Ficool

The Quill and the Shadow

Xyllie
14
chs / week
The average realized release rate over the past 30 days is 14 chs / week.
--
NOT RATINGS
125
Views
Synopsis
--- The Quill and the Shadow (Book One of The Lost Quill Chronicles) Ten years after his father’s mysterious disappearance, nineteen-year-old aspiring author Elias Thorne discovers a quill hidden in his father’s abandoned study. When he writes with it, the quill drags him into the Realm of Stories—a shifting world where myths and forgotten tales live and die. There Elias encounters Lyra, a warrior born of a forgotten legend, and learns that his father was once a Keeper of Stories, tasked with preserving the great Atlas that binds all tales together. But the Atlas is fractured, and a terrible enemy known as the Mask of Silence hunts Elias, feeding on stories and erasing memory itself. Armed only with the enchanted quill and his father’s scattered journals, Elias must decide whether to embrace the perilous legacy of the Keepers or watch as the Silence consumes both his father’s story—and his own. ---
VIEW MORE

Chapter 1 - Chapter One – The Empty Study

---

Elias Thorne had grown up in a house of unfinished stories.

The shelves sagged beneath the weight of manuscripts no one had read, drafts his father had abandoned mid-chapter, and loose scraps of parchment tucked into corners like forgotten feathers. Even the air smelled of paper—dusty, ink-stained, and faintly bitter, as though words could sour with neglect.

It had been ten years since Alaric Thorne, celebrated author and teller of fables, had vanished without a trace. Ten years since the lamp in the study went out, leaving only silence in the room where imagination once blazed. Elias had been nine then—old enough to remember his father's voice, but too young to understand the shadows that silence left behind.

Now nineteen, Elias sat at his father's desk. His hands hovered over a blank page, pen poised yet paralyzed. The candle beside him burned low, throwing soft flickers against the stacks of parchment. He had tried, again and again, to write something of his own. A story. A fragment. Even a line. Yet every sentence died before it lived.

The silence pressed against him. The study was too still, as if it resented his intrusion.

Elias sighed, setting the pen down. His father had once told him, "Stories breathe when you believe in them. If you force them, they suffocate." But belief was hard when each word felt like betrayal—like trying to conjure magic from ashes.

He rose and drifted around the study. Every object seemed preserved in amber, untouched since the day his father disappeared. A coat still hung on the chair by the hearth, stiff with age. The inkpot had dried to a crust. The window overlooked the cobbled street below, where lamps flickered in the misty dusk.

And then there was the desk drawer.

Elias had opened it dozens of times before—usually to find nothing more than yellowed drafts or ink-stained rags. But tonight, his restless fingers tugged harder, and the drawer slid out further than it ever had. A false back shifted with a reluctant scrape.

Heart quickening, Elias reached inside. His fingers closed around something cool, metallic.

He drew it out.

A quill.

But not an ordinary one. The feather shimmered with a deep midnight sheen, like black glass catching moonlight. Its shaft was etched with faint runes, curling in patterns too intricate to follow. It looked ancient, fragile—and yet when Elias held it, the weight of it felt undeniable, as if it anchored him.

At once, the room seemed to breathe differently. Shadows lengthened against the walls, not with the candle's flicker but with a pulse of their own.

Elias's throat tightened. "Father?" he whispered, ridiculous as it sounded.

Silence.

And yet the quill thrummed in his hand, a faint vibration echoing up his arm. His gaze dropped to the blank page on the desk.

He should have put it away. He should have left the study, locked the door, and never thought of it again. But some part of him—the part that had waited ten years for answers—tightened its grip.

Slowly, Elias dipped the quill into the old inkpot. The ink swirled back to liquid as though stirred by unseen hands.

His hand trembled as he lowered the nib to paper. One word formed, unbidden:

Father.

The ink bled across the page in curling tendrils. The candle sputtered. A draft stirred through the room though the windows were shut. Elias gasped as the letters lifted—yes, lifted—rising like smoke from the paper, stretching into shapes.

The word darkened, twisting, until the page seemed to ripple like water.

Before he could move, the study dissolved.

He fell.

The desk, the candle, the shelves—all blurred into blackness. Wind roared past his ears. The quill burned in his grasp, and the page beneath him expanded into a vast sheet of parchment that stretched into a horizon of ink.

