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Chapter 17 - Chronicle Of Taming Jiwa & Rentap Buana

Phase 1: Rise of the Orphan Blade

Chapter 4: Echoes of Treachery

Part 2: The Abyss Spire

Kerisforge Stronghold loomed under a sky shrouded in jade tempests, its coral spires pulsing with the Nexus's restless tides, where Rentap Buana's vow faced a traitor's shadow that threatened to engulf it. At sixteen, he was a Kirin Blade novice, scarred but unyielding, Taming Jiwa blazing at his side, its seven waves radiating jade fire. The rusted kerambit at his hip whispered of Jaya and Mira's betrayal, their plea—find them—etched in his scars: kirin's mark on his chest, cuts on his forearm, thigh, bicep, shoulder, side, a second forearm cut, a second thigh cut, a second side cut, a third side cut, an arm cut, a second side cut, a second shoulder cut, a third side cut, a fourth side cut, a third shoulder cut, a second side cut, a bruise on his side, scrapes on his shin and knee. The coral orb in his pouch thrummed, the rune pouch and Lila's bead clinking softly, anchoring him as ley lines roared beneath the fortress. Rentap had faced wraiths, rivals, the Starlit Kirin's Shade, adepts, Idris's ambushes, the Jade Veil, the Tide Wraith, the Starlit Warden, the Coral Leviathan, the Shade Weaver, the Crest Warden, the Shadow Carver, the Tidebreaker, and the Void Sentries, his bond with Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik a steel forged in blood. Now, the Starlit Kirin's rune burned in his mind, urging him to pursue Elder Kadir, Idris, and Hafiz to the Abyss Spire, where the betrayer's rune pulsed, and a mission loomed, promising truth or ruin. As coral halls crackled with urgency, Rentap stepped toward the abyss, Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik at his side, their kerises ready, the Nexus's light their guide.

The novices' quarters were a haze of coral bunks and jade-lit lanterns, the air thick with salt and the weight of Kadir's treachery. Rentap's wounds ached, bandaged but raw, the mantra Ya Rahman, Ya Rahim steadying his breath. Visions haunted him—Jaya's blade uniting allies, Mira's plea, Kadir's cloaked form wielding a shadowed keris, his rune glowing with ambition to seize the Nexus's power. Aisha's calm resolve, Rizwan's fierce loyalty, Sari's swift precision, and Malik's unyielding strength anchored him, their unity a flame in Kerisforge's crucible. At dusk, Elder Amira's starlit staff tapped the coral floor, summoning them to the Nexus Crown, a cavernous chamber carved into the stronghold's core, its walls pulsing with jade veins, its floor a coral mosaic swirling with Nexus sigils. Master Zainah stood at the crown's heart, her coral armor glinting, joined by Adept Rafiq, his jade-etched keris a silent sentinel. Kadir's betrayal, confirmed by the Shadowed Isle's rune tablet, hung heavy. The ley lines roared, the coral orb flaring in Rentap's pouch, Taming Jiwa pulsing fiercely.

Amira's voice cut through the crown's hum, urgent and commanding. "Rentap Buana, Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, Malik—Kadir, Idris, and Hafiz hide in the Abyss Spire, guided by the betrayer's rune. Kadir's elite enforcers, the Nightblades, wield a corrupted relic, the Umbral Veil, summoning a Nexus leviathan, the Tide Serpent. Find them, destroy the Veil, or Kerisforge falls."

Rentap gripped Taming Jiwa, its pulse syncing with his heart, the coral orb amplifying the ley lines' roar. Aisha's coral-etched keris gleamed, her braid tight, eyes steady. Rizwan's humming keris swung loosely, his grin sharp but tense. Sari's jade-energy keris crackled, her stance fluid, while Malik's storm-rune keris glowed, his gaze resolute. The betrayer's rune tablet, recovered from the Shadowed Isle, lay on the mosaic, its script pointing to the Abyss Spire and Kadir's ambition. Rentap's scars burned, but his vow held firm—find Kadir, protect the Nexus, honor Jaya and Mira. The crown's ley lines surged, and Rentap stepped forward, ready to face the Spire.

The Abyss Spire was a towering monolith of coral and jade, rising from the Shadowed Isle's heart, where the Nexus's tides converged in a chaotic maelstrom. Rentap led Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik through twisting coral paths, Taming Jiwa glowing, its jade light cutting through the gloom. The coral orb thrummed, guiding them toward the Umbral Veil's pulse, while the rune pouch and Lila's bead clinked, grounding him. Rafiq had warned of the Nightblades—Kadir's elite enforcers, once Kirin Blade masters, now corrupted, wielding jade-veined kerises and the Umbral Veil, a relic that summoned the Tide Serpent, a colossal leviathan of jade scales and coral fangs. The air grew heavy, the ley lines roaring, and Rentap's scars ached, the Kirin's rune flaring, a vision flickering: a coral altar, the Tide Serpent rising, Kadir's shadowed keris gleaming, Idris and Hafiz at his side.

A sudden clash shattered the silence—the Nightblades, four corrupted masters led by Idris and Hafiz, ambushing from a coral ledge. Idris's coral keris blazed, jade energy flaring, summoning Nexus shades from the mist. "You'll drown here, Blood Island!" Idris roared, his blade slashing, joined by Hafiz and the Nightblades, their kerises glowing with tainted jade. Rentap's heart pounded, Taming Jiwa flaring, and he shouted, "Form up!" Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik drew their kerises, their jade waves syncing with his. The shades lunged, their claws slashing, jade venom bursting in anime-style arcs, while Idris, Hafiz, and the Nightblades struck, their blades a storm.

