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Echoes of a buried name

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Echoes of a Buried Name is a psychological horror novel that explores the terrifying power of forgotten identities and buried secrets. The story follows a troubled protagonist who returns to their ancestral hometown after a series of disturbing dreams and unexplained voices begin calling a name no one seems to remember. As the protagonist digs into old records, abandoned houses, and whispered folklore, they uncover a long-suppressed tragedy tied to a name deliberately erased from history. The deeper they search, the stronger the echoes become—manifesting as hallucinations, supernatural occurrences, and violent shifts in reality. It soon becomes clear that the buried name belongs to a restless presence that feeds on remembrance and seeks to reclaim its identity at any cost. The novel builds dread through atmosphere and psychological tension, blurring the line between guilt, memory, and the supernatural. In the end, Echoes of a Buried Name reveals that some names are buried for a reason—and remembering them may unleash horrors better left forgotten.
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Chapter 1 - Echoes Of A Buried Name (EOBN)

Chapter One: The Ink of the Earth

The fog in Blackwood Vale didn't drift; it crept. It moved like something with a pulse, clinging to the damp bark of the ancient oaks and swallowing the headlights of Elias's rusted sedan. He hadn't intended to return to the valley. No one with a sound mind and a working memory ever did. But the letter in his glovebox—yellowed, smelling of wet copper and cellar dust—had felt less like an invitation and more like a summons.

"Come home, Eli," it had read in his mother's frantic, looping script. "The soil is remembering."

His mother had been dead for six years.

The Threshold of Silence

Elias pulled over where the asphalt surrendered to gravel. The air here was different—heavy, pressurized, as if the valley were holding its breath. He stepped out of the car, the crunch of stones sounding like breaking bone in the absolute stillness.

Ahead stood the silhouette of the Miller estate. It wasn't a grand manor; it was a sprawling, architectural scar on the hillside, built by ancestors who believed that if you stacked enough stone, the spirits of the land couldn't climb over.

As he approached the porch, he noticed the marks. They were carved into the doorframe—shallow, frantic gouges that looked like tally marks, or perhaps fingernail tracks.

Observation: The house didn't just look empty. It looked hollowed out, like a ribcage picked clean by scavengers.

He pushed the door open. It didn't creak. It slid back with a hushed, oily smoothness that made the hair on his neck stand up.

"Hello?" he called out.

The house didn't echo. That was the first wrong thing. In a space this large, with high ceilings and stripped floorboards, his voice should have bounced. Instead, the sound was swallowed instantly, as if the walls were lined with velvet. Or tongues.

The Room of Unspoken Things

He made his way to the study, the room where his father had spent his final days obsessing over the local genealogy. The air grew colder here, a biting, subterranean chill.

On the mahogany desk sat a single, leather-bound ledger. It was open. Elias leaned in, his flashlight beam trembling. The pages weren't filled with names of the living, but with a single name repeated thousands of times in ink so black it looked like wet tar.

ALISTAIR.

Alistair wasn't a family name. It wasn't a name he recognized from any headstone in the valley. Yet, as he stared at the script, the ink seemed to shimmer. It wasn't drying.

Thump.

The sound came from beneath his feet. Not a mechanical thud of a furnace, but a rhythmic, fleshy beat.

Thump-thump.

He knelt, pressing his ear to the floorboards. He expected the smell of mold or old wood. Instead, he smelled freshly turned earth and something sweet—like lilies at a funeral.

"Who's there?" he whispered to the floor.

A voice whispered back. It didn't come from the room. It came from inside his own ear canal, a wet, rasping sound that vibrated against his skull.

"You forgot to bury the rest of me, Eli."

The Name in the Dirt

Elias bolted upright, knocking the ledger to the floor. As it hit the wood, the ink bled off the pages. It didn't splash; it flowed like a swarm of insects, pooling into the cracks between the floorboards.

He backed away, toward the hallway, but the door he had just walked through was gone. In its place was a wall of rough-hewn stone, damp and glistening with a pale, milky fungus.

He realized then that the house wasn't just a building. It was a digestive system.

He pulled the letter from his pocket once more, desperate for a clue, a way out. But the handwriting had changed. His mother's frantic script was gone. In its place, the same wet, black ink from the ledger was blooming across the paper, forming new words:

"THE ROOTS ARE HUNGRY. GIVE US THE NAME."

Elias felt a sharp pain in his throat. He tried to scream, but his jaw felt heavy, locked by an invisible weight. He reached into his mouth, his fingers brushing against something gritty. He coughed, and a spray of dark, rich soil hit his palm. Inside the dirt was a small, white fragment.

A tooth. But not his own. It was too old, too yellowed, and carved into its surface was a single, tiny letter: A.