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Chapter 1 - CHAPTER ONE: "Not It This Time"

Page 1

Splash Panel:

A burning city. Magic beasts tear through buildings. A lone elf stands atop a collapsed tower, blade in one hand, blood dripping from the corner of his mouth.

LEON (narration):

"I've done this 108 times. Fought. Bled. Died. Reversed time. Saved the world… for a while."

Page 2

Panels shift rapidly:

Leon chanting a spell under a moon. A clock face cracks. The world rewinds.

LEON (narration):

"Each time, I bought a few years. A decade at best. But the world always finds a way to end itself again."

Page 3

Leon wakes up in a peaceful meadow. Birds chirp. He looks up at the sky, groaning.

LEON:

"…Again. Ugh."

Page 4

Leon sits up, brushing grass from his cloak.

He pulls out a glowing crystal—it flickers weakly.

LEON:

"Still cracked. That settles it. I'm not doing this anymore."

Page 5

Cut to a small village.

Kids playing. A young boy, LEO, chases a chicken with a wooden sword. He trips, faceplants.

LEO:

"I-I meant to do that!"

Villagers laugh. He's clearly hopeless… but enthusiastic.

Page 6

Leon watches from a fence, chewing on a blade of grass.

LEON (to himself):

"Yep. That's the one. Total idiot. Perfect."

Page 7

Interior, cozy tavern.

Leon sits across from Leo, who looks confused and a little excited.

LEO:

"Wait, you want me to save the world?"

LEON:

"Yep."

LEO:

"…But I'm just a chicken-chasing farm kid!"

LEON:

"Exactly. You've got something no one else has left: potential. Also, I'm retired."

Page 8

Leo looks overwhelmed.

LEO:

"What if I mess up?"

LEON (smirking):

"You will. A lot. That's why I'm sticking around—to insult you when you do."

Page 9

Montage panels:

Leon handing Leo a dusty old map

A magical compass glowing in Leo's hands

A silhouette of a great beast awakening deep in the forest

LEON (narration):

"I'll guide him. Train him. Kick him when he needs it. But this time… I'm just the backup."

Page 10 (Final panel):

Leo stands at the edge of the village with a makeshift pack, sword strapped on awkwardly. Leon leans on a tree nearby.

LEO:

"So where do we start?"

LEON (grinning):

"Where else? With lunch. Heroing is hungry work."

Title at bottom:

"Next: The First Thread of Fate!"

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