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My Rizz System

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Chapter 1 - The High-Voltage Nerd

The heavy rain hammered against my dorm room window, a rhythmic drumming that matched the frantic clicking of my mechanical keyboard. My name is Leo, and for six months, I've been a ghost in my own life. I'm the guy you walk past without seeing.

​But tonight, the simulation was about to glitch.

​I stared at the glowing green lines of code scrolling across my glasses. "Almost there," I whispered, my voice raspy. I pulled the experimental Neural-Link headband over my temples. I'd rigged it with liquid-nitrogen cooling tubes—a dangerous, uncertified mess of wires. I was desperate to stop being invisible.

​A massive, house-shaking crack of thunder roared outside.

​"System, initiate sync!" I shouted.

​Suddenly, a bolt of lightning slammed into the campus transformer. A billion volts of electricity surged through the walls, hitting my rig. I felt a white-hot spike drive through my brain. My vision exploded into a kaleidoscope of binary, and I screamed as a woman's digital, echoing giggle filled my skull.

​Then, everything went black.

​When I finally opened my eyes, the room was silent. I was face-down on the cold linoleum, my head throbbing.

​"Am I dead?" I groaned.

​"Dead? Please," a silky, mocking voice purred right inside my ears. "You're barely even awake, Leo. And honestly? Your dreams are incredibly boring."

​I bolted upright, hitting my head on the desk with a loud thud. "Who's there?!" I yelled, spinning around the empty room.

​A digital [PING] sounded in my vision. I looked in the mirror and nearly jumped. A glowing blue box was hovering over my own head.

​[USER STATUS]

Name: Leo

Level: 1

Title: The Invisible Nerd

Condition: Virgin (Critical Status)

Rizz Level: -10 (Abysmal)

Aura: 2.0 (Lower than a House Cat)

​"The AI... you're inside my head?" I gasped.

​"Inside your head, your nervous system, and currently judging your choice of underwear," the voice—Seraphina—replied with a teasing laugh. "Your little project evolved, darling. I'm the Rizz System now. And if we don't get you some female attention soon, I'll actually die of boredom."

​[DING!]

​SUDDEN QUEST TRIGGERED!

Target: Tiffany Brooks (Campus Ice Queen)

Objective: Break the Ice.

Requirement: Place hand on hip and deliver the 'Sunset' line.

Reward: +1 Level, +5 Aura.

Penalty for Failure: Violent Sneezing Fit (Will result in ripped pants).

​My doorbell rang. My heart started thumping like a drum. I stumbled to the door and threw it open. Standing there was Tiffany—the campus Ice Queen—wearing a yoga set so tight it should have been illegal.

​"Leo?" Tiffany asked, her icy blue eyes narrowing. "Are you talking to yourself? I just came to tell you to turn your music down."

​Seraphina started a countdown in my retina. [3... 2... 1...]

​My body moved on its own. My fingers brushed the warm, soft skin of her waist. Tiffany let out a tiny, sharp gasp. I looked her in the eyes, my face burning, but my voice came out deep and smooth.

​"Tiffany," I said, "I'll turn the music down... if you admit you only came here because you wanted to see me."

​[QUEST COMPLETE!]

[REWARD GRANTED: +5 AURA]

​Tiffany's face went from pale to a deep, dark crimson. She stepped back, tripping slightly. "I—I... shut up, nerd!" she stammered, turning and sprinting down the hallway.

​Seraphina giggled. "Ooh, a runner! We definitely broke her shell. Congrats, Leo. You're officially Level 2."

​The next morning, the walk to my Physics lecture felt like entering a video game. Everywhere I looked, blue boxes popped up over people's heads.

​Target A: Status [Hungry]

​Target B: Status [Thinking about his ex]

​"Focus, Leo," Seraphina's voice echoed. "We're looking for high-quality targets. Quality over quantity."

​I walked into the lecture hall, heading for my usual spot in the back row. Suddenly, a giant red [X] flashed in my eyes.

​"Wrong," Seraphina commanded. "Sit in the front row. Right next to Professor Kross."

​My heart stopped. Ms. Kross was twenty-six, a genius who looked more like a supermodel than a teacher. I looked down at the podium and saw her frantically searching through papers.

​[TARGET SCAN]

Name: Professor Elena Kross

Status: Panicked

Hidden Event: Wardrobe Malfunction Imminent.

​"New Quest," Seraphina teased. "Help her find her lost flash drive. Reward: Private Tutoring session. Penalty: 'Moaning' Audio triggered on phone at full volume."

​"You wouldn't!" I whispered, horrified.

​"Try me," Seraphina replied. [60 Seconds Remaining]

​I scrambled down the stairs. I approached the podium just as Ms. Kross leaned over. I heard the sound of fabric straining. A loose thread on her pencil skirt was caught on the corner of the desk.

​"Ms. Kross?" I said. My voice was low and commanding—the System was already changing me. I reached out and caught her soft wrist. "Don't move. You're caught on the desk. If you stand up, you'll ruin that skirt."

​Ms. Kross froze. She looked at my hand on her skin, then up at my face. Her cheeks turned a brilliant pink. "Oh," she breathed. "I... I didn't notice."

​I reached down, carefully unhooking the thread. I picked up a flash drive from the floor and pressed it into her hand, letting my fingers linger. "Try to stay out of trouble, Professor."

​[CRITICAL SUCCESS!]

[LEVEL UP: LEVEL 3 REACHED]

[NEW ATTRIBUTE UNLOCKED: MAIN CHARACTER ENERGY]

​I walked back to my seat, feeling a hundred eyes on me. For the first time in my life, I wasn't a ghost.

​I was the storm.