Elias landed hard, knees striking strange ground that shifted like paper and sand. He staggered upright, breath ragged, clutching the quill. The sky above was an endless parchment, words drifting like constellations. But most of them were fractured, incomplete, dissolving into fragments that scattered like ash.

He had stepped into a story—no, into a world of stories.

"Impossible," he whispered, yet the air itself carried the taste of ink and memory.

A sound stirred behind him.

He spun, heart hammering. Shadows coiled at the edge of the paper-dunes. They moved with intent, stretching like ink spilled across a page. No face, no form—only smears of darkness that hissed in the shape of whispers.

Elias stumbled back. The quill in his hand pulsed, as if urging him. On instinct, he scrawled a line across the ground. Words spilled from the nib:

Light.

At once, the word flared, bursting into a shimmer that drove the shadows back. They hissed, recoiling into the blankness beyond. The word hovered above him, glowing like a fragile lantern.

Elias's chest heaved. His hand shook around the quill. What was this place?

A voice answered him.

"You shouldn't be here, mortal."

He whipped around. A figure stood upon the dunes, tall and sharp against the parchment horizon. She was armored in bronze, etched with runes, her dark hair braided back from a stern face. Her eyes glowed faintly with the same runes that curled along her armor. A sword hung at her side, but she did not draw it—yet.

Elias's mouth went dry. "Who—who are you?"

The woman regarded him coolly. "Forgotten. That is what they call me. A name lost from memory, erased by time. You should not have crossed the Quillgate."

"The… what?"

Her eyes narrowed, then flicked to the quill in his hand. For the first time, her composure cracked.

"Where did you get that?"

Elias glanced down at the midnight feather. "It—it was my father's."

The warrior's voice lowered, almost reverent. "Then your father was a Keeper. And you…" Her gaze hardened. "You have just stepped into his story."

---

Elias's pulse thudded in his ears. "My father… a Keeper?" The word felt foreign on his tongue, too large, too heavy to belong to him.

The warrior studied him as if weighing a truth against a lie. "You speak as though you don't know."

"I don't." His voice cracked. "He was a writer—an author. He told stories. And then—then he vanished."

Her eyes lingered on the quill. "Not just stories. Gateways. Your father was one who carried the burden of remembrance. If you hold the Keeper's Quill, then the silence is already watching you."

Elias frowned. "Silence?"

The dunes shivered. Shadows rippled across the parchment ground like ink spilled in waves. The air grew cold, the glowing word Light dimming as though smothered.

The warrior stiffened. "Them."

The shadows thickened, forming limbs, twisted mouths, and eyeless faces. They crawled upright, whispering in a thousand stolen voices. Elias's skin prickled as the voices clawed at his thoughts—some calling his name, others murmuring fragments of memories he didn't recognize.

"What—what are they?" Elias stammered.

"Silencelings," the warrior spat, drawing her sword with a ringing note of bronze. "Fragments of stories consumed by the Silence. Hungry things. If they touch you, they will drink your name until nothing remains."

Elias clutched the quill tighter, terror anchoring him to the shifting ground. "What do I do?"

"Write," she commanded. "It is the only weapon you have."

The first Silenceling lunged. Elias scrambled back, the quill nearly slipping from his fingers. He slashed it wildly across the parchment ground. The word that spilled out was panicked, uneven:

Fire.

Flames burst into being, curling from the ink as though the word itself combusted. The creature shrieked, its form scattering into smoke.

Elias staggered, wide-eyed. "It—it worked!"

But more shadows surged forward, swarming like wolves. The warrior slashed through them with her blade, which blazed faintly with runes, scattering fragments into the wind. Yet for every shadow she cut down, more rose from the dunes.

"We're surrounded," Elias gasped.

Her eyes flashed. "Then carve us a path, Keeper's son!"

Elias forced down his panic. He thought of safety, of escape, of the way home. The quill pressed into his hand as if it already knew the word.

He scrawled across the shifting ground:

Door.

A tall outline shimmered into being ahead of them, a doorway glowing with silver ink. Beyond it lay a faint glimmer of light.

The warrior's expression sharpened. "Move!"

They sprinted. Elias clutched the quill, his heart racing. Shadows clawed at their heels, shrieking in fury. One brushed his shoulder—cold, searing emptiness sank into his skin. He stumbled, vision fracturing as a memory slipped loose: his father's voice, telling him a bedtime story—gone, snatched.

