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Chapter 23 - Chronicle Of Taming Jiwa & Rentap Buana

Phase 1: Rise of the Orphan Blade

Chapter 5: The Cost of Betrayal

Part 3: The Jade Hollow

Kerisforge Stronghold stood defiant under a sky fractured by jade tempests, its coral spires pulsing with the Nexus's relentless tides, where Rentap Buana's vow faced a traitor's shadow that loomed with the hunger of sacrifice. At sixteen, he was a Kirin Blade novice, scarred but resolute, Taming Jiwa blazing at his side, its seven waves radiating jade fire. The rusted kerambit at his hip whispered of Jaya and Mira's betrayal, their plea—find them—etched in his scars: kirin's mark on his chest, cuts on his forearm, thigh, bicep, shoulder, side, a second forearm cut, a second thigh cut, a second side cut, a third side cut, an arm cut, a second side cut, a second shoulder cut, a third side cut, a fourth side cut, a third shoulder cut, a fifth side cut, a sixth side cut, a seventh side cut, an eighth side cut, a ninth side cut, a tenth side cut, a bruise on his side, scrapes on his shin and knee. The coral orb in his pouch thrummed, the rune pouch and Lila's bead clinking softly, anchoring him as ley lines roared beneath the fortress. Rentap had faced wraiths, rivals, the Starlit Kirin's Shade, adepts, Idris's ambushes, the Jade Veil, the Tide Wraith, the Starlit Warden, the Coral Leviathan, the Shade Weaver, the Crest Warden, the Shadow Carver, the Tidebreaker, the Void Sentries, the Nightblades, the Shade Vanguard, the Eclipse Reavers, Kadir, the Crest Wardens, and the Veil Sentinels, his bond with Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik a steel forged in blood. Now, the Starlit Kirin's rune burned in his mind, urging him to pursue Elder Kadir, Idris, and Hafiz to the Jade Hollow, where the betrayer's rune pulsed, and a mission loomed, promising truth or ruin. As coral halls crackled with urgency, Rentap stepped toward the storm, Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik at his side, their kerises ready, the Nexus's light their guide.

The novices' quarters were a haze of coral bunks and jade-lit lanterns, the air thick with salt and the weight of Kadir's Storm Crown. Rentap's wounds ached, bandaged but raw, the mantra Ya Rahman, Ya Rahim steadying his breath. Visions haunted him—Jaya's blade uniting allies, Mira's plea, Kadir's cloaked form wielding a shadowed keris, his rune glowing with plans to bind Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik's essences to fuel the Storm Crown, a relic to dominate Nusantara's tides. Aisha's calm resolve, Rizwan's fierce loyalty, Sari's swift precision, and Malik's unyielding strength anchored him, their unity a flame in Kerisforge's crucible. At midnight, Elder Amira's starlit staff tapped the coral floor, summoning them to the Jade Vault, a subterranean chamber carved into the stronghold's depths, its walls pulsing with jade veins, its floor a coral mosaic swirling with Nexus sigils. Master Zainah stood at the vault's heart, her coral armor glinting, joined by Adept Rafiq, his jade-etched keris a silent sentinel. Kadir's betrayal, deepened by the Coral Veil's rune scroll, hung heavy. The ley lines roared, the coral orb flaring in Rentap's pouch, Taming Jiwa pulsing fiercely.

Amira's voice cut through the vault's hum, urgent and commanding. "Rentap Buana, Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, Malik—Kadir, Idris, and Hafiz hide in the Jade Hollow, guided by the betrayer's rune. Kadir's enforcers, the Hollow Enforcers, wield a corrupted relic, the Crest Ember, summoning a Nexus entity, the Jade Phantom. Hunt them, destroy the Ember, or Kerisforge falls."

Rentap gripped Taming Jiwa, its pulse syncing with his heart, the coral orb amplifying the ley lines' roar. Aisha's coral-etched keris gleamed, her braid tight, eyes steady. Rizwan's humming keris swung loosely, his grin sharp but tense. Sari's jade-energy keris crackled, her stance fluid, while Malik's storm-rune keris glowed, his gaze resolute. The betrayer's rune scroll, recovered from the Coral Veil, lay on the mosaic, its script pointing to the Jade Hollow and Kadir's Storm Crown. Rentap's scars burned, but his vow held firm—find Kadir, protect the Nexus, honor Jaya and Mira. The vault's ley lines surged, and Rentap stepped forward, ready to face the Hollow.

The Jade Hollow was a cavernous expanse of coral pillars and jade-lit tides, carved into the Shadowed Isle's core, where the Nexus's tides converged in a radiant maelstrom. Rentap led Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik through jagged paths, Taming Jiwa glowing, its jade light cutting through the gloom. The coral orb thrummed, guiding them toward the Crest Ember's pulse, while the rune pouch and Lila's bead clinked, grounding him. Rafiq had warned of the Hollow Enforcers—corrupted Kirin Blade adepts under Kadir's command, wielding jade-veined kerises and the Crest Ember, which summoned the Jade Phantom, a spectral entity of jade flames and coral claws. The air grew heavy, the ley lines roaring, and Rentap's scars ached, the Kirin's rune flaring, a vision flickering: a coral shrine, the Jade Phantom rising, Kadir's shadowed keris gleaming, Idris and Hafiz at his side.

