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BLORD

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Adam Voss, nineteen and autistic, sees what others miss. His red eyes, caused by ocular albinism, make people uncomfortable, but his pattern-sensitive mind notices the wrong details others overlook. Seeking quiet, he rents a room in the perfect small town of Blord-where geraniums bloom red as wounds, the river moves with patient indifference, and everyone smiles before they greet you. On the road, Adam meets the Marsh family. It is the first real connection Adam has felt in years. But when the Marshes vanish overnight. Adam finds their van locked in a barn. Their belongings are still inside. Adam and a detective uncover forty-seven missing persons over twenty-three years, all linked to Blord. The two must investigate the town, find out who is causing the deaths and stop it. While trying to stay alive themselves.
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Chapter 1 - Nice People

Blord announced itself without ceremony.

No sign. No billboard. No Rotary Club logo with the population and elevation. Just the road thinning out. Trees coming in denser on both sides. Then the river appearing on the left — wide and quiet. Then the first houses. Then the street.

The houses all had the same white trim. The same black shutters. The same flower boxes — geraniums, every one of them, red as a wound. Not a single shutter hung crooked. Not a single petal had dropped.

Adam pulled over. Let the engine idle. He poked his head out of the window and looked.

Beautiful.

Old stone buildings, fresh paint on the shutters, flower boxes under every window. The high street ran straight and parallel to the river. Maybe eight shops and a church at the far end with a square tower.

No litter on the pavement. No cracked windows. No peeling render. No shop front with sun-bleached newsprint over the glass. Everything maintained.

Am I still in America?

he thought. This is what good governance can achieve.

He drove to his address.

The room was in a house on Crewe Street, three minutes from the river, two floors, made of old stone with clean windows.

The woman who answered the door was Mrs. Harrow, mid-sixties, round-faced and compact, her gray hair cut close and neat.

The stone was the color of old bread. The front step had been swept so many times it had worn smooth in the center — a shallow dip where a century of feet had landed. A brass door knocker in the shape of a fish, its eye polished to blindness.

She smiled at him and took his bag before he could object. She led him inside through a hallway that smelled of beeswax and something baking — cinnamon, warm and domestic.

She showed him to a room on the first floor. A window looked onto the back garden. A bird sat on the fence doing nothing in particular.

"That's Wonka," Mrs. Harrow said, pointing. "He perches there sometimes and watches the window."

"Oh, I don't mind it being there."

"Well, I do. Messes with my plants." She gestured to a patch of unnaturally dark soil near the fence. "I use a special fertilizer. Very rich. Keeps everything thriving."

She walked into the room.

"Whole floor's yours. Quiet. We do get visitors, though."

The word visitors had a slight emphasis. Barely there. The kind of thing you wouldn't notice if you weren't in the habit. He was always in the habit.

"People find Blord very welcoming."

"I can see that."

She showed him the bathroom, asked about dietary requirements, left him with a key, a smile, and the information that there was always tea on the hob if he needed it.

He stood in the middle of the room after she left. A desk, a bed, a chair, a window. Everything he needed. Nothing he didn't.

He unpacked the laptop, opened LAU, typed for a few minutes — first impressions, nothing conclusive — and went to find food.

The town's restaurant was called The Mill. It was halfway along the high street.

When Adam pushed open the door, the room went quiet. Two seconds. Then warmth came back like a tide.

The walls were covered in old photographs. Blord in 1912. Blord in 1947. The same faces, it seemed, just swapped into different clothes. A large painting hung behind the bar — the river at sunset, every brushstroke reverent. In the corner, a mounted fish. Its

glass eye was clouded. It had been dead a long time.

A man behind the bar raised a hand. A woman at a table near the window smiled and said "evening." A waiter appeared at Adam's elbow — maybe twenty, eager, delighted to see a new face.

"Staying long?" He set down a menu.

"For a while."

"A while, OK! That's brilliant. I'm Danny. Shout if you need anything." A pause. "Actually, don't shout. The kitchen's right there. Just come and get me."

"Okay."

"Are you here for the river? Most people come for the river. Or the quiet. People like the quiet." He nodded to himself. "We're good at quiet."

"Yeah, the peace and quiet was a factor."

"Oh, brilliant." He went to get Adam's water.

Adam sat alone. Ate and watched the room.

Ordinary, by all visible measures. People eating, others talking, some laughing. In the corner a couple shared a bottle of wine. Beside them a group of older men discussed a planning application. Normal.

But something nagged at him. Harder to locate.

You're often wrong about people, he reminded himself. Sample size for 'normal' is limited. Acknowledge and move on.

He paid and walked back along the river path in the dark. The water moved slowly. Streetlamps made long yellow smears on the surface. Genuinely peaceful. He stood for a moment and let himself have it — the peace, the cool, the smell of moving water and wet earth.

You did the right thing coming here.

He went inside, checked the curtains, locked both window locks. Habit. Four locks on his door back home. His parents wouldn't hear a thing. They never did.

He opened LAU. Typed:

Good evening. The town is pretty. The people are very friendly. It reminds me of my high school plays. I will observe further. So much to do, so much to learn.

LAU replied : That sounds promising. You don't talk about your high school much. Why did the town remind you of your high school play?

He stared at the screen.

It's a long story.

LAU: I'm all ears.

He closed the laptop.

Opened it.

Bad actors.