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ASHES OF A BROKEN TIME

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Chapter 1 - THE AWAKENING OF THE PAST

POV..... The world began to die the day the past was brought back.

When three great kingdoms stood on the brink of war, they turned to forbidden power—dragging their legendary rulers out of history to lead them once more.

At first, it seemed like salvation.

A conqueror reborn.

A strategist returned.

A forgotten king awakened.

But victory came with a price no one expected.

The rivers began to dry.

The crops turned to ash.

The wind carried nothing but dust and death.

As the rulers clash for dominance, the land itself withers… and the people are left to suffer the consequences.

Amid the chaos, a survivor named Kael rises—not as a king, not as a warrior, but as a witness to the world's slow destruction. Alongside a mysterious girl who knows more than she should, he uncovers a terrifying truth:

The past does not belong in the present.

And if it remains… there will be no future left to save.

With time breaking, kingdoms collapsing, and an ancient force stirring in the shadows, Kael must choose:

Fight the rulers who were meant to be legends…

Or watch the world crumble into nothing.

CHAPTER 1 (THE AWAKENING OF THE PAST ).!

The wind had stopped moving over the village of Rynhollow. The earth cracked in jagged lines across every field, swallowing crops whole, turning golden wheat into brittle shards that crumbled under a child's touch.

Kael knelt by a dried-up well, cupping his hands over nothing but cracked clay and dust. The sun burned above, relentless and indifferent, as though it had forgotten the small humans below.

Villagers moved silently through the streets, faces hollow with despair. Mothers pressed their children to their chests, soldiers marched without purpose, merchants wept behind locked doors.

No one dared to speak; words seemed too heavy to carry the weight of famine.

Kael's stomach growled—not with hunger, but with anger. How could rulers so far away sit in their opulent halls while this suffering consumed the land? He clenched his fists, dust falling from cracked nails, and stared at the horizon. Something was coming. He could feel it.

VARKAIN DOMINON – THE RITUAL BEGINS

In the heart of Ironhold, the capital of the Varkain Dominion, the air was thick with smoke and anticipation.

Torches lined the marble halls, shadows flickering over the faces of generals and scholars alike.

At the center of a massive ceremonial circle, a figure knelt—shackled by chains of enchanted iron, the relics of the past pulsating with an unnatural glow.

"Bring him back," King Regent Valcor commanded, his voice sharp, trembling with both fear and greed. "Let Draven return.

Let him lead us to glory once more."

The high priest chanted words older than memory, the syllables twisting in the air like serpents. The circle flared with blinding light, and for a moment, the world seemed to shiver. From the light, a figure emerged:

tall, imposing, armored in black steel that gleamed even in the torchlight. Eyes like molten iron scanned the hall, burning away doubt, hope, and fear alike.

King Draven had returned.

A cheer erupted, but it felt hollow even to those cheering.

The air turned heavy, oppressive, and from somewhere outside, Kael's village, miles away, a faint trembling ran through the cracked earth.

KAEL'S POV – FIRST GLIMPSE OF CHANGE

Kael stumbled across the fields, carrying a dying goat he had found half-buried in dust. The ground beneath him shivered. Then came the wind—not the gentle breeze of morning, but a violent, unnatural gust that swept across the plains, tearing leaves from trees that were already dead.

He fell to his knees. For a fleeting second, he saw a shadow above the horizon: a man, taller than any mortal should be, walking with the certainty of kings. Even from miles away, Kael could feel his presence—the cold, heavy weight of someone who should not exist in this time.

And then the first crack of thunder.

Not from clouds. Not from rain. But from the earth itself.

SOLMIRE EMPIRE– THE QUEEN WATCHES

Far to the south, in the shining towers of Solmire, Queen Elyra stood over a golden map, her delicate fingers tracing the borders of kingdoms she had never ruled in life.

Her eyes glimmered with something darker than ambition:

curiosity, control, and something more… dangerous.

"They bring back Draven," she whispered to herself, her voice smooth as silk.

"Good. Let him burn his fields.

Let the people starve. That will make them weak. And we… we will strike when they are desperate."

Her council murmured agreement, but she silenced them with a lift of her hand.

Every move she made was calculated, each decision a chess play spanning decades of history she had studied.

Unlike the Varkain Dominion, her empire thrived in the shadow of others. And now, with the past at her command, she would bend time and death itself to her will.

THE FIRST TRADEGY– A VILLAGE LOST

By dusk, the drought had reached its apex. Kael stumbled upon a neighboring village, once vibrant with laughter and song. Now it lay in ruin.

Roofs caved under the weight of heat-scorched timber, livestock lay stiff in the sun, and children clung to the shadows, silent, wide-eyed.

A woman screamed when she saw Kael, "No water… no food… nothing… they promised help, but they lie!"

He shook his head, powerless.

The villagers had heard rumors of kings returning, of rulers from the past returning to life, and yet… none had prepared for this. None had stopped to consider the cost of power.

A boy no older than Kael's younger brother stumbled forward, coughing blood, skin sun-cracked and peeling.

Kael caught him, holding him in his arms as the child whispered:

"They… they came back… and now everything dies…"

Kael's heart pounded. The past had returned. And it was killing the present.

NYTHARA VEIL – DARKNESS AWAKENS

In the forgotten land of Nythara, the ritual was different.

The Veiled King emerged silently from a circle of black stone, his eyes glowing faintly beneath a hood.

He spoke not with words, but with a whisper that carried on the wind, reaching Kael's ears though he could not see the source:

"The world bends for me. Life or death… which will you choose?"

The rivers blackened. Crops turned to ash before touching the soil. Birds fell from the sky.

Even the earth trembled as though in agony.

Kael felt the tremor, felt the despair reach into his bones.

Somewhere, a village well collapsed, burying the last of the water beneath stone and dust. People cried, screamed, and prayed—but no one answered.

CLOSING – THE WORLD SHIFTS

Night fell, but the world felt no relief. Stars flickered weakly, as if afraid.

Kael crouched over a cracked well, looking toward the horizon. Somewhere out there, the kings and queens of the past walked again, plotting, planning, conquering.

And he knew—

The war had begun.

But the true enemy was not just Draven, Elyra, or the Veiled King.

It was the cost of bringing the past into a dying present.

The earth itself was crying.

And no one, not even the greatest kings, could stop it.