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Chapter 3 - When the Script Decides to Spill Blood

The war didn't begin with a cry.

It began with a typo.

In the Capital's records, a small report was written:

"Narrative Disruption – Low Level – Eldroin Village."

It should have been:

"Catastrophic Level."

But the word slipped.

And that slip… cost hundreds of lives.

A royal squadron of fifty knights was sent.

Not to investigate.

To cleanse.

In this world, when something goes off script… it is removed.

Commander Raven himself led the squadron.

And beside him…

Elmira.

She didn't know why she'd been chosen.

But the words above her glowed intensely:

"She will witness the beginning of the war."

In Eldroin…

Cerith sensed them before he saw them.

Fifty sentences moving in one direction.

Fifty similar fates:

"He will die in the performance of his duty."

He froze.

All of them?

He mentally touched one of the distant sentences.

It was solid.

Written in deep ink.

Not like the villagers' sentences.

This one…is fixed.

He took a step back.

Now they understood.

The text began to move against him.

The horsemen arrived at sunset.

The sky was red.

Not poetic.

More like a warning.

The villagers came out in terror.

Raven didn't shout.

He didn't threaten.

He coldly read a royal decree:

"Due to a disturbance in the structure of reality, the area will be cleansed to prevent the spread of the distortion."

A woman fell to her knees.

"We did nothing!"

Elmira was looking around.

Something in her chest tightened.

The sentence above her trembled for the first time.

"She will triumph."

But…over whom?

The first sword was drawn.

Then the second.

Then fifty.

It wasn't a fight.

It was a systematic slaughter.

The small village didn't last a minute. The houses were ablaze.

The children screamed.

And the blood…

Was so real.

Cereth stood amidst the chaos.

Unmoving.

Every sentence above every head glowed.

"He dies here."

"He burns."

"His name will not be spoken."

He could change some of them.

But fifty?

All at once?

Impossible.

A child ran toward him.

Marn.

Who wanted to be a knight.

The arrow pierced his chest before it reached him.

Marn looked at Sereth… stunned.

"I was… I was going to be…"

And he fell.

The sentence above him no longer said, "He will fall many times."

But:

"He is finished here."

Cereth didn't cry.

He didn't scream.

He just looked at the words.

Then… he reached out.

Not to one sentence.

To the ground.

To the whole page.

Elmira saw something she would never forget.

The air above the village… began to crack.

Not a small crack.

A massive tear.

As if the sky itself were a page being pulled apart.

Retcons began to pour in.

Dozens.

Then hundreds.

Not because Cerith summoned them.

But because the script… was no longer holding together.

One of the knights cried out as black words swirled around him.

"He was not meant to survive."

His body turned to liquid ink.

Raven charged, slicing through the entities.

Elmira fought alongside him.

Every strike of hers… lit up.

As if the script itself were protecting her.

A colossal retcon shot toward her.

It struck her.

She should have died.

But her words ignited:

"She will win."

The retcon disintegrated.

Elmira gasped.

She saw the boy at last.

In the middle of the burning village.

Standing.

Calm.

His eyes did not reflect the fire.

But emptiness.

Cereth no longer edited the individuals' sentences.

Instead, he wrote a single sentence across the entire space:

"This shall not be as written."

The ground shook.

The knights began to fall.

Not because of Retcons.

But because their sentences began to change randomly.

"Dies in the performance of his duty."

It became

"Dies."

Then

"He should not have come."

Chaos spiraled out of control.

Raven realized the truth.

"He is the source!"

He lunged at Sereth.

His sword was a step away.

Cereth looked up at him.

He saw the commander's sentence clearly:

"Dies defending the heroine."

Cereth hesitated.

If he erased it…

So much would fall apart.

But he wasn't a child anymore.

He said quietly,

"You don't die for her."

And he erased "Dies."

Raven stopped abruptly.

His sword fell from his hand.

He knelt.

Breathing heavily. Alive.

But aimlessly.

The sentence above his head now:

"He doesn't know what to do."

Elmira screamed his name.

She ran toward him.

And then—

The world… stopped.

Everything froze.

Fire in the air.

Blood mid-fall.

Retcons hung like distorted paintings.

Only one person didn't freeze.

Cereth.

And one other.

Elmira.

Looking at each other for the first time.

Up close.

Without a sound.

The words above her were too bright.

"She will win."

Above his head… chaos.

"—cause—"

"—error—"

"—rewrite—"

Elmira whispered:

"You did this."

Cereth answered with chilling calm:

"No. I just removed what was going to happen."

"You killed them."

"The text killed them."

Silence.

Then he added:

"And you… you would always have survived."

For the first time in her life… she felt guilty.

Because she knew he was right.

She would have survived.

Even if everyone else had died.

The sentence above her didn't change.

Not a single letter.

In the distant white sky…

The pen moved violently.

"Containment failed."

"Phase 2 accelerated."

Then…

A new sentence, written for the first time in centuries:

"Declaration of War."

The world froze. It began to crumble.

Time reversed.

Chaos exploded twice over.

A giant Retcon formed from the ruins of the village.

Not to fix the mistake.

But to annihilate the source.

Cerith looked at Elmira.

He said:

"If you're a hero…

Stop it."

Then he added to himself a very short sentence:

"Survive again."

He stood facing the entity.

Elmira was beside him.

Not allies.

But two sides in a battle they didn't fully understand.

The golden sword gleams.

The sky is tearing apart.

And the war… has truly begun.

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