world cannot survive with you in it. You must be unmade, so the original pattern may be restored."

I laughed, quietly at first, then louder until the sound bounced off the high stone pillars and sent fine dust drifting from the ceiling. The pain in my ribs faded, replaced by a burning anger in my chest—anger at those who dared claim they knew what was best for every living soul, anger at a system that had turned us all into puppets with no right to choose our own path.

"Who gave you the right to decide what is right, Valerius?" I asked, my voice steady and unflinching, no trace of fear even with death hovering close. I slowly raised my right hand. Thick black smoke swirling with deep crimson light coiled around my fingers, moving like living serpents—the power I was born with, the gift they called a curse, the very thing that made me their 'Mistake'.

"Who appointed the Loom as our god? Who gave it the right to write the fate of a child born into poverty who starves to death? To tear apart two souls who love each other? To condemn someone simply because they do not match what it demands?"

I took one step forward, and the air all around us shuddered violently. The patterns carved into the walls rippled, and fine cracks spiderwebbed across their surface.

"You call me a mistake," I continued, locking eyes with Valerius as doubt flickered across his face. "But have you ever stopped to wonder? Perhaps the weave you are so proud of is the one that is broken. Perhaps all these rules, all these boundaries… are nothing but lies hidden behind pretty words like 'peace' and 'balance'. Perhaps I am the only chance this world has to truly live—not just to move as someone else commands."

Valerius frowned, his grip tightening on his sword hilt. "You do not understand what you are saying, Lucius. If fate can be altered at whim, there will be total chaos. Worlds will crumble by the thousands, millions of lives will be lost to nothing."

"Chaos is better than eternal slavery," I shot back. "I do not want to destroy this world. I only want to give it the right to choose—just as I claim that right for myself."

I glanced toward the great curtain at the far end of the hall—the Veil of Destiny, where thousands of glowing threads moved on their own, painting pictures of the past, present, and future as they were meant to be. As I took another step toward it, the fine cracks spread like ancient roots, racing across the stone and piercing the Veil itself, cutting through every thread it held. The once-gentle golden light now pulsed in panic, as if the weave itself knew a turning point had come.

I turned back to Valerius, and this time my smile held no anger—only unshakable resolve.

"I am the flaw in the pattern," I said, soft but unyielding, the words echoing as if spoken by a thousand voices at once. "And I will make sure this world is never the same again. Whether you like it or not, I will tear down the walls that bind us all. And if that makes me the enemy of every realm… then so be it. Let me be that enemy."

Valerius said no more. He lifted his sword high, and its golden light blazed so bright it nearly blinded me. Behind him, dozens more Weavers' Guards stepped from the shadows, weapons drawn, ready to strike as one.

But I did not step back. I looked toward the Veil of Destiny, now splitting wide open, and deep in my heart I knew—this was only the beginning. The first thread woven by no hand but my own.