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the Overseer

this is my first book and it starts out as a huge info dump as well as barely any interactions, though it gets better in chapter 13 ============================ Jaxon has a normal life, he’s in school and has normal grades. He doesn’t want to be exceptional, that would only bring unnecessary drama. one day during spring break, as he was walking home, a truck suddenly ran into him as he was on the sidewalk. “it wasn’t that suprising, it happens everyday. I was just unlucky.” Jaxon thought as his conciseness faded. “at least I’m not a special person, who some how lives after that.” “oh but you are special, just not like that” a voice ringed out. it turns out he was special, and got to reincarnate, one of the best things he could think of to happen after dying. he didn’t like the transmigration stories because they couldn’t spend their infancy studying magic or any other things. he was born as Logan, in the Null family, he had 2 sisters and 1 brother. there were not any royal familes in his country, only elite familes. consisting of four familes. Logan’s exeled in magic, as well as swordsmanship, leading him to go to the knights academy, however he wanted to study magic so he decided to tell the headmasters of each school that he excels in magic and swordsmanship. he faces tragedies, and continues to grow as well as gaining relationships, though it appeared futile, later in the war against demons. —————————————————— the story won’t go premium and I am just looking for feedback on my writing note: the different novels are signifying the end of a arc
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Gods of Pangaeos

In the mist before GENESIS, Fate and Chance and Others cast tolls upon their names, while the chalice did burn and churn whose crown should be. And he that won strode through the mist unto YOD-VAV-HEH and cried: “Lo, wake upon the mist and create the heavens and the earth and make gods for me, for I have won over the crown and thy mist is mine to rule.” And so as the cry was heard Fate and Chance and Others bowed, But whether it was Fate or Chance or Another that won the cast of the tolls before GENESIS—none-knoweth. .............................................................. Welcome to Gods of Pangaeos. ​This work is a reimagining of the creation myth, written as a stylistic marriage between the liturgical structure of Genesis and the high-fantasy, rhythmic prose of Lord Dunsany’s The Gods of Pegāna. ​In this world, the Creator is a sleeper, and the world we know is merely a "Game" played by smaller, whimsical deities during His slumber. You will find echoes of our own earth’s deep past—Pangaea, Panthalassa, and Gondwana—woven into a tapestry of myth and "The Word." ​A Note on Style: The text uses archaic phrasing and repetitive structures to mimic ancient holy books. If the gods seem cruel or indifferent, remember: to them, we are but the pieces on a board. ​I hope you enjoy the "Game." ​Art Disclaimer ​Cover Illustration: "MANA-YOOD-SUSHAI" by Sidney Sime (1906). ​ ​Note on the Artwork: The illustration used for this cover is a masterpiece by Sidney Sime, originally created for Lord Dunsany’s The Gods of Pegāna. As this artwork was published over 100 years ago, it resides in the Public Domain. ​While the image originally depicted the deity Mana-Yood-Sushai, it has been chosen for this work to represent the Great Stillness of YOD-VAV-HEH. I use this art as a tribute to the golden age of mythic illustration that inspired the tone of Gods of Pangaeos.
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