The universe, in Lily's experience, was predictably beautiful. It was the one thing in her life that refused to be messy. Rent could be late, her mother's medical bills could pile up like accusatory snowdrifts, and her step-sister Chloe could spend another hour detailing the exquisite inadequacy of Lily's wardrobe, but Betelgeuse would still burn a steady, reassuring orange. The Whirlpool Galaxy would keep its elegant spiral, indifferent to her earthly woes.
Tonight, however, the universe was misbehaving.
Pine Ridge Observatory was less a temple to science and more a forgotten library carrel attached to the cosmos. The air always smelled of dust, stale coffee, and the faint, metallic tang of the aging 14-inch reflector telescope that was Lily's true boss. Her official title was "Night Operations Associate," which meant she was the one who stayed until 2 AM, guiding the telescope for online graduate students in other time zones and praying the antique cooling system didn't give out.
She rubbed her eyes, the glow of the control monitor painting her face a sickly blue. Another night, another data set on variable stars in M13. It was peaceful, if profoundly lonely. A notification pinged on her private log—the one she wasn't supposed to run on the observatory's system. Her own little project, tracking unexplained high-atmospheric phenomena. Mostly it was space junk or military tests.
This was different.
Designated ORI-7, the anomaly appeared as a ripple in her custom spectroscopic analysis. Not a satellite signature. Not a meteor. It was a pulsed emission of light, coherent and rhythmic, like a heartbeat, descending from the direction of Orion's belt. It was beautiful, a symphony in data form. Her fatigue evaporated.
"What are you?" she whispered, her breath fogging the screen slightly.
She overrode the scheduled program, swinging the great telescope with a creak of protest to the coordinates. The visual feed resolved. A point of light, too steady for a star, shimmering with an impossible iridescence—pearlescent silver one second, deep nebula-blue the next. It was moving. Fast. And its trajectory, her fingers flew over the keyboard, calculating, was not an orbit. It was a descent.
A controlled descent? No. The pulse was becoming erratic. A distress signal.
Her heart hammered against her ribs. This was it. The moment every star-gazer half-hopes for and wholly fears. First Contact. And it was happening on her watch, in her lonely, coffee-stained corner of the sky.
The door to the control room banged open. "Lily! Have you seen my charger? I cannot have a dead phone for my date with Bryce tomorrow!" Chloe stood silhouetted in the doorway, a whirlwind of entitlement and jasmine perfume.
Lily slapped her hand on the keyboard, blanking the screen. "No. Not in here."
Chloe's eyes narrowed. "You look guilty. What are you hiding?"
"Light pollution data for the county board. Very thrilling."
With a scoff, Chloe left. Lily waited for the click of her heels to fade, then looked back at the screen. The anomaly was gone from the scope's view.
Because it was now below the horizon.
A distant, low thunder, not from the sky, but from the wooded hills beyond the town, rattled the old windowpanes. A faint, greenish light flickered against the clouds and died.
Lily was already pulling on her worn jacket, grabbing her backpack. The universe had just crashed into her backyard.
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