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Chapter 1 - entrance gate

Pov : as an ordinary man, my eyes are on the side of Rinnegan and next to Mangekyo* *right in front of the gate I entered the village.. People don't know I have these eyes yet*

The great gate of Konoha looms before you. The breeze plays with the tip of the dirty robe you're wearing, disguising your appearance as an ordinary wanderer. Behind the headscarf or hair that slightly covers the face, there are secrets that can shake up the world order: the Mangekyo Sharingan on one side, and the Rinnegan water ripple pattern on the other.

Here is the narrative of your initial arrival:

Arrival at the Main Gate

Two legendary gatekeepers, Izumo and Kotetsu, appeared to be relaxing behind their registration desks. They notice you walking closer with a calm step. To you, you're just a man who wants to find shelter, but to them, you're just one of the many travelers passing by.

"Stop there, young man," Kotetsu said as he held out a form sheet. "The purpose of the visit? And please take off your head covering for identity checks."

You take a deep breath. With a slow movement, you lower the hood of your robe. You keep your eyelids shy, hiding the actual pupils so that they look like ordinary black eyes under the shadow of your hair.

"Only nomads are looking for temporary work," you replied succinctly.

Unexpected Encounters

Just as Izumo was about to stamp your entry permit, a strong presence was felt from behind the gate. A silver-haired man with a mask covering half of his face walked out. Kakashi Hatake.

Kakashi's steps come to a halt right next to you. As a fellow special eye user, his instincts were very sharp. He felt an unusually large yet extremely calm chakra pressure—like a deep ocean hiding monsters at its bottom.

"Is there a problem, Izumo?" asked Kakashi, his dim but wary eyes staring at you sharply.

"Just an ordinary wanderer, Kakashi-san. Everything looks clean," Izumo replied.

Kakashi was silent for a moment, staring at you for a few seconds that felt like a very long time. You stay calm, keeping your heart rate unchanged.

"Welcome to Konoha," Kakashi said finally, though his tone implied doubt. "Make sure you don't make any trouble, because this village has its own way of dealing with 'surprises'."

Entering the Village

You step through the giant wooden gate. Around you, villagers are passing by cheerfully. Children were running around, and the smell of ramen from Ichiraku's shop was strong. They didn't know that the man they had just crossed paths with had the power of "God" and "Devil" behind his eyelids.

As you walk down the main streets, you realize that keeping this secret won't be easy. The energy from your Rinnegan is constantly pulsing, as if reacting with the natural energy around the village.

Pov : *I went to Ichiraku's shop and ate, opened my blindfold* Hoaamm.. Ramen 2 bowls and ice

You step into the warm Ichiraku shop. The savory smell of broth greets you, giving you a momentary sense of calm amid the weight of the power you're carrying. There, there are only a few customers, and Teuchi—the owner of the shop—is busy preparing the noodles deftly.

"Ah, welcome! Please sit down, young man," Teuchi greeted with his characteristic friendly smile.

You sit on the cornermost wooden chair, a little away from the other customers. Fatigue after a long trip makes your alertness decrease slightly. With a relaxed movement, you lean back and let out a deep sigh.

"Friend.. Ramen two bowls and ice," you say slowly but clearly.

While waiting for your order, you subconsciously wipe the sweat off your face and open your blindfold completely to provide air circulation. You feel relieved because you can finally open your eyes without any cloth getting in the way.

Tense Moments

Just then, the curtains of the shop opened. A blonde young man in an orange jacket walked in with explosive enthusiasm.

"Uncle! I ordered the usual one, a large portion—"

Naruto's sentence stopped instantly. His steps freeze in front of the bench right next to you. His blue eyes widened as he involuntarily turned his head towards you.

At the same time, Teuchi who was about to deliver your iced tea was also silent on the spot. The ice glass he was holding shook slightly. Out of the corner of your eye, you can feel a drastic change in mood. The room that had been warm suddenly felt cold and heavy.

Impossible Vision

In their eyes, you are no longer an "ordinary man". The dim light of the shop lights reflects clearly in both your eyes:

On the left, the legendary purple water ripple pattern—Rinnegan.

On the right, an intricate and sharp red star pattern—the Mangekyo Sharingan.

Naruto is no longer a clueless little boy. As someone who had dealt with Pain and knew Sasuke well, he knew exactly what he was looking at. Naruto's hand slowly moved towards the shuriken pouch behind his waist, but his eyes remained locked on yours, looking for malice or hostility.

"You..." Naruto's voice sounded low and serious, in stark contrast to his cheerfulness a few seconds ago. "Who are you really? And why do you have those eyes?"

Teuchi remained silent, but cold sweat poured down his temples. Outside the shop, the night wind blew, making the ichiraku curtain flutter slowly, as if to signal that your calm has just ended.

Me : "I'm Eating, What Do You Mean?"

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