Ficool

Aadidev:The Heavens Broken Melody

Aaryaveda
100
Completed
--
NOT RATINGS
111.7k
Views
Synopsis
When Heaven still sang, there was a melody that held the cosmos together until a single forbidden love shattered it. The Celestial Musician Pratham, whose notes once moved the stars, fell for Apsara Shweta. Their union defied divine law, and their song broke the balance of creation. In wrath, the gods cursed them to be reborn as mortals, lifetime after lifetime, doomed to find and lose each other before their melody could be completed. Seven centuries later, the curse awakens again. Prince Aaditya of Suryapuri dreams of songs he’s never heard and a love he cannot name. Prince Devansh of Chandrapuri wields a veena that sings on its own an ancient instrument that remembers what Heaven has forgotten. When their paths cross, the world itself begins to tremble. Stars whisper. Fire obeys music. And an old prophecy stirs “When the fifth note rises, the heavens will open.” But beneath divine fate, a darker force watches one born of silence, shadow, and vengeance. As love rekindles and power returns, the two princes must face what they once were and decide whether their song will heal Heaven... or break it again. Genre Tags: Mythic Fantasy, Reincarnation, BL Romance, Divine Curse, Celestial Music, Magic & Fate
VIEW MORE

Chapter 1 - CHAPTER 1: THE CURSE

Chapter 1: The Celestial Curse

Urdhvlok The Divine Court

Light danced in Urdhvlok. The air itself glowed, carrying the scent of divine flowers and the far-off hum of a tune that never ended. Pillars of pure light shot up into a sky where stars moved to a rhythm only gods understood.

Today was different. Today was the Maha Rag.

In the center of the court, on a raised platform, sat Sursagar Pratham. His very presence made the heavens hold their breath. As his fingers the ones that had spun the first notes of creation brushed the strings of his cosmic veena, every deity, Nrityadevi, and Sursagar fell silent.

Pluck.

The note Sa bloomed. It was not just a sound it was a vibration. In the celestial ponds, lotus flowers shuddered and burst into full bloom.

Pluck. Pluck. Pluck.

Re… Ga… Ma… each note wove into the next, building a tapestry of harmony that held the universe in perfect balance. This was music you felt in your bones. It spoke of the first sunrise, of love older than time.

Then, the universe stuttered.

The grand doors creaked open. A new Nrityadevi stood there, late and flustered. Shweta. Dressed in woven moonlight, her eyes held the shy glimmer of new stars.

Pratham's gaze, always locked on his veena, lifted.

Their eyes met across the crowded court.

Pluck SHARP

A harsh, wrong note ripped through the melody. The harmony shattered like glass. Flowers wilted instantly. Dancing feet froze. The light in Urdhvlok flickered and dimmed.

The silence that fell was heavier than any thunder.

"SURSAGAR PRATHAM!"

Lord Nabhendra's voice shook the foundations of heaven. The god-king rose, his face a mask of cold fury. For millennia, you have played the music that holds creation together And today, you break it for a glance?

Pratham stood, his veena silent. His throat was dry, but his eyes stayed on Shweta. That one look had lasted a second, yet it felt like finding a forgotten home. Her eyes were not just beautiful they were a melody he had composed in another life.

My Lord, I apologize, Pratham whispered, the words hollow.

Apology? Nabhendra's laugh was bitter. You think sorry can fix the cosmos? My chief musician, undone by a mortal feeling?

Chaitanya Vana The Forbidden Grove

They met under the Kalpavriksha tree, its leaves whispering secrets they were too desperate to hear. The grove was forbidden, but rules felt meaningless now.

They will punish us, Shweta whispered, her form trembling like a leaf. Nabhendra's wrath is absolute.

Let it be, Pratham murmured, his hand cupping her face. The hands that created magic for gods now shook at the touch of one Nrityadevi. All these years, my music was empty. I played for the gods, for the universe… never for me. Until I saw you. Today, I wanted to play a song just for us.

Tears glistened in her eyes. At what cost? Your position? Your gift? Your place in Urdhvlok?

His thumb traced her jawline. What is heaven's music without heaven's love? You are the rhythm to my song, Shweta. Without you, my ragas have no soul.

He leaned in, his lips a breath from hers, promising a harmony deeper than any he had ever played.

A blaze of white light erupted, turning night into a harsh, judgmental day.

Nabhendra stood before them, his guards a stern circle. His face showed no anger only a cold disappointment that was far more terrifying.

So, Nabhendra's voice was soft, a blade wrapped in silk. The master of rhythm cannot control his own heart. You choose a fleeting emotion over the eternal dharma of Urdhvlok?