"No!" Elias gasped. He nearly fell, but the warrior caught his arm, dragging him toward the silver door.

"Don't let them steal more!" she barked.

Together they plunged through the doorway.

Light seared his eyes.

Elias stumbled onto solid ground—stone this time, not parchment. They emerged into a vast hall lined with pillars of inkstone, glowing faintly with script that crawled across their surfaces like living calligraphy. The silver doorway snapped shut behind them with a hiss, cutting off the wails of the Silencelings.

Elias bent double, gasping. His shoulder still burned where the shadow had touched him. He pressed a hand to it, but there was no mark—only the hollow ache of the lost memory.

The warrior sheathed her sword, regarding him with a stern frown. "You should not have crossed. You are untrained, unknowing, and foolish. The Silence will hunt you now."

Elias straightened, anger flaring beneath his fear. "I didn't choose this. I was just—just trying to write. I wanted answers. I wanted to know why my father left!" His voice cracked on the last word.

The warrior's expression shifted—so subtle he might have missed it, a flicker of understanding in her eyes. "You are Elias Thorne, then. His son."

He stiffened. "You knew him?"

A pause. She glanced away. "Once. He was… different. A Keeper who broke what should not be broken."

Elias's chest tightened. "What does that mean? Where is he?"

Her eyes returned to him, sharp as steel. "Gone. Perhaps imprisoned. Perhaps worse. If you hope to find him, you will need more than hope and a quill."

Her words settled like stone in his chest, heavy with finality. Yet beneath it sparked something fierce—a refusal to let go. "Then teach me. Show me what he was. Show me how to survive this."

The warrior studied him for a long, silent moment. The runes in her eyes flickered faintly. Finally, she gave a small, sharp nod.

"My name is Lyra," she said at last, voice firm. "I was born of a story that the world forgot. If you wish to follow your father's path, Elias Thorne, then you will walk beside me. But understand this—stories are not gentle things. They demand sacrifice."

Elias swallowed hard. His grip tightened around the quill. "If it leads me to my father, I'll risk it."

Lyra's gaze lingered on him, measuring. At last she turned, striding deeper into the hall of inkstone pillars. "Then follow me, Keeper's son. Your story begins here."

Elias hesitated only a moment before stepping after her. The quill pulsed faintly in his hand, and though fear clawed at his chest, something else stirred too—something that felt almost like hope.

---

The Hall of Inkstone stretched into shadow. Columns rose like trees of solidified ink, each surface crawling with faint script that writhed as if alive. The air carried the scent of parchment, sharp and bitter, tinged with smoke. Every sound Elias made—each step, each breath—echoed back too loudly, as though the hall itself were listening.

Lyra walked ahead, her bronze armor muted in the dim light. Elias followed, clutching the quill like a lifeline. His shoulder still throbbed with the absence of the stolen memory. He tried to summon it—the bedtime story, the rhythm of his father's voice—but it was gone. Hollow space gnawed where it had once been.

"Where are we?" Elias asked, his voice breaking the silence like a stone tossed into still water.

Lyra's eyes flicked back. "A fragment of the Atlas. The Hall of Inkstone is older than your world, older than mine. It is where Keepers once came to inscribe the foundations of memory."

"The Atlas…" Elias repeated. The name felt heavy, meaningful. "Is that what you meant? My father was part of it?"

Lyra did not answer at once. She pressed her hand to one of the pillars, runes rippling at her touch. Her expression was unreadable. Finally, she said, "The Atlas binds all stories. It threads them together so they are not lost. Your father… chose to defy it."

Elias's stomach twisted. "Defy it how?"

But Lyra did not respond. Instead, she moved deeper into the hall. Her silence was not cruel—more like a wound she could not reopen.

Elias clenched the quill. His father, a man who had told bedtime fables with warmth in his eyes, defied some ancient order of stories? The thought was as absurd as it was terrifying. Yet in this place of living ink and whispering shadows, he could not dismiss it.

They reached a dais at the hall's heart. A pedestal rose from the floor, supporting a tome the size of a chest. Its cover shimmered with shifting script, words bleeding into one another, forming and dissolving too quickly to be read.

Elias's breath caught. "Is that…?"

"A fragment," Lyra confirmed. "Not the Atlas itself. Only a shard of it. But enough."

