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Chapter 13 - The Edge of Consciousness

Mukesh's condition kept getting worse.

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The fever didn't go down.

His body felt heavy.

Breathing became difficult.

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Finally—

his mother took him to a medical clinic.

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The moment the doctor saw him—

his expression changed.

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"He needs to be admitted."

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Mukesh heard those words faintly.

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"…Admitted?"

He whispered.

"…It's not that serious…"

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But no one listened.

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This wasn't the first time he had come there.

Long ago—

he had been here for another illness.

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But this time—

it was different.

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He was taken inside a room.

Placed on a bed.

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The smell of medicine.

The silence.

The white walls.

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Mukesh looked around weakly.

"…I don't like this place."

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A doctor came in.

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"Hold his hand."

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His mother gently held his arm.

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The doctor started searching for a vein.

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Mukesh flinched.

"…It hurts…"

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"Stay still," the doctor said.

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The needle pressed against his skin.

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Once.

Twice.

Again.

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But they couldn't find it.

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Mukesh's eyes filled with tears.

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"…Stop… please…"

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The needle went in again.

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"…It hurts… it really hurts…"

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He was still just a child.

Only 12 years old.

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His fingers tightened.

His voice broke—

"…I don't want this…"

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Finally—

after several tries—

the doctor found a vein.

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The needle went in.

And this time—

it stayed.

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A glucose bottle was attached.

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Mukesh looked at it.

"…What is this…?"

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"Glucose," his mother said softly.

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But something was wrong.

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The liquid didn't flow properly.

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Drop by drop.

Slow.

Painfully slow.

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One day passed.

Then another.

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It took two full days

for just one bottle to finish.

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Mukesh lay there.

Weak.

Barely moving.

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Day 3…

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He was staring at the ceiling.

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His eyes were open.

But they didn't feel like his anymore.

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"…Why can't I close them properly…?"

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His vision started fading.

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"…Everything… is going away…"

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His eyes slowly rolled upward.

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He couldn't control them.

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"…What's happening to me…?"

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It felt like—

he was losing control over his own body.

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Like someone else was taking over.

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Like everything was ending.

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Then suddenly—

he blinked.

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Everything came back.

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He gasped lightly.

"…I'm okay…"

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His mother, sitting beside him—

was terrified.

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"What's happening to you?"

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Mukesh looked at her.

Trying to stay normal.

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"…Nothing."

"…My eyes are always like this."

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He lied.

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Because even he didn't understand what was happening.

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But his mother knew—

something was very wrong.

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Her hands trembled.

Her mind was restless.

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What should I do…?

Where should I take him…?

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Day 4…

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She finally called his father.

Who was in India.

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Her voice was shaking.

She told him everything.

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Mukesh listened quietly.

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From the other side—

his father said—

"Do whatever treatment is possible there."

"But first… take him to the biggest government hospital."

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His mother nodded.

Even though he couldn't see it.

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"…Okay."

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Later that day—

the needle was removed from Mukesh's hand.

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The moment it came out—

he felt a sharp pain.

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"…Ah—!"

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He looked at his hand.

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A small hole had formed.

Deep.

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"…What is this…?"

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No one answered.

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He was taken home.

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But things didn't improve.

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He stopped eating.

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Completely.

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His mother made khichdi for him.

Every day.

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"Eat a little."

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Mukesh turned his face away.

"…I don't want it."

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"Just a few bites."

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"…No."

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It wasn't just the food.

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He had lost interest in everything.

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He lay down in his room.

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The ceiling felt distant.

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And then—

the dreams started.

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Strange.

Empty.

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He saw himself—

standing alone on a silent mountain.

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No sound.

No people.

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"…Why am I alone?"

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Then—

a forest.

Dark.

Endless.

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He was standing in the middle.

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"…Where do I go…?"

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But there was no answer.

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The feeling…

was something he couldn't explain.

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Fear.

Loneliness.

Emptiness.

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All mixed together.

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He woke up.

Sweating.

Breathing heavily.

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"…What was that…?"

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But even he couldn't describe it.

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Days passed like this.

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Lying on the bed.

Not eating.

Not speaking much.

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Just existing.

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And somewhere deep inside—

it felt like he was slowly drifting away.

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Without understanding why.

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Without knowing what was happening.

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And without being able to stop it.

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