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The feeling of the first love

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A guy who was sleeping on a wood by placing his book on his face there was a tree above him and he was sleeping near a lake and there was a bridge above the lake and it was about the time when sun sets suddenly he heard someone's laugh a beautiful laugh which made him to remove his book from his face and he saw a girl with red hair eyes were closed the sunlight was falling on her making that girl look devine he was freezed for a moment and the first glimpse of that girl made him fall in love with her
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Chapter 1 - The first glimpse

Silence—

Peace—

And a ray of the sunlight entering through the window in a room.

It was shining.

There sat two men on sofas.

"So, have you ever been in love?" A man from those two men asked. Wearing a white coat, her set in mullet.

"Maybe, yes" the other man answered. Heavy but a gentle voice.

Wearing a baggy black jeans and a black tshirt under a black jacket over his fair skin. And hair styled in curtain mullet.

"Then what is your story? I wanna know about it and also my audience would love to know about it too" the man said, being completely curious about the other man life.

"Oh!... You wanna know?" The other man laughed.

"I definitely wanna know Mr.Fin"

The other man name was Fin.

"Ok then it started from the day when I was near a lake" He narrated. His eyes filled with nostalgia and peace.

"Which lake?" The other man distracted him.

Fin looked at him.

"I don't know what was the name of that lake but it was near the park"

"Oh then it's okay"

"So, I was near the lake laying on a wood placing my book over my face I was sleeping under a tree and it was the time when I was working on my novels" he explained carefully highlighting every details.

THE STORY GOES IN THE PAST

Where Fin was laying on a wood near the lake, there was a tree above him giving him the shadow to rest, there was a bridge above the lake

The sun was about to set.

And it became red, and the ray of the sun was falling on the lake's water giving it a beautiful shade to shine.

A cool breeze started to blow.

And suddenly Fin heard someone's laugh. A beautiful laugh that made him remove his book from his face.

And something that widened his brown eyes.

There was a girl...

A girl with red hair.

Her wavy and open hair was blowing because of the wind.

Hair as red as cherry shining in the sun's ray of light.

Her hair could easily reach her waist.

And her brown eyes and fair skin were shining.

A magestic view.

A person who could pause the time.

Fin was just there staring at her.

Admiring her.

Admiring her hair.

Her dress was red that could reach her white shoes.

Fin sat on that wood and was only looking at that girl, he was mesmerized by that girl's beauty, the ray of sunlight was also falling on her making her look divine

"I can tell by taking a look at her she was the girl with the positive energy" Fin said to the guy

"Then what kind of thing happened with the two of you" the other guy asked.

"You will know" he replied with a smile

She left but the first glimpse of her made Fin crazy, he was still there sitting on that wood, he couldn't even react

"She was beautiful" Fin muttered in his low and husky voice,

Then the sun started to set and the sky started to become dark, the stars started to show up in the sky

"Night sky is beautiful, isn't it?" Fin muttered, he took his bag and the book and left from there

While he was walking on the footpath, he was only thinking about that girl with red hair whom he Just can't forget

He entered a neighborhood and then he entered a house which had two floors ground and 1st floor

"Welcome home, Fin" A woman welcomed him as he entered the house, she was wearing a white long dress and has black hair

"Hello mom" Fin muttered, that woman is his mother

"Are you tired?" His mother asked him

"No I'm not but I'm just lost in something" he said while thinking about that girl with red hair

"Is something bugging you? Is it about your novels?" She asked and Fin didn't replied to her

"By the way, your dad is coming tomorrow" she said and she started to go to the other room

"Oh! Ok" Fin took a sigh

"Ok! I'm going to sleep" Fin said and started to go upstairs his mother looked at him

"What?!" His mother asked while being shocked

"Are you not going to eat today aswell huhh?!!" His mother asked him, he stopped at the middle of the stairs

"You should take care of your health Fin, I know you're 22 years old now you have your own life but still listen to me I'm your mother you're not eating lunch or dinner for several days" she said to him loudly

"How longer do you think you can do this to your body Fin you only ate breakfast and it's not enough for your body" she shouted at him

"I'm not going to eat today sorry" He answered calmly and he went to a room and locked the door

"Tell me what's bugging you? Fin?" His mother was sad and her eyes were teary

"I guess I'm not a good mother" she said to herself and started to cry

Fin sat infront of the door, the lights were off in his room but from his window the dim light of the moon was filling his whole room

There were many pictures of him and his mother, and a family photo aswell of him, his mother and a man who is his father

A man with small moustache and wearing glasses there are many pictures of a little boy aswell who is most probably Fin

He stood up and sat on chair which is next to the desk he was looking at some sketches some character designs

Fin took a sigh

"Why were you not eating for several days?" The other guy asked

"Because I don't wanted to" Fin said and he laughed a little

"I don't remember what kind of think I was going through at that time but I know I didn't wanted to live at that time but I also couldn't collect the courage to kill myself" he said with a smile

"I mean everyone face this kind of time in their life where you feel way too heavy inside your heart" he said with a smile

Fin was sitting on the chair looking at those sketches and then he took out a notebook outside his bag

He Opened that notebook and took a pencil and started to draw a girl and the girl whom he was drawing was the one whom he saw at evening

And he completed that drawing and then he took some pages where on the first page the title was 'A world of pain- chapter:21'

Only 5 pages were written then he started to write from the 6th page and he wrote till the 15th page

He Opened his phone to check time '12:56 AM, Date: 19/09/2021' then he looked at that drawing where he drew that girl with red hair

"Should I go to that place tomorrow?" He asked to himself while looking at that drawing

"I guess I should go tomorrow what if, if I saw her again maybe" he said to himself then he started to look towards the night sky

"And did you go to that place?" The guy asked

"Obviously" Fin said with a smile

"That day I got the first glimpse of her"

To be continued...