She gestured for him to approach. Elias stepped forward, awe tightening his chest. As he neared, the book seemed to exhale—a deep, resonant sigh that rustled the columns. The script on its cover stilled for an instant, forming one clear word:

Thorne.

Elias froze.

The quill in his hand pulsed, resonating with the book. His heart hammered. The book knew him—knew his name.

Lyra's eyes narrowed. "It recognizes you. As it did your father."

Elias reached out, his hand trembling. His fingers brushed the cover. At once, the hall plunged into shadow.

The columns flickered, runes extinguishing. A cold wind howled through the chamber. The book snapped open of its own accord, pages riffling faster than any human hand could turn. Ink bled from the parchment, coiling upward into shapes, into a mask of blackness.

The Mask hung in the air, a hollow face without features, its edges fraying into smoke. Its voice was a whisper that seemed to come from inside Elias's skull.

"Keeper's blood returns. Foolish child. You walk where silence reigns."

Elias stumbled back. "What—what are you?"

The Mask tilted, though it had no eyes. "I am what your father feared. What he tried to bind, and failed. I am Silence, the end of every tale. And you—" The mask stretched into a leer. "You carry his quill. How sweetly you will break."

The shadows around the columns writhed, Silencelings spilling from the cracks. Their whispers clawed into Elias's thoughts, tugging at fragments of memory. His knees buckled as another sliver of recollection slid away—a laugh, his father's hand ruffling his hair.

"No!" Elias cried, clutching his head. "Stop—give it back!"

Lyra stepped between him and the Mask, her sword raised. Runes blazed along the blade, casting defiant light. "Back to your void, carrion!"

The Mask's laughter echoed, hollow and vast. "You cannot protect him, forgotten one. You could not even protect your own tale."

Lyra's jaw clenched. She swung her sword in a sweeping arc, light cleaving the shadows. The Mask recoiled, flickering—but it did not vanish.

Elias, gasping, forced himself upright. His hand shook, but he raised the quill. Words, he reminded himself. Words had power. He had seen it.

He scrawled across the stone dais with frantic strokes:

Barrier.

A wall of silver script erupted between them and the Silencelings, halting their advance. The Mask's laughter hissed, fading as the shadows recoiled into cracks. Its voice whispered one last time, chilling Elias's marrow:

"You will join him, child. All stories end in silence."

The mask dissolved into ink-smoke.

The hall steadied. Light returned to the pillars. Elias collapsed against the pedestal, chest heaving. His whole body shook.

Lyra lowered her sword, eyes still sharp, searching the darkness. Slowly, she sheathed the blade. "You should not have touched the fragment."

"I didn't know," Elias gasped. His hands trembled so badly he nearly dropped the quill. "That—that thing knew me. It knew my father. What was it?"

Lyra's expression hardened. "The Mask of Silence. It is no mere shadow. It is the one who consumes stories themselves. And it hunts you now."

Elias swallowed hard. His legs threatened to give way entirely. "Because of the quill."

"Because of what you are," Lyra corrected grimly.

Her words sank into him like ice. He thought of the study at home, the silence that had haunted his family, the ache of a father-shaped absence. Now it all pointed here, to a mask that devoured stories and the father who had tried to stop it.

Elias clenched the quill until his knuckles whitened. Fear churned in him—but beneath it burned something hotter. Determination.

He met Lyra's gaze. "Then tell me what I have to do."

Lyra studied him for a long moment. For the first time, her stern composure softened—just a fraction. "Then your story begins in truth," she said quietly. "And may it not end too soon."

---

The light faded.

Elias blinked, disoriented, as the Hall of Inkstone dissolved into a swirl of parchment mist. Lyra's bronze figure blurred, the rune-light dimming until all that remained was the pulse of the quill in his hand.

Then, with a jolt that rattled his bones, he was back.

The study. His father's study.

The candle guttered low on the desk, casting its flickering glow over familiar shelves and yellowed manuscripts. The chair creaked beneath him as though he had never left. Yet his lungs heaved as if he had run miles, and his hand trembled around the quill still warm with otherworldly power.

For a long moment, Elias sat frozen. Had it been real? The dunes of parchment, the Silencelings, Lyra's voice cutting through the whispers, the Mask's hollow laughter—it all pressed against his memory, too vivid for a dream, too heavy for imagination.

