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Chapter 2 - CHAPTER 3: "the archive"

Page 1

A panoramic shot of a magical town nestled on a hill — with books literally floating through the air like birds.

Buildings are shaped like open tomes, scrolls hang like banners, and magical scholars walk through the streets.

LEO (off-panel):

"Wooooah…"

Page 2

Leo and Leon walk into town. Leo is wide-eyed and dodging a flying encyclopedia.

Leon is clearly unfazed.

LEO:

"This place is amazing! Look at that guy—his beard's writing by itself!"

LEON:

"Spellbeard. Pain to fight, worse in debates."

Page 3

Cut to a guild hall—huge domed library with floating staircases.

A grumpy old librarian with six pairs of glasses, Archivist Mellin, greets them.

MELLIN:

"You again, Leon?! Last time you left with three banned tomes and a talking cactus!"

LEON:

"Still have the cactus. He's very judgmental."

Page 4

Mellin inspects Leo, unimpressed.

MELLIN:

"This is your chosen one? He smells like burnt soup."

LEO (defensive):

"It was lightning bees, okay?!"

Page 5

Mellin leads them to a sealed chamber beneath the guild.*

Ancient glowing books circle a pedestal. A glyph hums beneath it.

LEON:

"Thread #2 is hidden here—under the Glyph of Memory. To unlock it, Leo has to pass the trial."

LEO:

"What kind of trial?"

MELLIN:

"The worst kind. A magical pop quiz."

Page 6

Leo is thrust into a floating classroom. Dozens of glowing quills hover, ready to write.

Mellin watches from behind a magical pane with Leon sipping tea.

LEON:

"Tests used to be lava and swords. This is somehow scarier."

Page 7

Inside the test: Leo faces questions that play out like illusions.

He must solve a riddle while riding a flying book.

Navigate a memory maze of his own past.

Debate a magical clone of himself (the clone is smug).

Page 8

Leo stumbles through it, almost gives up—but remembers Leon's smirk.

CLONE LEO (taunting):

"You're just a dumb kid with a wooden sword. You'll mess it up like always."

LEO (serious):

"Maybe. But this time… I won't run."

He slams the book shut, dissolving the illusion.

Page 9

Back in the real world, the Glyph of Memory fades. A glowing Thread floats into Leo's hand.

Leon claps once, slowly.

LEON:

"Two Threads down. Not bad for someone who faceplanted into soup last week."

LEO:

"I'm learning from the best."

LEON (raising an eyebrow):

"You're clearly not."

Page 10 (Final panel):

They leave the town at sunset. Books fly overhead.

Mellin waves, muttering about stolen quills.

Caption:

"Next: Trouble at the Crystal Vineyards!"

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