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Chapter 10 - Returning friction with Ino

The silence lingered like smoke after Kyōmei's armor disintegrated. Renji registered the shocked expressions, the wide eyes, the frozen postures. Kakashi, leaning against the distant tree, didn't move, but the single eye visible above through his ANBU mask was unnervingly fixed on him. Iruka finally snapped out of it, rushing to Kyōmei's side as the boy whimpered, gingerly touching the wreckage strapped to his chest.

"Medic!" Iruka barked, his usual warmth replaced by sharp authority. He shot Renji a look – not anger, not quite, but a profound, troubled intensity. "Renji… control. Precision is paramount. Remember that."

Renji nodded once, the clinical satisfaction of the successful resonance test already buried under the weight of Iruka's concern and the palpable shift in the air. The murmurs started then, low and buzzing, a counterpoint to Kyōmei's pained gasps. "Freak science," someone muttered. "Shattered it like glass…" whispered another. "He didn't even hit him hard…"

Naruto, predictably, broke the tense quiet. "WHOA! That was AWESOME, Renji! Did you see that, teme?" He punched the air, oblivious to the undercurrents. "Boom! Armor gone! What'd ya call it? Reso… reso-thingy?" Sasuke merely scowled, his dark eyes narrowed, assessing Renji with new, wary focus.

Sakura hovered nearby, frowning. "It looked… painful. Are you okay, Kyōmei-san?" Her medical instincts warring with the unsettling spectacle she'd just witnessed.

The rest of the demonstrations felt perfunctory, overshadowed. Ino's flower-based genjutsu was sharp, precise, but drew only polite murmurs. Shikamaru lazily extended his shadow, trapping Kiba for a few seconds before yawning and releasing him. Naruto's attempts at the Transformation Technique were… ambitious but unstable, shifting into increasingly bizarre, multi-colored creatures that elicited groans and a few stifled laughs. All the while, Renji felt eyes on him. Not just Kakashi's, hidden in the trees. The other clan kids watched him now, not with open mockery, but with a new kind of intensity. Wariness, yes, but also a predatory calculation. He was no longer just the bookworm oddball; he was a variable. A dangerous one.

The next morning dawned bright and clear over the training grounds, the air still cool but promising heat. The packed earth felt firm under Renji's sandals, scuffed by countless drills. The scent of damp soil and pine resin mixed with the faint tang of sweat already building. Iruka clapped his hands, his expression serious.

"Alright, listen up! End-of-year surprise sparring matches. Randomized pairings. Demonstrate control, technique, and strategy. This isn't about humiliation, it's about learning." His gaze swept the group, lingering for a fraction of a second on Renji. "First pair: Choji Akimichi and…"

The matches unfolded. Choji rolled over his opponent with practiced ease. Shikamaru trapped his in shadows almost immediately, declaring victory before breaking a sweat. Naruto, paired against Sakura, charged wildly. Sakura, disciplined but lacking combat finesse, dodged desperately for a minute before catching him with a surprisingly solid punch to the gut that doubled him over, gasping. "Sakura-chan… so strong…" he wheezed, earning an exasperated sigh from Iruka and a blush from Sakura.

As the matches progressed, Renji felt the focus tightening. Kiba defeated his opponent with sharp taijutsu and Akamaru's nips. Sasuke dispatched his with cold efficiency, a single shuriken barrage pinning his opponent's sleeve to a post. Each victory by a clan heir seemed to ratchet up the tension directed at Renji. He saw the glances exchanged, the subtle nods.

"Ino Yamanaka," Iruka called, "and… Renji Kaiten."

A ripple went through the group. Ino stepped forward, a slow, predatory smirk spreading across her face. Sunlight caught her blonde hair as she flipped it over her shoulder. She didn't bother with a formal stance; she looked utterly confident, relaxed. Her eyes, sharp as kunai, locked onto Renji.

"Finally," she drawled, her voice carrying easily. "Let's see how your little freak science holds up against a real clan technique." She raised her hands, fingers already beginning the familiar, intricate weaving of seals for the Yamanaka Clan's signature jutsu. "Mind Body Switch: Possession Jutsu."

Renji's mind raced. Distance: approximately 8 meters. Attack vector: direct line-of-sight mental projection. Countermeasures? Disruption? Requires focus… Break her concentration. He dropped into a low stance, chakra surging through his pathways, ready to dodge or disrupt. But the Mind Body Switch wasn't a projectile he could deflect. It was an intrusion.

