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Chapter 3 - CHAPTER 4: "Trouble at the Crystal Vineyard"

Page 1

A sparkling valley with hills covered in glowing, crystalline vines. Floating lanterns drift overhead. It's peaceful—almost too peaceful.

LEO (off-panel):

"This place is beautiful."

LEON:

"It's also cursed."

LEO:

"...Why wouldn't it be."

Page 2

Leon and Leo walk a path between vines that shimmer with magical light. Workers tend to the crops using floating tools.

LEO:

"So, why are we here? Another Thread?"

LEON:

"Nope. Just passing through—also, the wine here is legendary."

LEO:

"Seriously?!"

LEON:

"Even heroes need snacks and drinks."

Page 3

At a small vineyard cottage, an old dwarf named Granith greets Leon with a bear hug.

GRANITH:

"Leon! You're back! And you brought… an intern?"

LEON:

"More like an emotional support disaster."

LEO:

"Hey!"

Page 4

That night: The group gathers for dinner under the stars. Music plays, laughter, wine flows. Leo relaxes, for once.

GRANITH (to Leo):

"Ever seen a vine sing?"

LEO (confused):

"...What?"

Page 5

Granith leads Leo to a crystal trellis. The vines hum softly and glow brighter—until suddenly, they scream.

LEO (leaping back):

"OKAY THAT'S NOT NORMAL."

LEON (appearing casually):

"They're screaming because something's corrupted the roots."

Page 6

The next morning. The vineyard is quiet. Too quiet.

A shimmering fog rolls in. The vines twist unnaturally.

GRANITH:

"This started a week ago. Something in the caverns below…"

LEON:

"Figures. You grow magical vines near a temporal fault, they always get moody."

Page 7

Leon and Leo descend into a crystal cave beneath the vineyard. The walls pulse faintly. Echoes whisper.

LEO:

"I don't like this."

LEON:

"Good. Stay alert."

A shadow darts past them.

Page 8

They're ambushed by crystalline beasts—golems shaped like twisted wine vines with glowing cores.

LEON:

"Go for the core. And don't get crushed. Or skewered. Or vaporized."

LEO (nervous):

"Great advice, thanks!"

Page 9

Battle scene:

Leo fights clumsily but with heart. He uses the terrain, distracts enemies, finally cracks a golem with a leap and strike to the core.

Leon finishes two others effortlessly, not even drawing his full power.

LEO (panting):

"Are… they gone?"

LEON:

"For now. But corruption this deep? It's spreading. Fast."

Page 10 (Final panel):

Back above ground. The vineyard breathes again, but Leon looks toward the horizon.

LEO:

"What's next?"

LEON (serious):

"We find the next Thread. Before whatever's rotting this world beats us to it."

Caption:

"Next: Duel in the Sky Temple!"

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