For all new readers, let me tell you my plans. I know that 1-8 chapters are rough but keep up its going to get better.
Lets talk about our mc and my plans for him.
I plan for him to be conqueror, not just plain and boring saiyan like in others fictions.
Of course he will have reason to be one but you will have to read to find it out.
I always disliked other dragon fanfictions when they are all same slop. For example its always about talking or reincarnating in some main character like Goku and then doing everything cannonically. Dragon ball universe got so much potential its unbeliveable, just look at frieza's race (Acrosian's). I could talk and think about their race abilities and genetics for hours on end, just like i did with saiyans. Other thing I hate is mc without distinctive trait, in other words when he is grey. Not good and not bad its especially prominent in chinesse translations where they only care about harems.
As for story If i decide to drop it, it will be on my own terms.
If i drop it mc dies and then there will be prologue how his life and death changed everything around him. For example how would it change Goku's life, it could have some astronomical changes for example he wouldn't be called Goku but instead Bardock would honor his late brother Vaske.
Those are just some of ideas I could change with Vaske's death, and even if i don't decide to drop it I still could make Vaske die for even better ending. Beacuse I never saw death ending in dragon ball fan fiction, and I love unique stuff.
Lastly our mc will be someone you would call evil, of course he wouldn't go out of his way to cause harm. But if situation or anything that could benefit himself and most important people to him appear, he wouldn't think much about killing innocent.
And chapters I'm most dissatisfied I will rewrite them when I have time. But it wont happen in short amount of time.
What I value most is people that tell me about mistakes and give me ideas for improving my story. Of course I didn't forget people that give me Power stones everyone of them and especially Nymier_Savage who even gave me stones when i wasn't writing anything, also it includes George_crazy_slot. Beacuse of two of yall I returned to this fan fiction as soon as I could, so thank you guys (or girls if you are in 5% that reads my fan fiction(you are welcome of course)) for giving me motivation.
If you got any questions you can ask anything, anytime and anywhere I will respond best way I can without revealing too much of my future plans.
Thats it! CYA!!!