A sudden clash shattered the silence—the Hollow Enforcers, six corrupted adepts led by Idris and Hafiz, ambushing from a coral pillar. Idris's coral keris blazed, jade energy flaring, summoning Nexus shades from the mist. "You'll burn here, Blood Island!" Idris roared, his blade slashing, joined by Hafiz and the Enforcers, their kerises glowing with tainted jade. Rentap's heart pounded, Taming Jiwa flaring, and he shouted, "Form up!" Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik drew their kerises, their jade waves syncing with his. The shades lunged, their claws slashing, jade venom bursting in anime-style arcs, while Idris, Hafiz, and the Enforcers struck, their blades a storm.

Rentap rolled left, coral scraping his shin's scrape, and wove Storm Claw, Taming Jiwa slashing in a crescent arc, jade waves cleaving a shade's claw. The impact jarred his shoulder's cut, blood seeping, but an Enforcer's keris slashed, weaving Iron Surge, nicking Rentap's arm, a new cut bleeding, venom burning. Aisha flanked right, her coral-etched keris powering Star Whisper, jade waves rippling, striking a shade's side, but Idris's blade grazed her thigh, a new cut dripping. Rizwan charged, his humming keris slashing with Storm Claw, coral shards spraying, but Hafiz's blade struck his chest, a new bruise blooming. Sari's jade-energy keris wove Sky Fang, cleaving a shade, while Malik's storm-rune keris blocked an Enforcer, storm runes flaring.

Rentap's vision flickered—Jaya's blade uniting allies—and he shouted, "As one!" syncing with his team. They moved together, Star Whisper weaving their jade waves, ley lines roaring. Rentap struck with Sky Fang, Taming Jiwa thrusting at a shade's chest, jade light bursting. Aisha's Veil Tide cloaked her, dodging an Enforcer's slash, her keris nicking their shoulder. Rizwan's Iron Surge powered a downward slash, coral dust choking the air, cleaving a shade. Sari's Storm Claw struck another, but a shade's claw grazed her leg, blood seeping. Malik's Iron Surge disarmed an Enforcer, their keris clattering, but Idris's blade nicked his side, venom burning.

The Jade Phantom rose from the tides, its spectral form towering, jade flames and coral claws glowing, its roar shaking the pillars. The Crest Ember pulsed on an Enforcer's chest, the betrayer's mark glowing. Rentap led the charge, Taming Jiwa blazing, dodging a claw strike, coral scraping his knee's scrape. He struck with Storm Claw, jade waves clashing with the Phantom's claw, the impact jarring his thigh's cut, blood dripping. The Phantom's flames slashed, grazing Rentap's side, a new cut burning, venom searing, coral dust stinging his eyes. Aisha's Star Whisper struck its flank, but a claw nicked her chest, blood dripping, venom slowing her. Rizwan's Sky Fang pierced its side, but a flame struck his shoulder, a new cut bleeding. Sari and Malik fought Enforcers and shades, their kerises a storm, but Idris and Hafiz pressed Rentap, their blades relentless.

Rentap roared, Veil Tide cloaking him, and struck with Star Whisper, Taming Jiwa slashing an Enforcer's guard, jade waves surging, forcing them back. Aisha's Iron Surge disarmed Hafiz, his keris clattering, while Rizwan's Storm Claw drove Idris to retreat, his sneer venomous. The team synced, Star Whisper weaving their jade waves, and targeted the Crest Ember—Rentap's Sky Fang, Aisha's Veil Tide, Rizwan's Iron Surge, Sari's Storm Claw, Malik's Sky Fang—striking the Enforcer's chest. Jade light erupted, the Ember shattering, the Phantom dissolving into coral mist, the shades vanishing, the ley lines calming.

The Jade Hollow stilled, the coral shrine glowing softly, the Crest Ember's fragments scattered, pulsing faintly with purified jade. Rentap panted, Taming Jiwa heavy, his side's new cut bleeding, arm, thigh, shoulder, and side cuts throbbing, venom's burn fading, shin and knee scrapes raw. Aisha steadied herself, her thigh and chest bloodied, her keris sheathed. Rizwan grinned, wiping blood from his shoulder and chest, his keris humming softly. Sari and Malik nodded, bloodied but standing, their kerises steady. Idris, Hafiz, and the Enforcers had fled, leaving a coral tablet etched with Kadir's rune, its script revealing the Storm Crown's design: a relic to bind the essences of Kirin Blade novices, with Rentap himself as the final sacrifice to unleash its full power.

Zainah met them at the Jade Vault, her nod sharp, her voice firm. "You destroyed the Ember, Rentap. Kadir's Crown is a death sentence. The rune points to the Storm Bastion. Hunt him, novices, or Kerisforge falls."

Amira's staff pulsed, her voice stern. "Kadir's ambition consumes the Nexus's soul. Train, Rentap, Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, Malik. The Nexus rests on you."

Rentap's scars burned, the coral orb flaring, a vision lingering—Kadir, his shadowed keris gleaming, Jaya and Mira's essence fading, his rune pulsing with malice. Aisha's hand touched his arm, her voice calm. "He won't have you, Rentap. The Nexus will shatter his Crown."

Rizwan's grin was fierce, his keris tight. "Kadir's crumbling, Blood Island. We'll carve his ruin."

Rentap nodded, Taming Jiwa sheathed, the rune pouch and Lila's bead grounding him. Kerisforge's spires loomed, coral halls alive with purpose. His vow burned brighter—find Kadir, protect the Nexus, honor Jaya and Mira. The Jade Phantom was defeated, but Kadir's Storm Crown and Idris's trail grew sharper, a tide surging. Rentap Buana, Kirin Blade novice, stood with Aisha, Rizwan, Sari, and Malik, ready to face it, the Nexus's light their guide.

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