His gaze fell to the page before him. The word he had written—Father—still bled across it, but its edges shimmered faintly, as though ink and light had fused.

Elias touched the page. It pulsed under his fingertips. Real.

He drew back, his chest tight.

Slowly, he pushed himself away from the desk and staggered to the window. Outside, the cobbled street was quiet, washed in pale moonlight. Gaslamps hissed softly. Somewhere distant, a dog barked. The world was unchanged—mundane, solid, indifferent.

And yet Elias was not unchanged. The absence on his shoulder still burned from where the Silenceling had stolen a fragment of memory. He strained to recall the sound of his father's laugh, the warmth of it—but all that came was a void.

"Damn you," Elias whispered, fists clenching. "I'll get it back. All of it."

His reflection in the glass startled him. His eyes looked older, haunted, though only hours had passed. The quill gleamed in his hand like a shard of midnight, pulsing faintly with a life of its own.

Elias turned from the window, resolve knitting through his fear. If Lyra was right, then his father had been more than a man of stories. A Keeper. Someone who bore the weight of preserving tales themselves. And he—Elias—had inherited that burden, wanted or not.

If the Mask of Silence truly hunted him now, he could not wait for answers to arrive. He had to seek them.

His gaze swept the study. Dust lay thick on most things, but there were fragments he recognized from his childhood—the locked cabinet of manuscripts, the map of fabled kingdoms his father once used to inspire bedtime tales, the traveling satchel abandoned in a corner.

Elias crossed the room and pulled the satchel free. The leather was cracked but sturdy. He ran his hand over it, memory rising unbidden: his father fastening this very satchel on the morning of his disappearance, ruffling Elias's hair, murmuring, "Every journey begins with a story, my boy. Promise me you'll write yours."

Elias's throat tightened. He shoved the memory aside before it broke him.

He opened the satchel. Empty. Good.

Next, he rifled through the shelves. Most manuscripts were useless fragments, but a few bore titles that stirred him: Legends of the Forgotten Isles,The Song of Ashen Gate,Whispers Beneath the Ink. He tucked them into the satchel. If they were mere stories, fine. If they were clues—better.

In the desk's bottom drawer, under a nest of parchment scraps, he found his father's old journal. The leather binding was frayed, pages brittle, but Elias recognized his father's hand. He opened it to the first entry.

"The quill is not merely ink and feather. It is passage. Memory made flesh. Should I falter, let the bearer who comes after me remember this: the Silence devours, but stories endure when they are carried forward."

Elias swallowed hard. The words could have been written for him.

He slid the journal into the satchel. Then he added practical things—an oil lantern, a bundle of candles, a small knife from the kitchen, a wool cloak. All the while his mind whirled.

How much of his father's disappearance had his mother known? She never spoke of it, never entered the study again. Perhaps she had suspected, perhaps not. Either way, Elias could not burden her with what he had seen. Not yet.

A floorboard creaked in the hallway. Elias froze, breath held, listening. Nothing followed. Likely the house settling. Still, he felt eyes on him—the echo of the Mask's gaze lingering in his bones.

He forced himself to move again, tightening the satchel straps. He laid the quill carefully inside its own pouch, as though it might slice reality if jostled.

When he was done, he stood in the center of the study. The silence pressed in, but it no longer felt empty. It felt waiting.

He looked once more at the desk, at the page where Father still shimmered faintly. His throat ached, but he did not look away.

"I'll find you," he whispered. "I'll finish what you started."

The candle guttered low, almost spent. Elias snuffed it with a steady hand. Darkness folded over the study, broken only by the silver pulse of the quill through the satchel.

Later, lying awake in his narrow bed, Elias could not close his eyes without seeing the Mask of Silence. The hollow leer, the whisper clawing inside his skull. He flinched each time, clutching the satchel to his chest as if the weight of it could anchor him.

And yet, beneath the fear, something else beat like a drum. A thread of fierce determination, pulling him forward.

He thought of Lyra's words: "Stories are not gentle things. They demand sacrifice."

He had already lost part of a memory. What else would this path cost him?

Still, he knew the answer before he even asked. Whatever the price, he would pay it. He would not let his father's story end in silence.

Elias finally drifted into restless sleep. And in his dreams, parchment dunes stretched endless beneath a starless sky, and the quill's midnight feather pointed always forward—toward the unknown.

---