Ino's hands flashed through the final seal. "Shintenshin no Jutsu!" A visible pulse of chakra, almost a shimmer in the air, lanced out from her, impossibly fast. Renji braced, trying to focus his own chakra defensively, trying to vibrate his own mental barrier, but it was like trying to stop a flood with a sieve. The pulse hit him like a physical blow to the forehead.

His vision greyed out. The sounds of the training ground – Naruto's shout, Iruka's sharp intake of breath – vanished, replaced by a roaring silence. Then, nothingness. A terrifying void. He was aware, but trapped. Locked in a dark corner of his own mind, a helpless observer in his own body. He could see through his own eyes, feel the rough earth beneath his sandals, but he couldn't twitch a finger. My body. Not mine. Controlled.

He watched, a prisoner within himself, as his body – Ino, piloting it – staggered dramatically. His own voice, distorted by Ino's mocking inflection, rang out. "Whoa! This is weird! What a clumsy body!" She made his arms flail, his legs stumble. "So much… thinking going on in here. Boring!" Laughter erupted from the watching students.

"Renji!" Naruto yelled, confused. "What are you doing? Fight her!"

Iruka stepped forward, face grim. "Ino! This is a spar! Release him immediately!"

Ino-in-Renji just laughed again, a harsh sound utterly alien coming from his throat. "Relax, Iruka-sensei! Just demonstrating! Freak science won't save you now, bookworm," she taunted, directing the words inward as much as outward. She made his body clumsily attempt a basic academy punch, missing wildly. "See? Useless without your vibrations!"

The humiliation was intense, a cold fire in Renji's trapped consciousness. He raged against the walls of his mental prison, trying to force anything – a tremor, a pulse of disruptive chakra. But his control was severed. He was a puppet.

After an agonizing thirty seconds, Ino released the jutsu. The connection snapped. Renji gasped, staggering back as full control slammed back into his limbs, leaving him disoriented and dizzy. He caught himself before falling, sweat beading on his brow, his breath coming in ragged gasps. The world swam back into focus, the sounds assaulting his ears – Naruto's angry shouting, Kiba's barking laugh, the murmur of the others.

Ino stood a few paces away, looking smug and utterly unharmed. "Too slow, Kaiten," she said, crossing her arms. "All that brainpower, and you still got caught flat-footed. Guess you need more than weird humming to be a real shinobi."

Renji straightened, ignoring the dizziness, the lingering ghost-feeling of violation. He met Ino's gaze, his blue eyes cold, analytical. The defeat stung, a sharp counterpoint to yesterday's success. But the humiliation was already being processed, compartmentalized. Vulnerability identified: Close-range, non-physical attacks bypass physical resonance defenses. Requires indirect counter or preemptive disruption.

He saw Iruka watching him, concern warring with the need to maintain order. 

As the next spar was called, Renji stepped back to the edge of the group. Naruto bounded over, vibrating with indignation. "That was so unfair, dattebayo! She just cheated!"

"It's a legitimate technique, Naruto," Renji said, his voice flat, clinical. He rubbed his temple where the chakra pulse had struck. "The Mind Body Switch bypasses kinetic interaction entirely. It requires direct neurological disruption or overwhelming the user's focus before full manifestation." He looked down at his own hands, flexing his fingers. The memory of his body moving without his command was visceral. Touching an opponent's weapon bare-handed is slow, dangerous. Resonance Strike requires contact or proximity. Too slow against fast, non-contact techniques.

He looked towards the weapons rack nearby, the glint of kunai and shuriken in the sunlight. Contact… through an intermediary. A medium. A conduit. His mind, always churning, latched onto the problem with fierce intensity. Vibration propagates through solids. Metal. Wood. The kunai in his hand yesterday had vibrated, a proof of concept. But controlling it precisely enough, at range, to induce material failure in a target...

The frustration of the tin sheet experiment, the limitations exposed by Ino… they collided. He felt the familiar pressure, the itch just before a breakthrough. Not understanding what needed to resonate, but how to deliver the resonance effectively, safely, quickly.

He picked up a discarded training kunai from the ground, its dull edge cool against his palm. He focused a minuscule thread of chakra, not a blast, but a controlled pulse. A single frequency. 110 Hz. He felt the faintest tremor in the metal.

Propagation, he thought, his eyes narrowing. Controlled propagation. Channeled resonance. He stared at the kunai, the sounds of the ongoing spar fading into background noise. The path forward wasn't just refinement. It was a fundamental shift. His weakness wasn't just power; it was delivery. And the solution vibrated faintly in his hand.

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