Prabhu, daya karo Shweta fell to her knees, hands clasped. It was my fault… I distracted him

Silence! Nabhendra's command threw her back onto the grass. He turned to Pratham. You traded the symphony of the cosmos for a single, discordant note of desire.

Nabhendra raised his hand. The air grew thick with the weight of a divine decree.

For this crime, you shall fall. You will be reborn on mortal soil, life after life a soul forever lost, wandering without memories and without your voice.

Pratham gasped, hands flying to his throat. A searing pain tore through him, as if his vocal cords were being ripped out. The ghost of a million songs was silenced, locked away in a dark vault within his soul.

Your powers will remain bound, Nabhendra's words carved themselves into fate. They will not return until you are loved truly and selflessly for who you are, not for the magic in your music. Only a love that sees the man without his melody can break this curse.

His eyes fell on the weeping Shweta. And you, who led the artist astray you will join him. You will be reborn, life after life, destined to find him. But know this until Pratham reclaims his song, your love will forever be tainted by sorrow. You will find each other, only to lose each other, in an endless cycle of heartbreak.

Nabhendra clapped his hands once.

The world dissolved. The perfumed air of Chaitanya Vana, the shimmering light, the new, bright feeling of love it all shattered into a million pieces, swallowed by an endless, silent darkness.

Present Day Suryapuri Kingdom

The morning sun stretched long shadows across the marble courtyards of Suryapuri Palace. Prince Aaditya stood on his balcony, watching the sky bleed orange and gold.

Prince Aaditya was a sight that seemed carved from sunlight itself. Tall and broad-shouldered, he carried the effortless confidence of one born to command kingdoms. His skin held a warm golden glow kissed by the sun, while his sharp jawline and regal features gave him the presence of a warrior king from ancient legends.

His most striking feature was his eyes deep crimson with flecks of molten gold hidden within them. They burned with quiet intensity, like embers beneath a calm surface, capable of both fierce determination and unexpected warmth. Long black hair cascaded down his back in soft waves, framing a face that radiated strength and authority.

Resting upon his head was a magnificent golden crown adorned with crimson rubies that gleamed like drops of captured fire. Matching ruby-studded kundals hung from his ears, swaying gently whenever he moved.

Aaditya wore a luxurious crimson-red angrakha embroidered with intricate golden patterns that shimmered beneath the light. The rich fabric flowed over a royal dhoti edged with gold thread, creating the image of a living flame draped in regal splendor.

Around his waist rested a heavy golden kamarbandh set with brilliant red gemstones, while both arms were adorned with ornate golden baajubandhs embedded with crimson diamonds. Several golden necklaces decorated his chest, each crafted with exquisite artistry and adorned with precious rubies. Gold bracelets and royal rings completed his appearance.

Whenever he entered a room, he seemed to carry the warmth of dawn itself. His aura resembled golden sunlight intertwined with crimson flames, making him appear less like a mortal prince and more like the embodiment of the Sun God descended upon earth.

Below, the kingdom was already awake, preparing for the grand Ashwamedh Yagya.

But Aaditya's mind was far away. For weeks, strange dreams had haunted him vivid visions of music he could not hear, a woman's face he could not see, a pain so deep it jolted him awake, gasping. And always, a strange tightness in his throat, as if something was stuck there, waiting.

Lost in thought again, beta?

Aaditya turned. His father, Maharaj Viraj, stood beside him, concern etched on his face. You have been distant. Something on your mind?

Pitashri, Aaditya began, choosing his words. It is these dreams.

Dreams pass, son. What matters is the reality before us. The King's hand was warm on his shoulder. The conference in Chandrapuri is vital. Our kingdoms have been neighbors for centuries, but recent tensions need to be smoothed over.

I understand, Father.

You will meet their Yuvaraj, Prince Devansh, there, the Maharaj added, a thoughtful gleam in his eye. I have heard remarkable things. Sharp mind, like a polished diamond… and a deep interest in ancient music.

Music. The word sent an unexpected shiver down Aaditya's spine. Lately, every mention of music felt like a key turning in a lock he could not find.

Will he be friendly? Aaditya asked, surprising himself.

The Maharaj smiled. Let us hope so. Our kingdoms need peace, not more conflict.

But as Aaditya looked toward the western horizon toward Chandrapuri something stirred in his soul. Something old. Something waiting. And for a fleeting moment, he thought he heard the faint, ghostly pluck of a veena string.

