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Chains of Revenge

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Chapter 1 - Episode Title: "When The fire fell"

Opening Scene:>

> "They say revenge is a fire that never dies. For me, it started the night my world burned."

Smoke filled the air. Screams echoed through the mansion as flames swallowed everything—his mother's desperate cries, his father's final breath, the symbol of their power turned to ashes.

Hidden under the table, young Caleb watched the killers walk away—with cold eyes and blood on their hands. The man leading them? (Maya's father)Don Seranno.....

"I was only ten... but I swore that night—I'd return. And I'd make them pay. Every. Last One."

Episode 1 – "The Devil Was Born That Night" 

Scene 1: The Night Everything Burned (Flashback – 15 Years Ago)

[ Caleb's POV]

"Some devils are made. Others are born in fire."

[Panel 1]

Night. Rain falls over a grand mansion surrounded by trees.A dark, stormy night. The silhouettes of a mansion are barely visible through the pouring rain, but the glow of flames is unmistakable. The image of a massive inferno consuming the mansion could be the focal point, with the flames stretching high into the sky.Inside, lights flicker. Screams echo.

[Panel 2]

A 10-year-old Caleb hides under a dining table, knees to his chest.

His small hands tremble. He's covered in bruises and his hands are over his ears.

[Panel 3]

His mother and father argue with a man in a black coat — Maya's father.

Gun drawn. Cold stare.

[Panel 4]

Gunshots. Caleb flinches as his parents drop.

Close-up of the killer's hand — a silver lion-emblem ring.

[Panel 5]

Caleb doesn't cry. He just stares… burning the moment into his memory.

[Panel 6]

As flames consume the mansion, a single line echoes:

[Caleb]

"From that night on… I was never the same."

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> [Black screen. A voice plays—like a recording.]

"This isn't just a story of revenge… it's a story of betrayal, love, and the cost of blood."

"My name is Caleb. And everything started the night they took my family away."

[Screen fades into the burning mansion scene, the past begins.]

Scene 2: The Devil Rises (Present Day – Caleb'Pov)

"He didn't just kill them. He lit the fire that would burn everything."

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[Scene 2 – Present Day: Caleb's Mafia Empire]

[Caleb's inner voice]

"Fifteen years later… that fire became me."

[Panel 7]

15 years later. A sleek black car pulls up outside a skyscraper in the city.

Caleb, 25, steps out — Tall, powerful, sharp gaze. Black shirt half unbuttoned, tattoos on his hand,muscular,

Cold eyes, unreadable face.

[Caleb]

"Now I'm 25. The most feared name in the underground"

[Caleb's inner voice]

"They call me ruthless. Merciless. But I only live by one rule—revenge"

[Panel 8]

Inside a dark office, Caleb reviews a dossier on a man.

Photo inside: Maya's father and daughter – Maya.

[Panel 9]

Caleb: "I finally found you."

His voice is calm, but his eyes are burning.

[Panel 10]

A subordinate walks in.

Henrik (right-hand man): "Boss. He'll be at his estate tonight. No security. You want us to handle it?"

[Panel 11]

Caleb shakes his head.

Caleb: "No. This one's mine."

[Caleb's thought]

"Fifteen years. I waited… trained… bled… just for this."

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Scene 3: Caleb's Preparation and Ambush

The cold steel of a blade gleamed under the dim light as Caleb ran his thumb along the edge. His grip tightened, and the weight of the mission settled into his bones. Tonight, it would end.

A phone buzzed. Caleb didn't hesitate. He answered.

"Everything's set?" His voice was cold, controlled.

"Yeah, boss. We're ready."

Caleb hung up, his gaze shifting to the black leather jacket draped over the chair. Without a word, he threw it on and moved toward the door, his every step heavy with purpose.

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Scene Transition: The Ambush

The SUV screeched to a stop in a shadowed alley. Caleb exited, scanning the surroundings. He knew they were waiting for him.

As he entered the building, gunfire erupted. Caleb dodged a bullet, rolling to the side, and immediately returned fire. Two mercenaries dropped to the ground.

A flash of movement behind him. He spun, his fist slamming into the mercenary's face, knocking him out cold.

The chaos intensified, but Caleb was a machine. Gunshots, punches, and the snap of bones echoed in the darkened room. No hesitation. No mercy.

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Scene 4:Caleb's Final Stand

A lone man rushed at him with a knife. Caleb caught the arm mid-swing, twisted, and slammed his attacker into the wall. A quick, brutal stab. The room fell silent.

Caleb wiped his bloodied hands, his eyes steely. He wasn't done yet. The real target was still ahead.

[Panel 1]

Dimly lit room. Caleb enters, blood on his sleeves, breathing heavy. His jaw is tight. Fury burns in his eyes.

[Caleb mumbling to himself]

"This isn't business. This is personal."

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[Panel 2]

Don Serrano looks up in shock as Caleb appears. He backs away slightly, trying to stay composed.

[Don Serrano]

"Who the hell are you?"

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[Panel 3]

Caleb walks slowly toward him. His voice is low, trembling with rage.

[Caleb]

"I'm the ghost you created. The name you buried years ago."

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[Panel 4]

Serrano grabs a gun and aims, but his hands shake. Caleb knocks the gun aside and grabs him by the collar, slamming him into the wall.

[Don Serrano]

"What do you want from me!?"

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[Panel 5]

Close-up of Caleb's face, filled with pain and fury.

[Caleb]

"You killed my parents. Burned my home. Left me to die."

[Caleb (shouting)]

"I'm Caleb Romano — son of Marco and Elena Romano!"

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[Panel 6]

Without hesitation, Caleb pulls out a knife and drives it into Serrano's chest, roaring as he does it.

[Sound Effect]

THUCK!

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[Panel 7]

Serrano gasps, blood dripping from his mouth. His eyes widen in horror as he realizes the truth — too late.

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[Panel 8]

Caleb lets him collapse to the floor. He steps back, breathing heavily, fury still on his face.

[Caleb's inner voice]

"Now… they can finally rest"

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End of Episode 1