Rentap rolled right, coral scraping his knee's scrape, and wove Storm Claw, Taming Jiwa slashing in a crescent arc, jade waves cleaving a shade's claw. The impact jarred his shoulder's cut, blood seeping, but a Nightblade's keris slashed, weaving Iron Surge, nicking Rentap's arm, a new cut bleeding, venom burning. Aisha flanked left, her coral-etched keris powering Star Whisper, jade waves rippling, striking a shade's side, but Idris's blade grazed her thigh, a new cut dripping. Rizwan charged, his humming keris slashing with Storm Claw, coral shards spraying, but Hafiz's blade struck his chest, a new bruise blooming. Sari's jade-energy keris wove Sky Fang, cleaving a shade, while Malik's storm-rune keris blocked a Nightblade, storm runes flaring.

Rentap's vision flickered—Jaya's blade uniting allies—and he shouted, "As one!" syncing with his team. They moved together, Star Whisper weaving their jade waves, ley lines roaring. Rentap struck with Sky Fang, Taming Jiwa thrusting at a shade's chest, jade light bursting. Aisha's Veil Tide cloaked her, dodging a Nightblade's slash, her keris nicking their shoulder. Rizwan's Iron Surge powered a downward slash, coral dust choking the air, cleaving a shade. Sari's Storm Claw struck another, but a shade's claw grazed her arm, blood seeping. Malik's Iron Surge disarmed a Nightblade, their keris clattering, but Idris's blade nicked his side, venom burning.

The Tide Serpent rose from the spire's base, its colossal form towering, jade scales and coral fangs gleaming, its roar shaking the coral. The Umbral Veil pulsed on a Nightblade's chest, the betrayer's mark glowing. Rentap led the charge, Taming Jiwa blazing, dodging a fang strike, coral scraping his shin's scrape. He struck with Storm Claw, jade waves clashing with the Serpent's scales, the impact jarring his thigh's cut, blood dripping. The Serpent's tail slashed, grazing Rentap's side, a new cut burning, venom searing, coral dust stinging his eyes. Aisha's Star Whisper struck its flank, but a fang nicked her chest, blood dripping, venom slowing her. Rizwan's Sky Fang pierced its side, but a tail struck his shoulder, a new cut bleeding. Sari and Malik fought Nightblades and shades, their kerises a storm, but Idris and Hafiz pressed Rentap, their blades relentless.

Rentap roared, Veil Tide cloaking him, and struck with Star Whisper, Taming Jiwa slashing a Nightblade's guard, jade waves surging, forcing them back. Aisha's Iron Surge disarmed Hafiz, his keris clattering, while Rizwan's Storm Claw drove Idris to retreat, his sneer venomous. The team synced, Star Whisper weaving their jade waves, and targeted the Umbral Veil—Rentap's Sky Fang, Aisha's Veil Tide, Rizwan's Iron Surge, Sari's Storm Claw, Malik's Sky Fang—striking the Nightblade's chest. Jade light erupted, the Veil shattering, the Serpent collapsing into coral mist, the shades dissolving, the ley lines calming.

The spire stilled, the coral altar glowing softly, the Umbral Veil's fragments scattered, pulsing faintly with purified jade. Rentap panted, Taming Jiwa heavy, his side's new cut bleeding, arm, thigh, shoulder, and side cuts throbbing, venom's burn fading, shin and knee scrapes raw. Aisha steadied herself, her thigh and chest bloodied, her keris sheathed. Rizwan grinned, wiping blood from his shoulder and chest, his keris humming softly. Sari and Malik nodded, bloodied but standing, their kerises steady. Idris, Hafiz, and the Nightblades had fled, leaving a coral scroll etched with Kadir's rune, its script deepening his ambition: to reshape the Nexus into a weapon, wielding its tides to dominate Nusantara.

Zainah met them at the Nexus Crown, her nod sharp, her voice firm. "You destroyed the Veil, Rentap. Kadir's vision is a plague. The rune points to the Veiled Bastion. Hunt him, novices, or Kerisforge falls."

Amira's staff pulsed, her voice stern. "Kadir's madness threatens the Nexus's heart. Train, Rentap, Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, Malik. The Nexus rests on you."

Rentap's scars burned, the coral orb flaring, a vision lingering—Kadir, his shadowed keris gleaming, Jaya and Mira falling, his rune pulsing with dominion. Aisha's hand touched his arm, her voice calm. "We're closer, Rentap. The Nexus will thwart Kadir's weapon."

Rizwan's grin was fierce, his keris tight. "Kadir's crumbling, Blood Island. We'll carve his ruin."

Rentap nodded, Taming Jiwa sheathed, the rune pouch and Lila's bead grounding him. Kerisforge's spires loomed, coral halls alive with purpose. His vow burned brighter—find Kadir, protect the Nexus, honor Jaya and Mira. The Tide Serpent was defeated, but Kadir's ambition and Idris's trail grew sharper, a tide surging. Rentap Buana, Kirin Blade novice, stood with Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik, ready to face it, the Nexus's light their guide.

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