TWD FanFic Multiverse

Berserk Truck-kun goes and hits a retired soldier while he is on his way home after his deployment. This is my first FF so be honest in your criticisms. if I suck i suck just tell me why I suck lol and how to improve. no bashing I’m new to this and I’ve seen a lot of ideas I want to try but eh we’ll see. anyway…the only characters I own are my OCs. idk where I’m headed with the story just yet.