Chandrapuri Palace Same Night

Prince Devansh sat in his chambers, scrolls of statecraft spread around him. Moonlight streamed through the lattice windows, painting silver patterns on the floor and illuminating the ancient veena in the corner. His secret shame a collection of beautiful instruments he could not play.

Prince Devansh possessed a beauty so ethereal that many compared him to a celestial being rather than a mortal prince. Tall and graceful, every movement carried a quiet elegance, as though he walked to the rhythm of a melody only he could hear.

His skin was smooth and luminous beneath the moonlight, while his long raven-black hair flowed like liquid silk far down his back. Tucked delicately among those dark locks rested a single white kaner flower, its pristine petals creating a striking contrast against his hair.

His eyes were mesmerizing silver touched with hints of sapphire blue, like moonlight reflected upon a calm ocean. They held an ancient sadness and wisdom beyond his years, giving him an almost otherworldly charm.

Upon his head rested an intricate silver crown decorated with celestial patterns and sapphire gemstones that sparkled like stars in the night sky. Elegant silver kundals set with deep blue gems hung from his ears, complementing the cool beauty of his appearance.

Devansh wore a breathtaking moonlight-blue angrakha woven with delicate silver embroidery that shimmered with every movement. The garment flowed gracefully over a silver blue dhoti whose borders were adorned with intricate moon and star motifs.

Both of his arms were encircled by elegant silver baajubandhs studded with diamonds and sapphires, their brilliance rivaling the stars above. A finely crafted silver kamarbandh rested at his waist, decorated with shimmering diamonds and blue gemstones. Around his neck hung layered silver necklaces adorned with celestial charms and sapphires, while delicate silver bracelets decorated his wrists.

the corner of the room rested his ancient veena, inlaid with silver and sapphireIn the corner of the room rested his ancient veena, inlaid with silver and sapphire an instrument that seemed as much a part of him as his own heartbeat."

Where Aaditya resembled the blazing sun, Devansh embodied the serenity of the moon. His aura glowed with soft silver moonlight mixed with pale blue starlight, making him appear like a divine musician who had wandered down from the heavens.

Every time he tried to play, a wave of profound sadness would drown him, a sense of loss so sharp it left him breathless.

Tonight was different. A restless energy buzzed under his skin. He picked up a scroll about the Suryapuri royals. His eyes caught on the description of Prince Aaditya: Golden-skinned, sun-blessed, known for his sharp intellect.

Aaditya.

The name echoed in his mind like a half-remembered song. A sudden, sweet ache bloomed in his chest a physical pain, as if he had just remembered someone vital was missing from his life. His heart hammered, a frantic, off-beat drum.

Why does this hurt? Devansh whispered to the empty room, pressing a hand to his heart.

The door opened. His mother, Rani Madhavi, stepped in. She saw his face and stopped. Beta? What is wrong? You have been crying.

Devansh wiped his cheeks, unaware of the tears. He forced a smile that did not reach his eyes. I do not know, Maa. It feels like I am remembering someone I have never met. A longing with no name, no face. Just this emptiness. He gestured to his chest. It aches here. Like my heart knows something my mind has forgotten.

His mother sat beside him, her hand gentle on his hair. Perhaps your soul is restless, preparing for change. Tomorrow, you will find your calm. Prince Aaditya of Suryapuri arrives. You will meet him at the welcoming ceremony.

Aaditya… Devansh whispered the name again. The heavy sorrow in his heart lightened, replaced by a fluttering, nervous anticipation. A strange warmth spread through him comforting and terrifying all at once.

He placed a hand over his heart, feeling its frantic, joyful rhythm. Why, Maa? he wondered, looking toward the window, toward the path Aaditya would take. Why does his name feel like a homecoming?

Rani Madhavi smiled softly. Sometimes, the heart remembers what the mind cannot. Rest now, beta. Tomorrow is a big day.

After she left, Devansh walked to the silent veena. His fingers hovered over the strings, trembling. He took a deep breath and plucked one.

The note that came out was flat. Lifeless. Wrong.

But for the first time all night, the ache in his chest vanished, replaced by a certainty he could not explain.

Tomorrow would change everything.

Chapter End

Two princes. Rival kingdoms. One ancient curse.

One feels the ghost of a song in his silent throat.

One collects instruments he cannot play.

Their first meeting draws near a collision of past and future, curse and destiny.

Will their souls remember the melody they lost?

Or will the curse chain them to another cycle of heartbreak?

The strings of fate are pulling them together.

And somewhere in the silence, a broken veena waits to be played once more.

© 2026 Aaryaveda. All rights reserved.

Do not copy or repost without permission.