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Naruto:24 Frames Of Fate

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On the night the Nine-Tails was sealed, reality glitched. For one impossible second, time divided into twenty-four silent frames — and a newborn child aligned with it. Naruto Uzumaki grows up despised, alone, and determined to become Hokage no matter the cost. Yet something inside him moves differently. In moments of danger, the world fractures. Blades slow. Decisions stretch. Fate hesitates. It is not speed. It is not luck. It is structure. As Naruto walks the path from lonely prankster to shinobi of the Hidden Leaf, his strange ability awakens alongside the rising threats of Orochimaru, the Akatsuki, and a war that will reshape the world. But the more he learns to step between seconds, the more he realizes: Power can rewrite a moment. It cannot replace a bond. And even if you can divide time itself, some choices must flow forward.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 — The Second That Refused to Flow

The night the Nine-Tails attacked Konoha began in silence.

Not the peaceful kind.

The wrong kind.

Dogs stopped barking. The wind held its breath. Even the cicadas seemed to vanish.

Then the sky tore open.

The Nine-Tailed Fox emerged like a living calamity, its tails smashing through rooftops, its roar shaking bone and spirit alike. Shinobi rushed into position. Barriers flared. Explosions painted the horizon in violent orange.

At the edge of the village, beneath the chaos, Minato Namikaze stood over a ritual circle carved into the earth.

Beside him lay Kushina Uzumaki, pale but conscious, her chakra chains fading as she used the last of her strength to restrain the beast.

Between them—

A newborn child.

Naruto.

Minato's hands moved through the seals of the Dead Demon Consuming Seal. The Shinigami manifested behind him, vast and silent.

The Nine-Tails roared as its chakra was torn apart.

The air warped.

Space strained.

And then—

For exactly one second—

Something went wrong.

The flow of chakra fractured.

The Nine-Tails' claw froze mid-swing.

Kushina's hair hung suspended in arcs.

Dust stopped falling.

Time did not stop.

It divided.

One second became twenty-four still layers, stacked on top of one another like sheets of glass.

Within those layers, Naruto opened his eyes.

They were not crying.

They were observing.

The fox's chakra did not simply enter him.

It structured itself.

Segmented.

As if something inside the child instinctively imposed order onto chaos.

Minato felt it — a subtle misalignment in the formula. A ripple through the sealing array.

"What…?"

Then the second completed itself.

Time resumed.

The Nine-Tails' chakra split — half sealed within Naruto, half taken by Minato.

Kushina smiled weakly, reaching for her son.

"Be strong… Naruto…"

The ritual ended.

The beast vanished.

The Fourth Hokage fell.

And Naruto cried like any other child.

But deep inside him, something had begun counting.

The Third Hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi, stood over the infant later that night.

The village was wounded.

Burned.

Grieving.

"From this day forward," Hiruzen declared, "the child is a hero."

But heroes are not always treated as such.

Years passed.

Naruto grew loud.

He grew defiant.

He grew alone.

Whispers followed him in markets.

Doors closed quietly when he approached.

Children were pulled away.

He did not understand why.

He just knew it hurt.

So he laughed louder.

Pranked harder.

Painted the Hokage Monument in bright colors and declared himself future Hokage.

He wanted attention.

Any kind.

But sometimes, when someone tried to grab him or strike him—

Something strange happened.

Movement felt predictable.

Divided.

Like the world committed to actions before completing them.

He never understood it.

He just adapted instinctively.

At the Academy, Naruto struggled.

The Clone Technique eluded him.

Again.

And again.

When graduation day arrived, the room buzzed with excitement.

One by one, students passed.

Sasuke Uchiha passed flawlessly.

Naruto failed.

His clone collapsed in a useless heap beside him.

Iruka looked disappointed.

Mizuki looked thoughtful.

Naruto walked outside and sat on the swing alone.

Families celebrated behind him.

He stared at the ground.

A paper ball hit his forehead.

For a brief flicker—

It slowed.

Segmented.

Its spin divided into visible increments before striking him normally.

Naruto blinked.

"…Why does that keep happening?"

He didn't know.

And he didn't have anyone to ask.

That evening, Mizuki approached him gently.

"There's another way to pass."

Steal the Scroll of Seals.

Learn a forbidden jutsu.

Prove everyone wrong.

Naruto didn't hesitate.

He wanted acknowledgment.

He wanted someone to believe in him.

He took the scroll and ran to the forest.

Under moonlight, he trained furiously.

Shadow Clone Jutsu.

Again.

Again.

Again.

Hundreds of clones burst into existence around him.

Perfect.

For the first time—

He succeeded.

He laughed, exhausted and proud.

Then Mizuki arrived.

His expression was different now.

Cold.

"You know why everyone hates you?"

Naruto froze.

"You are the Nine-Tailed Fox."

The words landed heavier than any blow.

Memories rearranged themselves in his mind.

The stares.

The whispers.

The isolation.

His breathing grew uneven.

Then Mizuki drew a massive shuriken and hurled it toward Iruka, who had just arrived.

The blade spun through the air.

And time broke open.

The shuriken rotated in fragments.

Iruka's eyes widened in stages.

Leaves hung motionless.

Naruto inhaled.

He stepped.

Each movement precise.

He reached Frame 9.

Frame 12.

Frame 16.

He caught the weapon before it could complete its arc and positioned himself in front of Iruka.

Reality snapped back together.

Metal shrieked against his grip.

Mizuki stared in shock.

Iruka stared in something else.

Pride.

Mizuki ranted about the fox, about hatred, about the monster within.

Naruto trembled.

The fox's chakra stirred faintly.

But Iruka stepped forward.

"Stop it!"

Iruka stood between Naruto and Mizuki.

"He's not the fox. He's Naruto Uzumaki of the Hidden Leaf!"

Naruto's throat tightened.

No one had ever said his name like that before.

Mizuki attacked again.

Naruto formed the hand seal.

Shadow Clone Jutsu.

The forest exploded with Narutos.

Not chaotic.

Not sloppy.

Coordinated.

Within the chaos, Naruto felt it again—

A faint rhythm.

Movement aligning.

Mizuki was overwhelmed.

Beaten.

When it was over, Naruto stood breathing heavily among fading clones.

Iruka approached slowly.

Naruto braced himself.

But Iruka smiled.

"Close your eyes."

Naruto obeyed.

The cool metal plate pressed against his forehead.

When he opened his eyes, the Leaf symbol shone back at him.

"You pass."

Naruto's grin trembled at the edges.

He wasn't alone in that moment.

For once.

He wasn't the monster.

He was a shinobi.

Later that night, alone in his apartment, Naruto stared at his reflection in the window.

"You're the Nine-Tails…"

He clenched his fists.

"Then I'll just become Hokage anyway."

He dropped a cup from the counter.

It fell normally.

No segmentation.

No frames.

He sighed and lay down.

As he drifted toward sleep, something inside him pulsed softly.

Not the fox.

Something quieter.

Measured.

Waiting.

Twenty-four silent beats inside every second.

Waiting for the next moment that truly mattered.